Reviews of A World Of Possibilities by FoxAuthor - Webnovel

This story has a pretty good concept. I've always liked fantasy stuff, and amnesiac characters are pretty good plot devices, but I've always felt they were good when their amnesia was used to sort of walk us through and allow the reader to rediscover their past or something like that, but this story follows an amnesiac 18 year old character just kind of existing, at least so far. Maybe that's not what you were aiming for with Azura but it kind of feels like that. This sort of ties in with the story feel. It feels as though there's at least to me. I sort of understand having to set everything up since your starting at the beginning of this kids life and its kind of hard trying to develop conflict for a young kid, but it's a bit boring to read normal family stuff. I believe that all great stories have conflict between characters but there's close to no conflict in this story. Adding some sort of tangible conflict to the story might help somewhat. Characters are a slight problem as well. Dialogue is a little stilted, but mostly the characters don't feel as if they have years long worth experience between them or that they talk outside of when the main character is there. Like I'm not sure who would just decide to name their child after giving birth and not during the months prior, but maybe that's just my inexperience with parentage. Anyway's I'm a pretty god damn bad writer, so I'd take this with a lot of salt. Good work so far.

Easy to read. Written in fresh language. There is humor. The title page attracts attention, but it is not copyright. The chapters are short, but easy to read. Although I'm already repeating myself. I liked the dialogs. They are not heavy, the text block is light, therefore there is no too much overload of the text with unnecessary information. The world in which the character lives is not yet entirely clear, it is not described in sufficient detail. But apparently the author will come to this a little later. Character character is revealed gradually. The synopsis does not indicate the frequency of updates. But judging by the data, updates happen spontaneously. In general, I can give 4.8 stars. What catches your eye is the ease of the text, the purity and freshness of the presentation of the material, about a seemingly battered topic. This is undoubtedly a big plus.