Reviews of Rise My Elementals! by M_W - Webnovel

this novel could have been so much better if the plots were less cliche, I've read 270+ plus chapters and the conversations between the main characters and his women are the most annoying, there's never any substance to it. 270+ chapters and he's still a 1 star mage if it takes him 200 chapters to move a star the what's the point of the novel. they're so many things that happen which in my opinion are unnecessary and keep him side tracked from his main focus of becoming stronger. Some plots are actually intersesting, like his him being part of a mysterious organisation and the leaders favourite , his brother still being alive , him having elementals etc. infact him having multiple women wouldn't be a problem but it's the cliche troupe of his women being able to push him around a bit that becomes annoying. in the middle of a war that involves different countries your women are fighting amongst them selves and when you correct them they get mad at you and start throwing people your way and then you have to run away, like what sort of nonsense is that supposed to be, as a reader that war became useless and unimportant after that because the seriousness of the situation got downplayed a whole lot by people who should be taking it the most serious. Like I said the interaction between the MC and other characters is very lack luster so reading dialogues can make you cringe. as someone who's read over 100+ books with similar elements to this I can say that this book although the concept is great, the underwhelming fight scenes, lazy magic spell names and magic concepts and irrelevant sub plots make it a chore to read. the MC goal is to be come strong but 270+ chaps in and MC has only gotten to 1 star? the .when will he catch up to other people that are already at 5 stars? the only thing he has for him is he wits and smarts. what's the point of leading the war? why couldn't the war scene come when he was stronger, in most great novels like these MCs breakthrough during war arcs and grow stronger nut the war arc has no relevance to him personally besides experience. he's not even getting stronger from it. this novel just needs more plot that's relevant to the MCs growth as a mage, he's supposed to be ruthless a d strong but his interaction with the female characters make him look like a wuss especially after he finds that Elizabeth is not his enemy.

the story is good, with several interesting points. but what doesn't make any sense in this story, and his brother and his master expect him to become the general leader of an organization, take the silver kingdom, be the most powerful to fight the gods, but they waited 10 years to he starts to become a magician, I don't insinuate anything relevant about magic, his master gave little tips, and still they don't help with resources, put mana stone he would already be a rank 1 star at least, but he's letting him get by when he is important in their plans, it doesn't make sense, at this rate it will take years for him to reach a rank close to master and brother and yet there are ranks higher than them, like someone so important to many people's backgrounds, is left left and evil and an apprentice wizard without stars. Mistress wants him to defeat other disciples of hers, but supports the others in becoming mages of varying rank above him. but waited 10 years for him to become a wizard. besides if he is the most important why put other disciples to hinder him? it doesn't make sense, you can give the excuse that it's part of his training, but he's been trained to be smart, killer and leader for 10 years, so putting rivals as a lesson doesn't make sense. now the important hand training him as a mage has been neglected. and even after he started training as a mage he's still being neglected. it totally goes against his plans to be someone important. I would very much like the author to explain this. sorry for my bad english, that's not my language.