Reviews of From Mortal to Divinity by Servant_Ambrosius - Webnovel

This is an impressive work of fiction. To start with it is a jumpchain novel, and the speed of the jumpchains are quite high. I personally love it because the high speed keeps me engaged and entertained. I’ve never been in the middle of a jump and thought “this is dragging too much” which is a real problem in other jumpchains. I’ve read some that will put 50 chapters into one jump or bring characters from one jump to the next meaning extra chapters in between jumps. Most jumpchains do this because it’s comfortable for them to have reoccurring voices and they can’t write with so many new voices every 5-10 chapters. Let’s talk about characterization: the characterization in this novel is fantastic and realistic, while the main character is almost reminiscent of John wick. There is focus to the mc’s actions, he enters a world and everything he does is aimed at completing his objectives and I love it. The writing is fantastic I have no gripes about the quality, grammar and spelling are both top notch. The stability of updating has not left me wanting, it comes quickly and I consume it much quicker. The development of the story is amazing, you really notice every time the main character utilizes something he has learned during a previous jump. I’m looking forward to wherever the author takes this in the next jump and every jump thereafter. The world development is a solid 5, you never forget which world the mc is in and that is a problem I’ve seen in other jumpchain novels where jumps seem to mesh together and you forget where the author has taken you. This novel definitely has my recommendation, if you have trouble with the first few chapters trust me when I say if you can get to the third jump that’s when it really starts to shine and the author locks in their style.

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Это впечатляющее художественное произведение. Начнем с того, что это роман с прыжковой цепочкой, и скорость прыжковых цепей довольно высока. Мне лично он нравится, потому что высокая скорость заставляет меня увлекаться и развлекать. Я никогда не был в середине прыжка и думал, что «это слишком много перетаскивания», что является настоящей проблемой для других цепочек прыжков. Я читал некоторые, которые помещают 50 глав в один прыжок или переводят персонажей из одного прыжка в следующий, что означает дополнительные главы между прыжками. Большинство джампчейнов делают это, потому что им удобно иметь повторяющиеся голоса, и они не могут писать таким количеством новых голосов каждые 5-10 глав. Поговорим о характеристиках: характеристики в этом романе фантастические и реалистичные, а главный герой почти напоминает Джона Уика. Действия MC сфокусированы, он входит в мир, и все, что он делает, направлено на достижение его целей, и мне это нравится. Написание просто фантастическое. У меня нет претензий к качеству, грамматика и орфография на высшем уровне. Стабильность обновления меня не оставляет желать лучшего, оно приходит быстро, и я его гораздо быстрее потребляю. История развивается потрясающе, вы действительно замечаете каждый раз, когда главный герой использует что-то, чему он научился во время предыдущего прыжка. Я с нетерпением жду, где автор сделает это в следующем прыжке и в каждом последующем прыжке. Мировое развитие - твердая 5, вы никогда не забудете, в каком мире находится MC, и это проблема, которую я видел в других романах о Jumpchain, где прыжки, кажется, сливаются воедино, и вы забываете, куда автор вас привел. У этого романа определенно есть моя рекомендация. Если у вас возникли проблемы с первыми несколькими главами, поверьте мне, когда я скажу, сможете ли вы добраться до третьего прыжка, тогда он действительно начинает сиять, и автор придерживается своего стиля. 9 мес.

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Hey author I love the story so far and cant wait for more to come in the future so I hope you can keep going and make even more exciting chapters to come.

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This story is actually great I skipped the first few jumps because for me they're unnecessary the only stuff you need to know is his: Legend, Weapon, 'Love' for humanity and so on but there is one thing I dislike I dont why it may just be me that dislikes it but you make MC to passive/dont involve him in plots that much for 'Laying Low' for no reason when hes a 'God' i say god like that because there are many stronger people out there but with his strength in the current world (DxD) he focuses in Useless stuff like research and helping humans on an island when he can be out there

One question is harem, I think it's an excellent story but I haven't finished it, so I don't give it 5 stars, but continue as you are going to crack you happy

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I've read until chapter 6 and this novel felt like a confusing and rushed mess. Maybe it's because I didn't read most of the stories it's based of and maybe it's because it really is a confusing and rushed mess, but I didn't enjoy reading it. exp. bye~~~

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I don't even need to explain why this is such a good novel. Just read it, let the man do his job and enjoy. If you're not braindead you will definitely enjoy this without complaining and demanding things from his as he is already really WAY up there when it comes to fanfictions. I wish I could give it more than five stars but the site won't let me.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Huhuhu i miss this story already. Author! When will you continue to update this story?! Are you gonna stop writimg now?! If yes please do notify your fans, and im one of them.

I like it *shrugs* couldn't wait till I catch up but with the chapters I've already read its enough plus it doesn't hurt that I like JC or CYOA stories also for those who don't know what is a jumpchain check this out for some information, maybe check out SJ Chan's jumpchain while you are there, while it might not be for everyone it is pretty good (female protag) https://jumpchain.wordpress.com/what-is-jumpchain/ also since this isn't the standard jumpchain layout just use the information above for a general overview and to, at least, know the gist of it anyways I love your story (even if it looks like I complained most of the time (@ffnet))

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The book is one of my favourites, with the mix of jump chains and divinty. Harry Potter could be a good one as well as Naruto, due to the constant conflicts present.

This book isn't half bad at all, the world background is great, the characters involved are well written in their personality, and it isn't cringey as hell. This was the first jumpchain novel I've read and I'm not disappointed. But some of the worlds they jumped to, I have no clue what the plot was. My favorite was the Avatar. Anyway, I decided to drop this because it had a harem. I'm not saying harems books are all horrible, it's just that I got sick of reading harem, so I'm bailing. Enjoy the read.

tbh didn't know why I'd ropped this but now i remember the story is really good until avatar where it felt like you weren't the mc and then bringing azula along is where I dropped it.im going to try and carry on and see if its gets better or not.

awesome man I really like your king 👑👑👑 for the same thing I have ever seen a paper copy of the stupidest thing I can come over and play with your family and friends are you talking about the fudge recipe for the family and friends are going to the movies and TV shows and movies on netflix on the ship to address it to you in the pancreas the web address it to the party but I gotta do to the party and it due to a location that I will be i was with white at the hospital with my mom

English is not my native Language Your story is great. Reason 1: As Readers you have seen how the MC becomes not only stronger step by step but his charakter is improfing and learning. Reason 2: The Harem is not that the MC is walking a street and the Girls hop in and **** him. It is a journe and logical reasons that you can only say good work. I am a person that hates Harems for the reason that in 99% it is illogical and pure wishfullfilling with BS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But in this story great. Reason 3: I think you have a plan and have worked with this. Have unique Characters and most important not only the MC's but most other charakters have depth and are not 2D charakter. The only stronger worlds than DC/Marvel would be Cultivation worlds. Then i don't think DB is stronger, i would say ca. identical +- a handfull^^ Would like to see a little Episode where you would KICK (Ultra Mega Giga Strong ;p) issei from DxD Identical to my Post

The start of this novel was a huge disappointment for me, but i dont know where things started to change. but along the lone the story got better and better and now i’m eagerly waiting everyday to read. i refuse to read it in an uncomfortable environment so i can read the book and enjoy it to the fullest.

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I didn't read this in facfic.net because of the low favorites and follows. Glad I did. I don't know the reason for its low favorites there but this is seriously one of the best jumpchains I read. Even with most of them unfamiliar worlds for me, the story still kept me hooked. Thanks and Good Luck Author.

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umm .. I'm confused Maybe the Jumpchain genre is not suitable for me