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I have read your story until ch 60 currently.
I feel much depression on the mc, and it kinda stupid and bit retarded with how I think.
He meet many people and bit exaggerated around girl if not cute then big boob.
He knew what he lacking and think he can overcome it with his the so called soon to be wife, and forget his own siblings.
Story is good and heart warming which i love to read and i hope this story goes on for many more chapters.............and i hope he gets together with his sister because i don't want to see her with other male character.
MC will not pick the women, the women will pick him. this would be so enjoyable to read if MC had a pair of balls. even after they get intimate he’s still awkward, which is incredibly unrealistic and outright stupid.
here’s to hoping MC changes but i doubt it. the story was enjoyable but i can’t stand the MC beta personality so i’ll be dropping it. but i’m sure there are some people out there that don’t mind it or maybe even enjoy it. good writing too. what a shame :(
Technically the story is sound, well written and the plot and pacing fine. Which pains me because content wise, its of questionable nature with an ***** man reincarnated in a typical shouta body that gets into plenty of ecchi situations with little girls.
I rated it 4/5 because I simply couldnt rate it lower than that since all the parts judged by the system are sound... That said. The author is definitely someone on a watch list judging by the content ft under aged girls and ecchi scenes as well as the fact that he feels the need to point out their ages in or near each ecchi scene.
The world, setting and everything else tough is just really good and well done which make it worth the read despite the fact that we're talking about pre schoolers here...
I manage by adding 10 years to their ages mentally but still.. Im inclined to dropr the story because it just doesn't sit right by me.
Thus yes, if you're not disturbed by highly suspect stuff at pre school ages, then this is a fantastic read. Otherwise... I recommend not reading it.
The story is great. It would have been better if author didn't spend so much time on his childhood. I get it u want build the MC's character but 10 to 20 chapters of his childhood would have been enough. I almost dropped this when I saw he was still a child for so long,it got too boring
well, it's a good story to read but I can't support cowardly MCs even when they all come with the BS of being strong to protect the family and stuff like that but then he abandons them to just because he feels guilty...also the story is very slow-paced. because of this, I stopped reading. But if you're comfortable with the things I mention above then you should give a trie since the writing is very, very good and also the world background.
Give Me More Crapbasketz!! I love the bombshells this story drops and how curved the plot is!!! If I could say to anyone reading this right Now Go support the author 😉!!! Oh and it's Getting Spicy Up Here!! 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
Lots of potential. A good story could be great if more tragedy/massive war/conflict has him transcend his worthless self. MC is believable. Struggles with his character/personality from previous life. Not very apparent when younger but former personality comes out more as he ages. Looking forward to MC using more of his otherworldly knowledge to create more of his custom magic.
Well great story, but not for you that like light story and happy go lucky MC that always get what he wants, in this story you Will get the oposite of that, the MC don't have a great life rather tragic, when other novel presenting the novel that when the MC transmigrating to another world his/her life is already ruined by the villain, and MC Will slapp and kiled the vilain,
In this novel its the oposite when he Will get a great life at the start with loving parent, great Elder sister, youngest sister and even get girlfriend early when still children, and then whammmm, the author just killed off the MC parents, his girlfriend got separated, basicaly his life is ruined just like that, when we think this story is not like another novel of revenge and here we go again with another novel with revenge in it,
and usual story of separated lover that usually cannot meet each other at least 1.000 chapter long
With all drama that MC don't deserve the girl or the girl Will get fiance in great clan and the MC Will need to eradicate that clan, and after that the MC Will get together with his lover but wait what's that the MC lovers actually got posesed by evill person and here we go again the MC Will once again run around the world to save her,
Whew sorry for that, well this novel actually great but its not my number one choice, keep update this novel i believe there are some people that like this story so keep up the great work as for me, i am gonna drop it
Mc has cartoonish average japanese themed isekai personality. Personally i dont like that kind of mc and as such i end up not liking the story and wont read more of it. Nothing wrong with the story thou.
So if you like or tolerate that type of mc personality. Go for it and you might enjoy your time on the story.
A wonderful and fun novel full of different moments
Do you believe I used to think that his sister Erika was born again like him.
Unfortunately it did not happen
Will we know the secret of his incarnation in this world?
And yes to the harem
writing quality and other **** are all dope BUT MC is a beta,,,like this is an *****, that gets embarrassed by young girls,,,,yah its nasty. Then theres the fact that despite being an ***** in a kids body this dude aint special as ****,,,,,he is too weak.....dosnt make use of any SI modern world or anime knowledge to create spells, attacks or do anything......
then there are retarded moments where MC's sis get humiliated like getting stripped in public by some 15 yr old ***** but she does nothing but accept it cause of her pride...its retarded cause..
1) she has pride, she shouldnt allow it, its ironic that she allows such humiliation if she has pride...
2) she is a super genius able to out rank 15 yr old, who is a noble. my ass she wouldn't get some special privileges...
3) where the **** are the teachers?, they are allowing a 11 yr old child to get bullied to such an extent, even worse considering said child is a super genius.
There are many retarded moments like this that made me drop. BUT if u like a decent story with retarded moments and a beta MC...this is for u
I like the book a lot and it seems like it's a pretty serious story but something about it is killing me and its the... harem. Yup... Argh! it's frustrating not being able to immediately skip to the ending before re-reading it from the beginning after seeing your desired ending.
I'll guess I'll just wait until some pages will spoil the harem and the events for me.
Well, Good luck to the Author! Don't drop it!
I can not read more brother, I do not know how to feel this novel looks like the typical Japanese isekai I would not be surprised if in the next chapters the protagonist will tell his sister or his family that he reincarnated in that world, now I do not know how to feel with the MC, if I had to say it would be a typical Japanese MC, absolutely beta (probably because of the years he was alone in his first life, but the same is the same), the typical complex of I want to save someone, the typical blush with everything , and the typical Japanese MC who does not like physical training and only goes to the magic, as for the rest is fine, at least he is not the typical Gary stu but I do not like his personality, I would prefer that he be like Shiro Emiya if he heroes or at least pretend to be ridiculous, he blushes with an 8-year-old girl because, like this, a girl who is not even developed and the typical one is about 40 years old (literal), I mean no matter how virgin you are or how lonely you are I don't think someone you can be ashamed with an 8 year old girl.
Well that is all I did not put much of the novel so as not to give spoilers more see it but I do not like it, if I liked this type of novels I will see a Japanese novel good night