Chapter comments on the chapter Stirring dreams of the book Magical ties

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So far I am liking this story a lot

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Love the vivid descriptions 😍

I would say your story has a unique concept... Hope u will write this book until it completes...🥰🥰🥰

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That figures. Glad, I had some explanation to your grammatical errors. It's okay, am just the kind of person who does not really immerse myself to stories when I see some errors on that. But 1st chapter is good. Just started reading now. 😁 I suggest you still write with some proofreading so the story will be much interesting. I will check the other chapters, then. I like the names you have for the lead characters, am drawn to unique names 😅

Descriptions weee interesting until they started hurting my head. Lol. Maybe I missed it but I don’t recall having a description of Aisiling face, It’s intriguing towards the ending so I’m here to stAy.

It's intriguing. Good example of what a first chapter should be, it definitely keeps you reading :)

The chapter holds the reader's attention.

Really engaging, this story. Will recommend it!!!