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A Gem, i would place this novel with Lord of mysterious simply based on potential, the characters arent cutouts they make rational and irrational decisions that fit there character Im very happy that a new original has found its way to the top Pros Potential for the story to go anywhere Origional idea that has a unique spin on an monster system Stable uploads Im not able to guess the plot or what will happen next Cons I need more chapters and the chapters fly by due to this Give it a try, its intriguing where the story is progressing with little predictables that are a common turn off for the system oriented genre
I genuinely love the concept behind this, and the story in general. The reason for the 4-stars instead of 5, however, is the author's lack of proper punctuation. There are a great deal of run on sentences, and not nearly enough punctuation to even everything out. It's like the difference between saying "Let's go eat Grandma!" and "Let's go eat, Grandma!" As far as I'm concerned, the errors severely break the immersion, to the point where this story is more of a "sometimes" story, rather than an "all the time" story. Other than that, though, I love it :)
The characters are great. The story development is excellent. Great use of foreshadowing.
it was pretty good but towards the end it made me feel that many things were forgotten. I really enjoyed it all but it fell bland and rushed near the end.
Dude, this is genuinely one of the best stories I’ve ever read. Fantastic job, this needs a animated series. I won’t stop until I get it either.
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I wish I was able to just have the whole story to listen to whilst I am working away. Started listening to it on Pocket FM and can’t stop wanting to keep listening to it. It’s been the best thing getting me through each day.
Concept is unique and addicting. Character development is poor; especially female characters. The important female characters are either strong and evil or weak and annoying. Characters that are likable are poorly wrote out. The time jump sucks and most everything that happens post-time jump would have been better if the main gang was there. Loved the first book with Fex, Vorden, Borden, Quinn, Leo, Vincent, Peter, Sam, Sil, and Erin. The ending is poor and all the likeable characters are gone.
loved this book! I stopped reading for years and this book hooked me back in. I will definitely be reading the others. would love to see an anime of this!
i like it but I'm at chapter 101 and it says it's cost 300 dollars to unlock the rest that's crazy for one book
I have read dozens of novels for years but MVS is still the number one best novel I've ever read. Thank you JKS Manga for such a wonderful experience, I love all your other works too.
To begin with, I don’t even know how this mediocre novel won an award. Maybe it was because it was created during the pandemic? It doesn’t matter. The character doesn’t think, let alone show any intelligence, and then there’s Orden who can’t stop bothering constantly with his obsession. It even started to feel forced. I lost my time reading this
Good read for what you get for free, but the added cost to read the rest of it makes it bit worth starting. ..... ....... ...............
very interesting ...very inspiring one of a masterpieces,....I guess most writers can learn from this
Bardzo mi się spodobała książka. Czytałam w internecie. Czemu tu nie ma tłumacza na Polski? Odblokowała bym ale w tym wypadku nie .ma sensu :( Liczę że kiedyś wydasz tą książkę i będę mogła w sklepie kupicć.
A captivating story that will make you want more by each chapter that you read.
I rated less on the writing for the amount of grammatical errors throughout the chapters is something that takes me off guard while reading and my mind is then interrupted but over all such a great novel and everything i love it
Amazing is all that comes to mind when I think about this book. I can’t wait to see what happens next.
the story is great, really enjoy the characters and there progression. Now that the story is complete no issues with updating. In the beginning from chapter 1 to around 400 you will find quiet a few spelling errors and the use of the wrong name at times other than that was an amazing story would love to see a completed manga webtoon with art to see all the cool beast weapons and monsters!!!!
The ending was the legendary ending I have ever seen in the world ever and none of the ending,story,plot and vibe can be beat by any one again in this mortal world it also has an Hindi translated audiobook in pocket fm and and there the story is also at the next level you can't even imagine how good it is.I don't even have worlds for expressing it . because the series came to an end it feels like there's nothing in my heart it best series I have ever watched i salute to the author to making such a great story and i will suggest to the author to make its amine or web series its name will be written in the golden book of history that's it i don't have any words left to describe the story Thank you [img=update]
So this story is quite beautiful till you get to the 1000th chapters range, where things sort of become cliche and very rote. (Reads like supergene does at that point), but asides that, its an awesome blend of vampire and rpg elements. Do check out My werewolf system and my dragon system to fully understand the story
I love this book. I had watched a little bit about it on tube and was hooked. Finally found the whole book here.
This was the first story I read here, and at this time, I haven't come close to finishing it. I've reached chapter 50, and I can say with certainty the story is entertaining and worth the time you put into it. One of my main gripes with this material is that there are a fair amount of typos, some minor and some major, hence the 3 star writing quality. Another issue that contributed to the score is that most of these characters lack deeper complexity, and that has to do with the author's decidedly surface level understanding of motive. A character's motive for an action is only believable but rarely if ever convincing. The world building feels lacking in a way that's hard to put my finger on. This is not to say it's bad, far from it, but it just leaves something to be desired at the end of the day. Keep in mind that this is the opinion of someone who's only 50 chapters in, and I'm confident this will change and improve over time. TLDR; Give it a shot. (Negatives)Typos abound, limp motives, surfaceable world building. (Positives) Gripping narrative, memorable characters, realistic enough portrayal of abuses of power, various engaging mysteries
So far I have been loving this book. I read through all that was out in an afternoon. My blood was boiling at the end, asking for mooooaaaarrrrr. I literally have been looking for a vampire book just like this for so long. The way the system works, the way the character has embraced, but not been consumed by his vampirism, I’m fucking hooked. I love it. Okay so, rant over, actual review time. If you want a book that has strong potential to last up to the 1000’s of chapters without being boring through most of it? This is it. You been looking for an actually solid vampire book that isn’t about “boo hoo I’m a vampire” or “ **** I hate vampires let’s kill em” and actually has threshed out intentions behind actions, this is the one. The big upside, is that like other good authors, when the author realizes that he might have made a ****y wucky and made the next part of the book too hard for the character unintentionally , he gives the character a bit of plot armor the actually makes sense instead of a ****ty glaring armor. And when the author actually plans to make it hard for the character? Bam! Boi get slapped and stands back up. This is the book for you. You disagree? Your wrong. It’s for you. 🩸 🩸 🩸
Reveal Spoiler A Gem, i would place this novel with Lord of mysterious simply based on potential, the characters arent cutouts they make rational and irrational decisions that fit there character Im very happy that a new original has found its way to the top Pros Potential for the story to go anywhere Origional idea that has a unique spin on an monster system Stable uploads Im not able to guess the plot or what will happen next Cons I need more chapters and the chapters fly by due to this Give it a try, its intriguing where the story is progressing with little predictables that are a common turn off for the system oriented genre
I genuinely love the concept behind this, and the story in general. The reason for the 4-stars instead of 5, however, is the author's lack of proper punctuation. There are a great deal of run on sentences, and not nearly enough punctuation to even everything out. It's like the difference between saying "Let's go eat Grandma!" and "Let's go eat, Grandma!" As far as I'm concerned, the errors severely break the immersion, to the point where this story is more of a "sometimes" story, rather than an "all the time" story. Other than that, though, I love it :)
The characters are great. The story development is excellent. Great use of foreshadowing.
it was pretty good but towards the end it made me feel that many things were forgotten. I really enjoyed it all but it fell bland and rushed near the end.
Dude, this is genuinely one of the best stories I’ve ever read. Fantastic job, this needs a animated series. I won’t stop until I get it either.
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I wish I was able to just have the whole story to listen to whilst I am working away. Started listening to it on Pocket FM and can’t stop wanting to keep listening to it. It’s been the best thing getting me through each day.
Concept is unique and addicting. Character development is poor; especially female characters. The important female characters are either strong and evil or weak and annoying. Characters that are likable are poorly wrote out. The time jump sucks and most everything that happens post-time jump would have been better if the main gang was there. Loved the first book with Fex, Vorden, Borden, Quinn, Leo, Vincent, Peter, Sam, Sil, and Erin. The ending is poor and all the likeable characters are gone.
loved this book! I stopped reading for years and this book hooked me back in. I will definitely be reading the others. would love to see an anime of this!
i like it but I'm at chapter 101 and it says it's cost 300 dollars to unlock the rest that's crazy for one book
I have read dozens of novels for years but MVS is still the number one best novel I've ever read. Thank you JKS Manga for such a wonderful experience, I love all your other works too.
To begin with, I don’t even know how this mediocre novel won an award. Maybe it was because it was created during the pandemic? It doesn’t matter. The character doesn’t think, let alone show any intelligence, and then there’s Orden who can’t stop bothering constantly with his obsession. It even started to feel forced. I lost my time reading this
Good read for what you get for free, but the added cost to read the rest of it makes it bit worth starting. ..... ....... ...............
very interesting ...very inspiring one of a masterpieces,....I guess most writers can learn from this
Bardzo mi się spodobała książka. Czytałam w internecie. Czemu tu nie ma tłumacza na Polski? Odblokowała bym ale w tym wypadku nie .ma sensu :( Liczę że kiedyś wydasz tą książkę i będę mogła w sklepie kupicć.
A captivating story that will make you want more by each chapter that you read.
I rated less on the writing for the amount of grammatical errors throughout the chapters is something that takes me off guard while reading and my mind is then interrupted but over all such a great novel and everything i love it
Amazing is all that comes to mind when I think about this book. I can’t wait to see what happens next.
the story is great, really enjoy the characters and there progression. Now that the story is complete no issues with updating. In the beginning from chapter 1 to around 400 you will find quiet a few spelling errors and the use of the wrong name at times other than that was an amazing story would love to see a completed manga webtoon with art to see all the cool beast weapons and monsters!!!!
The ending was the legendary ending I have ever seen in the world ever and none of the ending,story,plot and vibe can be beat by any one again in this mortal world it also has an Hindi translated audiobook in pocket fm and and there the story is also at the next level you can't even imagine how good it is.I don't even have worlds for expressing it . because the series came to an end it feels like there's nothing in my heart it best series I have ever watched i salute to the author to making such a great story and i will suggest to the author to make its amine or web series its name will be written in the golden book of history that's it i don't have any words left to describe the story Thank you [img=update]
So this story is quite beautiful till you get to the 1000th chapters range, where things sort of become cliche and very rote. (Reads like supergene does at that point), but asides that, its an awesome blend of vampire and rpg elements. Do check out My werewolf system and my dragon system to fully understand the story
I love this book. I had watched a little bit about it on tube and was hooked. Finally found the whole book here.
This was the first story I read here, and at this time, I haven't come close to finishing it. I've reached chapter 50, and I can say with certainty the story is entertaining and worth the time you put into it. One of my main gripes with this material is that there are a fair amount of typos, some minor and some major, hence the 3 star writing quality. Another issue that contributed to the score is that most of these characters lack deeper complexity, and that has to do with the author's decidedly surface level understanding of motive. A character's motive for an action is only believable but rarely if ever convincing. The world building feels lacking in a way that's hard to put my finger on. This is not to say it's bad, far from it, but it just leaves something to be desired at the end of the day. Keep in mind that this is the opinion of someone who's only 50 chapters in, and I'm confident this will change and improve over time. TLDR; Give it a shot. (Negatives)Typos abound, limp motives, surfaceable world building. (Positives) Gripping narrative, memorable characters, realistic enough portrayal of abuses of power, various engaging mysteries
So far I have been loving this book. I read through all that was out in an afternoon. My blood was boiling at the end, asking for mooooaaaarrrrr. I literally have been looking for a vampire book just like this for so long. The way the system works, the way the character has embraced, but not been consumed by his vampirism, I’m fucking hooked. I love it. Okay so, rant over, actual review time. If you want a book that has strong potential to last up to the 1000’s of chapters without being boring through most of it? This is it. You been looking for an actually solid vampire book that isn’t about “boo hoo I’m a vampire” or “ **** I hate vampires let’s kill em” and actually has threshed out intentions behind actions, this is the one. The big upside, is that like other good authors, when the author realizes that he might have made a ****y wucky and made the next part of the book too hard for the character unintentionally , he gives the character a bit of plot armor the actually makes sense instead of a ****ty glaring armor. And when the author actually plans to make it hard for the character? Bam! Boi get slapped and stands back up. This is the book for you. You disagree? Your wrong. It’s for you. 🩸 🩸 🩸
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