Beautifully written. Ah. The intricacy of the writing style made me very much enthralled and immersed in reading. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. I don’t think I can critique anything else. Narration is conveyed in a fluid manner, as well as the dialogue. Characters are dynamic as well. Grammar is obviously not an issue, however I do suggest you to break the large blocks of paragraphs because one tend to get intimidated in mobile.
Overall, it’s a very good read. Keep up the good work.
Anyone who knows me will know this is not my usual type of book to read... In saying that I can see it becoming another pit for me to toss valuable time into. I'm going to go read more chapters now. And you who is reading this review well... You should start!
A little confusing at first with the different point of views but like it. Vampire and Witch partnership for the win. All those against them makes me hate them to death. That includes the King and Tamlet etc. Reminds me of Twilight series and Vanpire Diaries.
the title of your chapters are rather odd. anyway i'm still giving five and hope you wont feel down but you could use some advise from your editors on how to put title on your chapterchapters properly. the flow is great but i am hesitant to spend and unlock your chapter because the title are appallin as i go on. it's a great piece, keep writing!
this is so beautifully written..so typical of a good writer. though i have to consult mr webster from time to time it's so fulfilling. at least i am not wasting my time on those no nonsense books. there were few errors grammatically but the overall writing is excellent. good job there author
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Shameless self review: Witch Are You? Is a work in progress and I'm constantly going back to edit for clarity and consistency so don't give up on the story if you're just starting out! Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks for reading!
Good start to a potential good paranormal story. So far the characters appear well thought out.
Its still early to really grasp the world development but what is there upto chapter 13 is well thought out.