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dheeraj_reddy
Nice story with excellent service.
I like having smart, cunning Mc. Long chapters.
I hope you will continue to write more chapters
please keep up the good work
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Kurookami
Why do they write fanfic? For the fact that the canon will change! And the author goes according to the canon and he is too passive (and he is a coward in my opinion (he does not fight even if the opponent is stronger than him)). I don't see mc as a cool character.
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Saint_fourty_seven
Pardon me, english isnt my first language. Imo, this is one of the best op fanfic out there. I know some people will complain about mc following the straw hat or being beta, mc isnt beta, he followed the straw hat for the purpose of levelling up. One thing tho, the author freaking nerf the 3 admirals, i dont think the mc will easily defeat aokiji n akainu. I hope you continue this fanfic
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jhomz00
shitty novel. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . .weak beta shit . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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sinful_life
I read 109 chapters and my intake on this fanfic is that it is one of the best one peice fanfic and one very good quality. I have ever read and I tell you I read a lot of fanfic .
The best qualities are: long chapters , logical actions of mc , steady progression of skill ,character & storyline and best of all he makes me fell relatable emotions and confusions of a stranded person looking for a place in this strage and unfamiliar world.
the bad points here are : the naivety and immaturity of mc ,the mc is a little too attached to the strawhats , mc is too indecisiveness of his action & desires/dreams and worst point the time he waste π explaining his history and actions to anyone even when he doesn't need to focus on this in a anime world π€ where literally anything could happen (please make him less wimpy and more manly/intelligent )
personal wishes : please π complete this fanfic and please add harem not let mc just choose one girl and be with her out of nowhere (seriously with his status no one girl could satisfy him alone) he has also good relationships with a lot of girls as base as well .
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victor_dupretz
More chapter please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
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origin_seth
i dont care what people say..
whats wrong being with straw hats crew ?
just aditional OC character on the OG crew, its interesting enough.
every one piece FF i read, either separate or destroy the plot, IDC either way..
this just look like enjoy the story with OG crew, heck i would do that too if i go to O-P World.
its funny and its exiting, watch they journey beside them,.
hpe Author just stay with Mugawara kaizoku-dan.
its just, the OC/MC is little annoying tbh,. first, if he want to be strong he could start ahead and refuse to join team,.
separating its not enjoy,
dont get influence by other hot-bloody people.
just do your story. IDC even you copy or whtevr it is,.
for me, it look like he watch real crew rather than on Monitor,
good Job bro. keep the good work of your FF.
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HerPingus
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BlankReader
If you want to read a Really good, like Really Really Good Written one-piece fanfiction than consider this fanfic "one-piece this bites" just search it up using that name and I promise you it will blow your sock off
It, not an op mc, not a system, not a genius fighter, or anything.
It about a guy that wishes to be in One piece than he appears in one piece but with his body like a normal body of a normal person on Earth which is super weak compare to the normal body of any person on One Piece, like one hit from Nami would knock him out for about Five minutes
I don't know how to actually make a better synopsis than what is above but just give it a chance and read it, "one-piece this bites" will 100% not disappoint you
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AllSeeingBedroom
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TGfred
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Blazing_moon
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Kpnovellover
what is happening man .... are you dropping this ????????????
atleast please tell us if you are dropping this........... tired of waiting for new chapter
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FunkyRooster
it's a good story. some parts are so-so but overall i enjoyed it...........................................................................................
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Jas_M
Loving this so far, cant wait for next chapters. Also merry Christmas and happy holidays. Any ideas when this will start getting new chapters?
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Kpnovellover
if you are dropping this atleast tell us so we won't wait for new chapter for two weeks like an idiot................................. . ..
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lax_009
when is the update coming????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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JRT02
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Kpnovellover
don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop
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Kpnovellover
want a new chapter want a new chapter want a new chapter want a new chapter want a new chapter want a new chapter want a new chapter want a new chapter want a new chapter want a new chapter want a new chapter want a new chapter
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SageOfSins
MC is a pussy that has excuse for every inactions and mistakes that he made...
for God sake think about urself for once...writer tells that MC will leave strawhats but for last 50 chps I read are filled witha carbon copy of original with mc being hounddog who worship every actions of strawhats....
Atleast skip till or fast pace till he gets the fruit and then start the story....
but no he wants to copy and waste every fucking minute we read it... so I am gonna give up and try other fanfics.
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SageOfSins
atleast try to skip till they are seperated.....or fast pace it untill then.
most then 20 chapters are trash that just got rebranded as fanfic by including a single more person that is even included in a conversation when they are right next to them..
and you don't have to try save someone if you know they are being saved by luffy just show MCis soft hearted writer just force an action is so cliche it borders on the wall of D.Trump.
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Ken_Molas
The best The best The best The best
The best The best The best The best
The best The best The best The best
The best The best The best The best
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Laciel_nightstar
ππππππππ awesome one piece fan fic pls don't drop it πππππππππππππππππππ keep going ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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g105x7max
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lax_009
greatest one piece fan-fic i ever read, mc is also amazing not a shallow mc. His power gain ia also steady and could be considered op. Overall its awesome
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lycke
very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
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YaBoyChris
Just One Piece tood from a doffetent perspective. Couldnβt even read to the grandline. Just so boring and such a passive, background character MC
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Ken_Molas
I love it and dont drop it
I love it and dont drop it
I love it and dont drop it
I love it and dont drop it
I love it and dont drop it
I love it and dont drop it
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