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TianYa
This is a gem!! πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»
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Smokerrrr
One of the best fanfiction I have ever read ....story plot is too good well balanced character not to overpowered unlike other fanfic one of the best thing chapter are long and enjoyable Only drawback story is in paragraph not in phrases
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MoonBlossom
Really love this story. I look forward to how it develops in the future. Thank you for your hard work and I hope that you continue writing kore chapters. I really want to know what happens for this and I'll be anxiously waiting. Thank you!
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Obadify17
Best Naruto Fanfic I have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I definitely love how the story and characters are progressing. Keep up the good work man!!!!!!!! I'm craving for more!!!!!
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starking
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
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jhonnybravo721
One of the best fanfics on webnovel............. The Top....................................................................................................
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Tartarus
The best naruto fanfic ever. It got a really good writing quality and good grammar. Stable updating stability. Very nice and fresh story development. Good character design, the character are really 'alive'. Good OC and MC in which he is not OP in the start but got high potential and getting OP really fast because the time is really making him do that. Nice and good world background, especially when its just the end of warring era.
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maha2008
GOOD BOOK I LOVE IT AUTHOR KEEP ROCKING BEST OF ALL GOOD BOOK PLEASE READ IT I LIKE IT VERY MUCH AND CHECK IF YOU LKE THIS BOOK GIVE ME A BIG THUMSUP
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Memo2020
Great novel πŸ‘ I love it so much ❀️✨ ................................................ ........................................... ...................................
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Awesome book!140Β₯_#β‚©_#β‚©^Γ—Β₯_@Β₯%@Β₯/@%Β₯#Β₯Γ·β‚©_@(%@(/@Β₯_@(/@(/#Β₯_#Β₯/#Β₯_@(/@/Β₯@(/@(/#(/@(/@Β₯/@Β₯/#Β₯^#(^#^Β₯@Β₯/@Β₯/@Β₯^@β‚©^#(^#^(#(^@(^#^Β₯#Β₯@(/#Β₯/@Β₯^@Β₯^Β₯
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tylerm8959
AWESOME I love the time frame the book starts in the naruto era it's a great time and very rare to see someone put effort into a Fanfic like this basically building character development whith very little information on the personalities.
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tylerm8959
This book is awesome!!!!!!! Keep up the great work author I appreciate your efforts! πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
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L_DILIP_ROY
Nice but make the mc to have secrets & they can pass fuinjustu in their family also instead giving everthing to hokage. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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SAM_NZ_1127
An excellent novel . Please continue writting πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜„πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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AnoMoLoUS
very good story...……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………....…..……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..
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GreenNight
Nice story. πŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘Œ
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