Reviews of LWS: Liye's Legacy by Alemillach - Webnovel

truly five stars, an excellent prequel, I'm going to cry, it ties into the next book perfectly, I look forward to the sidequel very much, good luck ale

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The limited vocabulary and multiple grammatical errors in each chapter detract from the novel (english translation?). As well, the story is a bit plodding and pedantic at first, failing to draw you in to read more. The MC is simple, mildly interesting and inquisitive, but his mode of speech and mentality do not follow true to his background. He behaves in a manner against his established background and character constantly, constantly changing from naive to knowledgeable, uneducated to intellectual. The world was already well developed as this is a prequel to an existing world, anf the writer updates regularly. the story plotline seems interesting enough, but the mediocre writing quality and poor character development/consistency detract from the novel.

great prequel. can also be read as standalone novel. love the LWS world And hope for more. great prequel. can also be read as standalone novel. love the LWS world And hope for more.

Everything is just so good. I just catch up with the latest chapter in one night without a wink of sleep. I even pay with coin. This is the first time I buy coins. It is that good. Totally recommended!!! Still a lot of mystery here, make me very curious. This is also the prequel of Last Wish System, the first contracted webnovel. TBH I haven't read that yet. I think I will be reading them now while waiting for this novel to update HAHAHA

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Excellent story but I wish there was a clear representation of the power levels. 😂😂😂😂😂——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————-//——————-//——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————-

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The writing quality is good with minor typos and grammatical error. The story development is not forced and has a great flow. The characters doesn't betray the the character design and it is interesting to see how they grown to the characters in LWS. The world background is detailed and the missing information can be backed up in the later chapters. Overall, its great and thank you to the author for writing the book.

Really awesome storyline, the detail about the main characters Is excellent I am excited about thE next episode! I would recommend this story to anyone

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This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes in this ****. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna take a **** much. If this novel got some drive, thank God its still alive.

Interesting leveling concepts in this story. I feel that the story is about to move a bit faster from chapter 40 onwards, especially since main characters have already decided to work together. Looking forward to the updates!😊👍

The story tells of a rise and reincarnation of a slave to be become strong and with good heart and spirit willingly help others in need. Kudos to the author and the translators.... More chapters please....

Good author, good story. He also likes most of the comments on his story! What else could you wish for? Have fun reading for those who haven’t read the story and are just reading the reviews first!

I've been looking forward to the prequel to LWS. I'm sure I'll enjoy it as much as I enjoyed what I have read so far from LWS. Keep it up, you have my support!

Having read Last Wish System, I've been looking forward to the prequel! It's great being able to see Shiba's origin. Despite a few common typos, which I mostly attribute to English not being Ale's first language, the story and setting are well thought out and easy to understand. Keep up the great work, Ale!

The Prequel to the first ever contracted original novel on the sight has everything you've come to expect from Last Wish System, well thought out lovable characters, Amazing world building, believable interactions, a powerful system guiding the main hero but making him do the work to unlock more. A bit of mystery, a lot of revenge, what's not to like?? Come join the adventures of Shiba, Eini and Lina as they grow, learn, loose and win.

Well one thing I like about this novel is that a clear picture of the power levels that lws lack so my advice to you is that you explain about power system in more depth overall start is little bit similar to lws tho