Reviews of One More Time: Rebirth by lynerparel - Webnovel

Hi, author here. I just needed to post this so that everyone that has read this work of mine before can understand. So there are no misunderstandings, first off, I am the original author of this work. I posted this on Wattpad and Royalroad back in my high school days. So you might remember it. Due to some reasons, I needed to remove them. Now, this might seem like that original work of mine, but I added a lot of new scenes and things. So this is a remake of that original work of mine. So I hope you guys don't go around saying I stole this. Cause how can I steal from myself? Alright, that's all I wanted to say to clarify the situation.

Good concept but the thing is it was quite boring. If you are a casual reader then maybe you would want to read this and be a bit pleased but for me its just not that fun. To be honest its not just that its boring it lack so much maturity with the plot. Everything about it seems childish. Its like a story with just black and white that switches back and forth with no other color.

i did like the first chapters who were pretty interesting but the fact that the author began to introduce the concept of polygamia moreover when the characters are 10years old and some physical descriptions of a 13 year old girl were (in my opinion) sexualised made me really uncomfortable and drop the book. Nonetheless it might just an impression and I encourage you to give it a shot to see by yourself if it does bother you.

Believe this to be one of the authors earlier works. It does feel a bit rushed and seems to get lost but adds a good abount of content to the other stories of the stringest soul.

This book was honestly one of the best of read I’ve read so far on this platform. Its story was both exciting and saddening at the same time. The way the author ends the book was great and I hope he continues to write stories like this.

I have really enjoyed following the story to its end and have to say that like some of your other works it’s really enjoyable and I do recommend it though like your other works with endings it feels rushed and leaves me highly unsatifaited.

Great app to use for the iPhone app to get the free version for a free version and I have a lot to play on my iPad version and it has great 😊 great 😊 app for a great game I have played it all over and the app I have to

has the potential to become a great book. well thought out plot. interesting twists of character. nicely done background story. however the other switches characters faster the a ADHD child does flavors in a candy store

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It is so good who ever made this is a pro at this the mc is neither overpowered or. Weak its perfect and the plot is well detailed it is very awesome

Another fantastic story with a great plot and storyline This one has me on the edge of my seat “literally” lol I cant wait foe the nexT part to come out

Book is really good

good novel .

Remove character names and you will see the cookie cutter blandness for what it is. Honestly there is nothing special in this novel that any veteran has seen this premise done better anywhere else. Sad to see I wasted my time reading this again only to see an old comment of mines detailing how bland it is. Hopefully this review stays up.

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Awesome novel as everything Lynerparel writes! I truly advise this story if any of you hesitates. First, I was confused how author changed pov near 100th character, but then I felt it was kinda refreshing twist, plus, author was so kind to us, he even continued to write this story after an end as it was in first edition (am I right, author?) He makes it longer and I really like the way the plot goes on.

Cool book. Very interesting.

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Amazing book. The story development everything is just amazing. If it’s okay can you guys give my book a read. It’s my first time writing. Hope you guys can support me❤️

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I like the story, and how the author likes to expand on the world of his novels continuously, while still making them great and exiting to read.

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Awesome work! I’ve been secretly sneaking in chapters at work since I couldn’t wait for what came next! Beautiful story and character development!

This would be a good story if not a quarter in did the author not swap to some wannabe Japanese bs with one chan this and that for no reason. This turned into a cliche Japanese story with a bro con sister. There was no reason for the Japanese bs. The mc was not Japanese was not in Japan when he died he did not go to a Japanese like cultural. Hell the only person in the story that talk the crap is his sister. Just a waisted story.

This is a wonderful story... You will be easily hook to this book because of its mc... And most likely those women charactecters... The story is great... The characters are great... The mc is great... The fights is great... Overall a wonderful story...