Chapter comments on the chapter Jim's debt of the book My Vampire System

No, Cindy, you're in for quite the surprise . also .what did she do to peter and layla

Thanks for the chapter JKS ❤ I hope that everyone has a good time today 🙏

Excellent chapter, the tenth will rise again 😃

I don't know why, I lost the excitement that I used to feel when I read the novel. it might be that you are not editing them or something else.

I want to see this scene animated !!

Finally Quinn reveals himself as the leader. Cindy's words leave me confused what could the surprise be if she was really working for the bloodsuckers does that mean she will go after Quinn again or try and gain his vote to become king.

Honestly dont know how things will unfold

thanks !! first

Making bryce mad is making me happy

Power play for the tenth is going to get interesting! By acknowledging paul that reduces Bryces liklihood of winning over quinn- Not that i thought it likely...

I think the Dalki are key to something big that's about to happen Think about it, Jim's life goal was to live longer, the 1st 10th family King's motives are still slightly unclear but like Author, he wished to see peace between Humans and Vampires, Author told Quinn to become stronger after he met with mystery man, whom I'm guessing is one of the 2 Eno's, probably Jim The Dalki, created by Jim, attacked the human world. Although terrible, this actually made the humans that much stronger because it opened the world of beast gear, abilities and forced everyone to begin training to become stronger what if Jim and the King planned this to show the humans how strong they could become, because they know (including Author) that soon the Vampires and Humans are to clash, and the only chance the Humans have to fight back is to be powerful

I cant tell whos worse, Cindy or Bryce...

so excited to see how things go. and what if Jim woke the first leader after Vincent died? or left? I'm thinking he did.. and he enlisted him in on his ideas.. then once the dalki happened and for some reason they started attacking the humans, maybe the first leader legitimately felt bad for them and decided to guide them. I'm still curious on how papa blades, dad or grandpa, whichever he was to him, came into contact with people he could copy their abilities. and If they were the first vampires... I'm excited to see where the 10th family goes from here. I'm stoked for quinn to return to that planet with all those legendary monsters. I want him to harvest the enter center of the planet. maybe take the 10th family in secret... let them earn some crystals and some experience.

king quin FTW!

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

so Quinn has introduced his second knight to his family and the greater vampire community, he has now declared himself as a leader. The castle has recognized him and soon the society will have to as well. apparently neither Bryce or Cindy are going to be friendly with the tenth family.

Chasing immortality, very interesting... so he succeeded creating the Dalki’s, studying the originals. She the dalki’s could then be originals & demon beasts. How does this help him? Is he attempting to make new vessels and then transfer the consiuous?

ya.. Cindy and Bryce are against eachother but that doesn't mean either are on Quinns side.. tbh only other leader i like is the 9th family leader.. even tho we only met him for a short bit

I wonder if the politics is the surprise Cindy is talking about. I think Quinn is very much so ready for that. Hes been playing politics for several months now. As far as the Kingship goes, I dont think Quinn really wants it. I think itll be thrust upon him by some set of circumstances

Everyone has their own suprizes and secrets and they are all coming to the surface! Also completely random, not really important at all, but like, how have all of Quinns new vampires (nate/sam/paul/etc.) been handling the sun when they weren't on the vamp planet? Did Quinn have a surplus of rings or something? haven't seen him hunt any death bats for crystals anytime.