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Tonyorobsky
The characters lack depth. Especially the wife. I would have forgotten her if she wasn’t mentioned once in a while. The protagonist doesn’t seem to think before acting, making me wonder why he did this or that. An exemple is having the USA agents killed. It doesn’t help anyone. Also, he doesn’t seem bothered after being directly responsible for the murder of hundreds of people. The technology he is offered is way ahead of what Earth is capable, and he should have to spend a serious amount of time and ressources developing the intermediate steps. He reach those steps too easily (if he didn’t bypass them). The author should check technology trees in games such as the one who share its name with the title of this work, and remember that theory and practice/application are differents. Also, the system rewards are much to great for the tech development he completed. World background is lacking. Little to no description of the characters, surroundings, buildings and inventions. Interesting, but the execution need some work.
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Wolly159
I frankly love this story. There is not a lot of like this around and I love sci fi. I hope this story continues to at least 50 chapters so that people catch this story.
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_Leylin_
I would like to say that`s the potential of the novel is TOO BIG! Why? Because you can think that in the future there will be Humans in other planets with his technology and maybe all of them with huge lifespan! While he would be able to make he, his family and whoever he wants immortal till the universe is destroyed or till someone cut his head! But that`s not everything about the novel. This is only the start point! Of course even without talking about the potential the novel is wrote in a pleasant way with a lunatic for progress mc. And the author can choose what will be the path of all no only in the most obvious way, but in the way the interactions that are already stablished in various way! I don`t know for all of you, but i love most type of novels related to technology and this is one that I will support with all my strength! For now why not try to read it slowly and surely you will love it....Thank you for this novel author...Thank you and more updates please....how about 6per day? With love from Brazil!
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