Chapter comments on the chapter And It All Starts With A Bath House of the book War Between Two Different Worlds

Personally I have enjoyed the first chapter. It has few grammatical prob, but all and all boy that was some crazy imagination. I liked it.

nice.

a sci-fi/fantasy novel this time so the althor can throw his imagination in this time, which mean the serie not goin to get drop anytime soon RIGHT?

Nice start. Crazy A.I, hmm perhaps nice planet

Grammar could use some work. But the concept is there~ great job.

like it

Good start 10/10

Quiet nice! Only one thing, "8.30 min" sounds odd but sicfiish. I know what you mean but 8:30 min sounds definatly better.

Haha seriously this is some good imagination you have here lol.

nice start

The Grammar may not be that good, but at the very least the story is interesting.

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