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Silverstar7
This is a hidden gem. I've been following this story almost from the starting and trust me I have seen the author improving with time. This is definitely not one of those face slapping novels nor you will find a male lead who will be on an otherworldly level. Rather you will see an overpowering female lead who knows how to mix magic, science, and cultivation together to create something new. No backstabbing family, no deceiving fiancee nor a revenge story but a journey of a girl who knows how to do business and is a perfect leader. Rather than one male lead, we have five, but all five of them are unique and attention-grabbing in their own way. This story is quite different but definitely interesting from the other transmigration novels on this site. I'll seriously recommend this book to anyone who's looking for something new in the eastern fantasy genre. Good work author!πŸ’–
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Nightsummer20
I'm finally posting a review after completing the story and of course, it's five stars because I've worked hard. Please read this review before diving into the story because I'll be making some points very clear over here about the story: 1. This is a Reverseharem Romance, meaning - our girl will end up with more than one or two male leads (She will have five soulmates + a bondmate) 2. This is definitely not the best story on WN. It has plenty of mistakes, stupid plot ideas, and even cringe moments. After all, it's the first story that I have written and even I cringed while editing the first few chapters. But this story is still very precious to me. I have learned a lot through this journey and I hope that my other works would be much better. I hope you guys will still give this book a chance. If you liked it then, please leave your reviews, comments, and votes to support the story and your author. That's all for now! Be happy and enjoy reading :)
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AstraLumi
This story was everything I've wanted but never knew. The plot felt refreshing. And whereas I've always been attracted towards cultivation novels where female protagonists become stronger while collecting all good things (even the hottest male lead😏), that plot actually has become all too familiar and typical.(not that I don't love them and read them like a retard..) This story however was different. I just fell in love with how well it's written. Li ming's journey along with so many plot twists left me holding my breath sometimes (especially her cute hotties had 'sweet' times with her). The story just leaves so much to the reader's imagination till the end that you can't help but get hooked. Remember at one point when it kept repeating that their happy days were going to be destroyed and that Li ming's and her mates bond would be disturbed? Phew! I seriously thought that one of her mates or maybe even she is going to cheat or maybe a rival will pop up or ya know any other scandalous thing. But what happened? One of them dies!!😱( gosh I was laying in my bed with my tears dripping like shown melodramatic Tv shows..with my sis giving me weird looks) Anyway I guess I talked too much ..no wait i guess it's writing too much.. This book here is a hidden jem tho.. 😘❀️
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Shristee_singh
this is my first reading novel like this it's was outstanding and every character is fantastic and i love all male lead most i love to like this more[img=update]
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Safiya_Parween
author you are the best . I am looking forward to read a reverse harem novel
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chizuai
Just my honest review: I am not a fan of mysteries, I just enjoyed this novel because of the business aspects. I can say that the female lead is not overpowered, but her personality and character are not to my taste. My expectations for the romance were quite high since it's a reverse harem, but I am somewhat disappointed that it's actually just rated R16, making it suitable for even 13-year-olds to read. That's why it's kind of boring. There are a lot of plot holes in this novel, which makes it confusing, and to be honest, I'm not happy about that. There are many unnecessary and overly detailed parts that are not important and feel like a waste of time to read. Oh, by the way, the main character's personality is gradually becoming out of character. She was supposed to be wise, but she's becoming naive all the way. It's like expecting character development but getting a stupid character instead. I don't understand why the author is introducing so many mysteries, even in unimportant or interesting things. Overall, my rating for the female lead is 6/10 (as I mentioned, her character development fell short). The male leads score a 4/10 (the romance is boring).
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Roaa_Alhindawi
Free Palestine The Palestinians are now suffering from continuous bombing. Thousands of them have died, thousands have been injured and displaced from their homes. Hundreds of children have died and become orphans. Even the wounded who are in the hospital have been bombed. Israel claims to be the victim, and it is the same Israel that occupied the land of the Palestinians. Where is the humanity? You claim to be the victim and you are the occupier, the usurper.
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Oreoko
when i first saw this novel I felt like it's the one, and I'm right. every chapter gives me happiness. especially that hot scenes lol.
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user6768101088092
At first i liked the book i enjoyed it , but the i'm like the f was going on the bish was like i'm going to sqve the world i mean it's good to be kind and all but this is over doing it and it was boringπŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’
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megan_noel
I have not finished the story but I find this really enjoyable I want to see this as a webtoon I wanna see the amazing characters as drawings also dose anybody also have typing problems where the cursor moves to random spots when trying to type
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Anoscetia
First and foremost, I just wanna thank you (author) for creating a great story that satisfied my guilty pleasureβ€” a reverse harem story with enough sexual tension, romance and good plot at the same time. After all, some may try making a reverse harem story but at the end (when I can't even choose any of the male leads), the FL has to choose one and I honestly prefer it if she can just keep all of them cause why not? I hate it when the other male leads are also good but they will end up with unrequited love. Anyway, so long as it's just a fiction, let's all be open minded. Next, if I'm going to comment about the characters, well, I have a mixed feelings for the FL, Li Ming. She's powerful (and we can even say that she's OP) but since she's living in a world full of immortals, she's portrayed as not that powerful but not weak either. Sometimes I hate how she's confident that no matter what wrong she do, her mates are going to forgive her because they are hers. I feel like she's taking advantage of them. But at the same time, I love how she has no favoritism and can love them all. Now when it comes to the 5 male leads (or maybe 6, including her bondmate), I'm impressed that although the author cannot established a very strong differences for all the MLs, they still have their own differences. Lord Yueliang is gentle (just like how I imagine a moon deity), Supreme Immortal is a combination of strictness and gentleness. Heaven Emperor is the shy type, innocent little boy lol. Then Ruoshan can be flirty and gentle (just like what Li Ming said, he can be the combination of all). And Hei Long is a hot tempered dom. Lastly, Zhang Yong is the perfect definition of a second male lead. Though I like it if he entered her harem, I can't deny that I also love the friendship between him and Li Ming. It's just as beautiful as Li Ming's relationship with her mates. And I'm actually impressed that at the end, the author managed to established Zhang Yong's character as a very great friend, and that more than friends but less than lovers type of friendship between him and Li Ming, in my mind which made me contented with their platonic relationship. Now, let's talk about the greatness of the plot. It's kinda quick paced but not hurried and rushed. The romance is early but given that they are soulmates, then I think it's fine (anyway, considering that they waited for 50,000 years for her to appear, a fast romance make sense). The supporting characters, albeit background characters, also established their presence in the story even a little. It's not that they are important but it just make sense that they are there (can you understand it? I'm not even sure if I understood what I said anyway). Then the conflict is great, although I'm still a little baffled about the background story of the valkyrie since there's not much details about her and the banshee too. But anyway, the good vs. evil type of conflict was well established. Also, the snu snu is awesome as well. It has this sexual tension in the air mixed with pink bubbles (get what I mean?) the words are direct and the actions are detailed but the love between the FL and MLs made the scene hot and sweet at the same time (10/10 for the snu snu). And lastly, there's this attitude of the author that I don't know whether I should hate her/him or admire her/him for that. SHE/HE IS SO GREAT AT FORESHADOWING! To the point that even if it's supposed to be good, she/he can portray it as bad when she/he foreshadowed it (example, when Li Ming marked Wen Guiying. I should've known that when she/he said that it'll change their lives forever, it's a good thing. But the author, being the great tease that she/he was wrote it after the valkyrie was narrated to concoct an evil plan so of course, my first thought is negative). Anyway, I really have to give it to the author. That skill is really a talent. In addition, I also in awe of how you seamlessly combined the concept of Eastern cultivation and Western magic. I mean, it's not that this is the first time but I honestly love how you managed to give some background about magic and cultivation at the same time. You really have a lot of potential. Lastly, I NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!! Can you bestowed this humble one some more extra chapters? Pleaseeeee?
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Gayathri_Sampath_1903
I have just completed reading this book and I would like to say this book is good and I enjoyed reading this one. Such beautiful realms and lovely places for our FL. Combination of magic, cultivation and qi. just beautiful. Good work author
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DaoisttG3KuY
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Spotbottom
I found love through the free daily reading section this time!!! Immediately purchasing the remaining chapters after my 24 hours were up...πŸ˜… I worried about how the storyline could possibly tie together and actually progress to a satisfactory end with the smaller(than I'm used to) chapter numbers. But our magnificent author did a great job! And I must warn and advertise the excellent "adult" scenes we were blessed with!!! MAGNIFICENT pictures were painted by our loving author. Within these scenes(waggles eyebrows) and throughout the book the personalities of our FL and her mates were clearly and thoroughly shown to us. I feel like I knew them all, and could almost predict their actions because of my clear understanding of each character! And I feel that's an amazing feat to accomplish within 308 chapters. Oh! I mustn't forget the fact that the grammar was great too! I didn't even notice the "normal" errors that I've seen in other books on here. There are some of what seems like auto-correct misspelling errors. But there was nothing that made the story disjointed to me! If you find the intro interesting, then give it a chance and read the free chapters! You might just find one of your favorite stories, and a favorite author!!!πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°
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mimi_josy
This book is worth it. I love the reverse harem.😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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maritesbmanahan
like the overall development of both the characters and the story. It was not to short or long. loved the ending and full circle elements.
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Skyjade
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This is the best web novel I have ever read, please keep up with the good work author san! πŸ™πŸ»πŸ’– more power to your novel creations in the future! πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ‘ŒπŸ»
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Yukome
It's a really interesting novel without revenge. How could I say? Satisfied, maybe? It just me who tired reading story about hateful antagonist and nonsense yet brainless talk between antagonists. It just.... I have not enough Fast Pass to read all in one go 😀.
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Eira_zumi
I really enjoyed the development of the relationships between each character. the world is fun and I find the soul mates idea fun. I loved the story and am.happy to see it end in peace and happiness.
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Fredrick_Foogle
Really loving the series but hasn't updated as of yet so unsure if it's been dropped for a new series or not as it's only been 7 days since last update. But, I really hope it hasn't been dropped with how much cash I dropped to binge this series lol
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Daoist188811
It is the first time I have read a reverse harem, I am still reading chapter 21 and I am impressed by this novel. The protagonist is interesting and I hope that throughout the story it will continue with this good storyline.
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QueenFK_B
This book is awesome, I am hooked and I can’t wait to read more! I came across it by accident but I’m glad i did, i can’t wait for more chapters to come out!
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alalwanyr
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21kenchikis
This is an absolutely awsome novel so far. I wish the author all the best so as to successfully continue posting lots and lots of chapters! So far my favorite novel!
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Weiwei05
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Lanie_Tayone
Nice story I love it but I need coinsssssss also I want more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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ranimah
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Interesting, funny and fulfilling story. So nice to read, The characters building is awesome and the female lead is cute and funny. All the male leads are awesome and out of the world characters.
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BlueFlame_Mecc
I have to say! the name of the novel fits like a glove, it is a glamorous journey, I have only started today, but I got hooked, and I can not wait to read the five male leads, I have only read one until now the forth prince, and I love him, a question, did she get married to the five or only one?
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ProGameris
Ooooh, reverse harem! Sounds INTERESTING!!!! Can’t wait to get started on this!!!!! πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜πŸ˜„πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜„πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜„πŸ˜πŸ˜†πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜„πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜„πŸ˜
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Asin13
Ahhhhhh! I must say you are great authornim! I love everything u do to come up with everything in this story! I wish this book of your and others as well get lots of love and gets loved forever. If u ask me...i would say you not to think twice and just jump into it and read it. She is a great and awesome author! I hope your book goes to the peak and shine forever. keep going and beat of luck✊ I love you❀❀
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