Reviews of Agatha The Legendary Guild Master by ranmaro - Webnovel

If you want a pure game based novel, with many plots and actions, plus romance and complicated relationships, then you will enjoy this. Consider it as the female version of the Reincarnation of The Strongest Sword God, with female player aiming to build her own Mecha legions inside guild wars and harem's ladies schemes.

This is a very well written fun to read game world novel. It's not a bunch of face slapping. It has an enjoyable romance so far. The interface and characters are great and relatable. I wait impatiently for every update ❤

Omygosh I didn't expect it to be this good since I just randomly add it and read it. The story plot is good with twist and I really didn't expect the characters to have regression. She's a badass savage when it comes to fighting I really like her.

Interesting background of a 12 year old girl from magic world pushed into a VR game like SAO. First, the positives: it's a decent story with some semblence of plot and characterisation. Grammar and spelling (in english) is 99% good, with only a few mistakes. I've seen worse on this site. Now, the problems: The setup is a bit broken as some things don't make sense. She praises her father as a great diplomat and general, yet he's the one who sold her off to a foreign prince and imprisoned her when she tried to escape the prince. She's supposedly a genius general (at 12!) who's left armies to victories. When did she start? at 9 years age?!?! For a genius, she's pretty dumb too, and some situations have to be patiently explained to her as she can't seem to grasp the underlying principles. The supporting characters are about the same, decent but with a few silly problems. A romance subplot is clumsily shoved into the story. It's creepy reading about this 12 year old girl thinking lustful thoughts about a male player. She is written more as a 16 year old than 12 year old, and there doesn't seem to be any particular reasons why she's 12 and not 16. The conflict between the 2 supporting males is very clumsy and forced. No one in their right mind would have any hesitation in picking one over the other, but this supposed genius is torn over which one to trust. Overall it's not bad, but only because there are far worse ones out there. It's really not worth reading though, as the large plotholes eventually break down the suspension of disbelief and I just said "That's it, this is too ridiculous, I give up." Read at your own peril.

the beginning was very promising but after some time it got simply boring and repetetive... this could have been a good story but it failed .

At first I was not really interested in reading this story, since I had so many other. But once I started I was hooked. The story goes fast and there is enough character development with the heroine that even if the rest of the characters only show a few you don't feel like there is a plot whole or something is lost. I think what helps is that it is a world ment to be like a video game. So I hope those that have not read it would give it a try.

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Umm... hi!! I haven't really read the book but from the name it looks pretty interesting and am planning to do so soon. Just wanted to make a suggestion that it would be better to make your cover much more appealing with the title of the book and all because most readers get captivated by cover which attract their interest to read more😆 So if you want a cover made, you can always reach for me at Discord: QueenRani6#8192 and I will be glad to help you for free actually. Just need some Power Stones for my book!! I am just saying, it's your choice after all.

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ok..this.might be interesting ..or does her fiancee a vañain too...but why there a mentor..is he a friend or.an enemy. ...,🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔 to further know about this story...why not have a try..........mb

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Never read a game based story before but this synopsis captured and piqued my interest with the writer's impeccable story telling. Looking forward to reading the adventure and survival of the female lead.

dropped chapter 1 that's why 3 stars for everything except writing quality. reasons 1 sizing of kingdoms and empires if fucking stupidity large 2 even if your kingdom is based upon magic or technology at some point it be merged not clearly defined like this. 3 not clear on MCs age, said she got engaged at 12, at some point she traveled to stay with fiancé not even 14 yet. based on first chapter these are the most damaging aspects found that are annoying

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Im just going to be shameless to give a 5* rating cause its a game novel with female mc that has a lot of chapters and its updated constantly, thats enough for me to be happy. I'll need to check the other stuff once i read, buttt, im not an hard person to please as you can see. Let's hope i enjoy this guys, let's go.

Quite interesting game book. Storyline is fun, love the FL. None of the typical fluff, face slapping and other annoying stuff thar is in most of the fl leads books here. Can't wait to see how awesome Agatha grows to be.

A very good novel if you like the video game genre. Really like the world building and stuff. Just one request to author if you can put a better eye catchy cover. It will really help this novel get more attention. :)

Hello, I would like to ask if I can add your book to my site Pdfnbooks.blogspot.com. I wouldn't add it without your permission Please reply if it would be okay

Lol! People be reading so hard they are forgetting to comment! It's like a cook being so good that people stop talking and emerse themselves in the meal. A good read is a good meal for the mind!

The story is well built ... the way the characters are portraid and the background are well described that are very much useful for any new readers to come. I salute the author.

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Overall a really good Story. I like the world building, the setting is good and the characters are likeable. The only thing that I really don't like is the love Triangle part that was mentioned in the Synopsis and has already started.(I am at chapter 70). Coupled with the fact that the locked chapters start from here I have decided to not continue reading. Keep it up author, your Story is awesome👍. I just don't like love Triangle and have not enough fast passes.🙁

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