It’s good, I’ve never been one who cared about grammar and such so I have nothing to say on that, but story wise, it’s good realistic, and actually explains everyone’s fought process, you I’ll genuinely understand motives and care for characters, however it’s gets on your nerves, around 120, I think, almost every plot is rounded up, the 5 plots for each set of characters just need rounding up and finishing, and yet they added another problem, one which annoyed me so much I swore out loud in front of my parents for the first time, and skipped 5 chapters or so, luckily our main two chapters get together half way through the story so you don’t have to wait forever
okay! so let's start, uhh..but from where?
like everything was in place, the grammar, the writing style...so sophisticated, and the world background was written so well. I'm hooked! This is really really an astonishing novel!
keep up the great work author...
added it to my library, looking forward to more
While reading this novel, I had felt a myriad of emotions. I had cried like a baby, laughed so loudly my mom looked at me weird, lost my sleep for one night and even at some moments wanted to kill the author(I'm sorry saturnalia-san).
Now the writing quality is superb and I loved it always. it always made me interested and engaged. I love the dialogues and the way it is written.
I can't say anything about updates tbh. I just binge-read all 7 volumes in 4 days and I guess the novel update was kinda consistent when I looked?
I love almost all of the characters (except Michi) and since I am quite possessive I found myself quite similar to Haruna and tbh every character felt interesting in different ways...its quite hard to explain in words, to be honest, and I think experience is the only way to understand what I meant. just loved everything I recommend it.
okay about the story. I am quite new to this girl love genre and I will say that all of the difficulties I would expect and beyond in such relationships were depicted quite well. Although the initial affair wasn't realistic. the stuff that followed was surprisingly realistic. but it's a personal opinion but romance between Michi and Chiyo as well as budding between Mayu and jasmine felt forced. I wanted mayu, Itsuki and jasmine with others staying friends...but I guess it's the author's choice welp.
now I'm getting quite the feeling that Katsumi is going to end up with hanami... I hope it won't happen to be honest... it's a really good story but if in the end, all it is about is every girl appearing as a character in the novel loving another girl closest to them, I feel that the entire charm of this novel is going to fall. it's about the rarity of such relationships and their effects that gave charm to this novel..but if it's going to become a romantic partner 'match the following' of each girl and every other girl appearing in the novel, I'm going to go into a depression.
I fear the above point so much that I would rather drop this novel rather than be hurt about this novel not meeting my expectations...
In the end, it's an awesome novel and I loved it so much that I would rather drop this novel in fear about it leaving a bad taste in me in future by making the entire story a delusion beyond delusions
sorry if it was long and boring...Thanks for reading!
I have never read something as good and highly detailed as this book and I must be completely honest, but I can see a potential anime coming out of this book.
a good and easy-to-read work is great for distraction and relaxation (if you are a yuri lover) for me there is only one drawback sometimes it is very tedious to read and unnecessarily drawn out, but otherwise good work
love this story i haven't finish this yet but i hope it will turn great as everyone is saying and i hope it's happy ending
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The story is sooo goood. It's really amazing and I can't stop reading. The characters is well developed and writing quality is great. I recommend everyone that interested in slow romance to check it.
i dont think im good enough to actually be judging this type of story, but i really liked it so i will write my piece here.
first of all, there's so much emotion u can feel by reading this, it's too much. at many points i had to stop and leave. i come back later for more.
but it's not all good. but what's bad for me is actually good stuff from the author too. the bad emotion i feel is because author wants me to feel it. and even if i hate it i have to admit, author is good.
in the end, im stopping and not continuing, but i still recommend this book to whoever wants to read a really heavily emotional story.
the only reason i don't like it is because there's too much bad happening to the main character. i cant take it.
I've finished reading this for 2 days,i tried my best not to sleep just to know the story,and now i'm happy about the mc's that they've became a couple.And as i became closer reading thw latest chapter,there's this chapter that i cried,it's a tears of joy for michi and chiyo.Not gonna lie,i'm more looking forward about michi's and chiyos's now. There are times that i read faster just to get to the point where michi and chiyo's is.So for me overall i really reccomend this!Thankyou author! It's my first time giving a rate or a comment in a novel!
First of all and not the last, I would like to say that this story at first is irritating, but on second thought , I’m always hooked whenever the two got together although they argued all the time like cats and dog, and got excited whenever their feelings of love showed to each other’s, even in their in denial state, all is all i really like this story. I’ll give you 10/10.
Good job.😊🥰😍
I am addicted to this story! The author has done a wonderful job captivating the reader and you can't help but root for the characters in pursuit of love.
The novel is amazing, the characters are great, writing quality too. I really enjoy reading it and I always get tense when I think they're going to confess.
The only complaint I have is that I think they should just confess already, everytime they try it just becomes a Mexican novel (drama and taking to long for things to happen) but don't get me wrong I still love your story
This story is a pain to read one of the two main characters is just a bully and an iredemable *****. As someone who finds likable characters to be the most important thing in a story I cannot rate this story highly. I don’t like reading about bullies or bullying in general and thats all the mc does. Don’t even get me started on Akio. He manipulates the girls feelings repeatedly to force them to spend time together for an “experiment” when it is clearly unhealthy for the both of them and everyone around them. Kanako shouldn’t have even bothered giving Haruna another chance after what she did and chio is the only character that’s enjoyable to read about.
Love this book! It's so good and interesting. I can't wait for next update.
The character development is awesome and I hope for more intense romance to happen soon. Totally recommend this. 🤩🥰🤩🥰
I love how the story started and progressed. The author has done a good job building characters. As a fan of LGBT stories, I recommend this to everyone to read. Can't wait to see the next update.
I love the story so mucchh.The plot progress not too fast and not to slow.The development of character is very good too.
Michi x Chiyo
Jasmine x Mayu
Haruna x Kanako
Itsuki x ???
(I hope my ships end up together)
Well, this are my ships Mayu is for Jasmine,as for itsuki well I just hope that she and Hinami will get closer.Well, too bad haruna and kanako didnt get ending up with each other on Christmas, I was kinda moping because of that but the Michi x Chiyo ship is progressing so its all good.(Please dont let this story be a sad ending)😣😖
I really would recommend this book to all new readers. It is such a fun read and it has a lot of depth to it. We saw the progression of the characters as a whole and it is beautiful. I do however find the way the dialogs is written a bit confusing? But overall it is still a good read!! Rating: 8.5/10
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This deserves a manga, IT WOULD BE GREAT. i mean, this novel has this shoujo-ai vibes sooo, this deserves a manga. btw PERFECTION. this story is epic. wish it would take more than a hundred chapters b4 it ends... yeah
I'm really enjoying the story so far and I think how the Author develops the relationship between to the main two girls is smooth.
However I have a question, when do they get together, I'm just finishing the first part so I'm not that far through, maybe 17 or so chapters. But I wanna know when it happens, or if it like the last chapter in the novel when they get to gather like most romance anime?
EVERYTHING IS PERFECT, THIS STORY DESERVES A TOTAL 5 STARS, I DONT EVEN REGRET READING THIS, CHARACTER DEVELOPMENTS ARE PERFECT, THE CHARACTERS, EVERYTHING. i dont usually write reviews but THIS STORY IS JUST TOO GOOD. Btw, if haruna and kanako ever became a couple, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEAASSEE CONTINUE THE STORY, LIKE HOW THEY'RE RELATIONSHIP WORKS, BIRTHDAYS, EVENTS AND STUFF.JUST PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY EVEN IF THEY BECOME AN OFFICIAL COUPLE!!! IT WOULD BE GREAT!!! but i would understand if this novel ended with them being a couple in the end...
Whoever comes across this novel should definitely read it. It is by far one of the best books I have ever read in this app. I love all the characters and how they are all relatable. It really lightens up my mood whenever I'm down.
I love this novel 😍 I need more of Date Her Instead 😍😍😍 I can't wait the romantic development between Haruna and Kanako 😍💘💘💘😇 I hope Author Sama will Update everyday 🤗🤗🤗☺️
Thank-you Author sama for this wonderful Novel and always Stay Healthy 😊😊😊😊☺️😇
It's like reading a shoujo ai manga(well this is a shoujo ai webnovel hahaha)
〜(꒪꒳꒪)〜 I always read mangas with a genre like that, and I can really say that this has so much potential, ⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾
Okay so this is one of the best novels that leaves me intrigued and wanting more. And you surely deserve a five star. You're doing an amazing job.
Based on your current chapter and a few previous ones after Akio decided to break the deal. From my own perspective it would be better if Haruna kept her feelings and then let Akio keep getting close to Kanako. By the time he realizes oh, she's no longer playing to my script (to make her jealous and want to confess) he'd surely stop going close to Kanako. Which she may be hurt but Haruna would be there then.
But I love where you're taking it. And I love the flow.
Keep up the good work.👏
This story is so well written and realistic, That even I can relate to the main character, which I can't do a lot. If your looking for a slow burn, well developed, rival/enemies-to-lover yuri then is the novel for you
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