Reviews of Empire of Heroes: Fate X DanMachi by Artchie245 - Webnovel

It was a nice idea to introduce servants in the danmachi world... but the story literally follows the canon and theres barely any change honestly introducing op characters and nerfing them just to follow canon plot is just lame

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I seem to recall reading something almost exactly the same on a fanfic site with the same exact beginning and explanation but different summoned servants the one I read had Archer summoned first that saved bell then when they went to Hestia the same lines with falna being another source of power for the servants then he summoned Gilgamesh. This to me seems like you used that as material and just changed some lines and characters/servants

this is good FF danmachi but some word hard to understand, and why the servant keep leaving the master. overall its good so keep it up xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp

The story is directly inspired from a fanfic called "Heroic Myth (Fate / Grand Order x DanMachi)" by Harouki who posts in a different websit*. It differs in that Bell ends up summoning different servants so as to introduce a Harem developement. While I like the idea and I like the servants chosen, the scenario and conversations are largely the same (mostly because they both take dialogue from the original lightnovel) with the ocassional change in between. That said while the story itself isn't lacking, there are already a few plot holes and the ocassional grammatical errors (which won't necessarily prevent most fans of the genre from reading further). In a brighter light, Bell's motivations (while largely the same as in the original or the predecesor fanfic) gain a little touch of sudden enlightment straight out of Xianxia novels which might (or might not) be the selling point of this book in the future. Only the Author knows what will happen, but never the less it's an interesting point to keep in mind. - There is also the so called "soul weapon" that the author included which I find to be a very interesting way to describe our favorite umu's... I mean our favorite emperor's weapon. I would like to encourage everyone to read both fanfics (especially the one by Harouki) as they are an interesting and fresh template for those who are starved for new(-ish) things to read.