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Michelle_RD
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soulla
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Garo_
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Hender
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1Lashay_Cooper
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Casual_Vanze
The characters all act like horrible actors that don't know how to act. Every action is over exaggerated and not in a good way. Very annoying and cringe worthy
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1Lashay_Cooper
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Rahul_Kiro
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Dillon_Gloska
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Kaleb_Winston
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Skull_
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WinnieLePooh
Amazing series, writing quality although there are a bit of spelling mistakes here and there but that's fine and doesn't really ruin the story, characters are good and have good evolutions. One thing I dont like is how much it changes perspective without moving the story forward just rewinding from another person. Though the mc choose time stopping first I hope he gets psychokinesis that would be amazing.
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fegzzxc
OMGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!! It's damn good , i was waiting those moment and i hope after this he will wake up that he is terribly weak and need to overpower for win in dangerous situation
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leech_
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AaronJDX
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EvilWolf
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1Lashay_Cooper
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WolfLxrd
I'm enjoying this so far and am loving the whole concept but there is quite a few spelling errors throughout the novel but if you can get past that then it's very enjoyable to read.
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generically
The Author thought of dropping so ima drop a review to boost them spirits up!!!
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Timotius
Good novel.
Nice story development.
Mc have a little good head and not to much op.
But from zero to stronger.
Update a little slow.
Hope its can be faster.
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Hender
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deanbunter88
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Type_
Extremely good. Some of the grammar needs work but the story over all is good with well rounded development . Just wish it got updated faster and more often .
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TWDeMented
So far the story is easy to follow. I do hope that greater detail into characters names will be taken. The miss use of names can be a story killer but has not yet. I hope more reader's will join in and help the author in rounding out his world creatively
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ProfessorofCulture
I haven't read the but since I have seen alot of people giving a 5 star review, I decided "hey, y don't I just do the same". Besides I need the xp
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OrdinaryMan475
I honestly just started reading the first chapter and realized that the detail of the character is pretty good. Especially the comparisons.
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8Eight
This is, this is pretty good. Updated are slow as **** but the writing is clean easy to read and understand, I rarely go back to reread something because I couldn't make sense of it
Characters are pretty dahm solid for a 30 chapter novel keep it up
Only real critique is the world is vague, it's just a city, it generally lack any real description
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