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Wolfgirl1215
Ah, this is beautiful!
Aurora is such a strong lead, I absolutely love her personality, sweet and a little sarcastic, its really refeshing! She has great dynamics with the other characters, who are all so well scripted too!
Its such a pleasure to read such a well fleshed out story, the world building elements are really strong, and I like how the author doesn't reveal everything all at once, but let's the plot unravel at a nice pace.
The writing is fantastic, beautifully detailed- I could picture everything so clearly, it really felt like I have been scooped up and put in that world!
Author, you have some amazing skills!
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miu_hozuki
If there's one thing I dislike with cultivation novels it is an slow start. Any way some one's going to die, and some one's going to become a side kick..
it's usually annoying when authors take forever to get there ..but in this novel, that part is palatable. Author's language quality and the well formed description of scenery makes up for it.
Good job. Try it. It just might be your cup of tea.
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Mel_Aniv
This novel was written so well. I think this is the kind that I need to learn from. In my view, this will become popular in the future as I saw only several chaps but it already has that kind of views. I am very happy to experience such wonderful work and Kudos! Peace โ๏ธ
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Martin_T3
It's not really my type of a story. However, it is still well written, and both the world and its characters are amazingly built. All in all, an excellent job, author.
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AstralGodZero
The story is great, there are only a few small problems I have with it. First, there is confusing narration where actions are not fully described or reasons for actions not being fleshed out.
Like in the first chapter when the girl was hit in the head and the crowd was told to leave. The crowd simply dispersed from a shout of an unknown person, and without much thought either. Were they afraid? or did they simply not want to offend someone stronger than them? Who is the Song Family?
Small things that need to be explained. That's all.
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Colin_Daumen_5202
New work from the author, who had come back a hardened veteran after his previous works were published on Amazon. Hopefully this story pans out to be even better!
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DuskArcanist
Hello everyone, author here. I have returned to Webnovel after almost a whole year. It has been a laborious time at my university, however I am ready to create something new for you all to enjoy!
Hope you've been doing well during this godforsaken pandemic :P
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EternalNightLotus
This is a great story. The author's writing style is really entertaining, the narrative is clear and the characters are not one sided and actually have personalities. The chapters are well written and I can't find any typos that disrupt the flow of the story.
Overall a very interesting read. I'd like to see more, especially mc's system return
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NotUse
I was able to read nine chapters so far and this is my review:
The author's writing quality is just great! It is obvious the author is great when it comes to grammar. There were no misspelled words and typos but I noticed there were some comma misuse especially at the end of the dialogue but that is nothing to deter from the read.
As for the stability of updates, I am giving this an automatic five stars. I do not know if the author updates daily but like what I always prefer, it is better to have excellent chapters rather than rushed ones. So, take your time author and don't be pressured! I prefer quality of quantity.
Story Development is nice. The pace is perfect and smooth. Things are exact and the author proceeds to the main point right away.
Character design is perfect since I was able to imagine how they look within a few paragraphs. The details are precise, this also goes with the world background. Scenarios are vivid, another thing I love about this novel. I can portray what the author wants me to portray and while reading, you can really feel what the characters are feeling, as if you are in the book itself.
Lastly, I wish the author all the best! Good luck with your writing and may you be blessed with a bounty of readers and collections!
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DuskArcanist
Hey guys, author here once more. I'm more regularly releasing content for my second series, Virtues of the Chaosbringer. I hope you all enjoy this new series, as I'm putting a lot of effort into writing it. There WILL be mistakes here as I will write and forget the stuff here, whilst I will ONLY edit it before publishing it on amazon. However, I will be releasing consistent content for the next 2 months, so I hope you are all prepared for it.
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ozzybanks
Loving this book! The writing is very articulate, making it very easy to read, which I always look for.
I'm a sucker for re-incarnation stories and game systems, and this book really fills my hunger!
I'm glad to see that the author moved the novel to amazon, I find it a lot easier to read there, but I'm looking forward to updates here!
Keep posting ^_^
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Saarlink
I enjoyed the start and was unimpressed with the change of direction the novel takes as it goes along.
The world building is solid. Nothing amazing but it is enough to keep people interested. It does start to fall apart a bit as time goes on. Why there are rivers and lakes in the middle of a desert for example?
The characters are...fine? The MC has a good foundation (I like the med student background for example) but often makes seemingly cliche and forced decisions. His decision to be stronger just kinda happened and felt wrong. Other characters are the same. Our elf character doesn't seem to have a good reason for befriending the MC. Our drow doesn't seem to hate elves much despite having lots of reasons to.
The kicker for me was the sudden decision to make things hard for the MC. Stealing his system, his cultivation, his spells, and basically everything to put him back at step 0 was just... why? And if someone did screw you up so badly, wouldn't you react? His opponent literally destroys his cheat and his response was to...forget about it? His teacher feeds him poison and his response was...thanks? I lost the will to read more. An MC needs hurdles and challenges sure but this felt like you had written yourself into a corner with his cool abilities and you were trying to get out of the corner by making everything that happened/that he had irrelevant.
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LightSanUwU
Have read up until the latest chapters. The author's writing has improved so much since the first chapters, and the story is looking like it'll progress really nicely. UwU poor system, hopefully MC san becomes OP soon.
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whoknowwhat
This is a great book with a balanced MC in a very interesting world. The writing quality is superb and everything flows so smoothly. It's actually hard to think that this is the author's first book. I reccommend this book even through it hasn't progressed so far story-wise, I still really like this.
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DuskArcanist
Author here again. Just want to ask that everyone who reads it, if possible, to leave feedback when there are any mistakes present, or If the story feels convoluted or doesn't make sense. Thanks !
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Paget
I like it so far. There are a few mistakes here and there but it is pretty easy to read. The story is moving at a decent pace without feeling rushed. The main is likeable and it is nice not to have someone who is stupid. Thank you for this looking forward to more!
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RenuKakkar
Quite a lot of effort is being put into this novel. I really appreciate this in you, author. The writing quality of the novel is great. The characters (very few at present) are well defined. The story is developing nicely. World background is good too.
Keep it up.
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ThePotatoKing
Nice story.
I really like the system the Mc has.
The story and pacing is also good though quite fast at the start.
The MC also has a really nice attitude.
So good luck.
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LightSanUwU
The writing still flows nicely and the story has been progressing well. Keep up the content, and just maybe build the world a bit more and develop some side characters!
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sinfuego
A lot of thought has been put into the world and plot. Very detailed, and definitely a lot of love put into the story. Definitely has an intriguing plot, and is definitely entertaining.
My one criticism is that the characters are a little flat. They move the plot forward along nicely, but they don't seem to have any will of their own, getting swept up by the plot instead of making choices that will impact the story.
Other than that, no complaints. Grammar and writing quality is good. Starts off a little passive, but gets progressively better each chapter. Also has some nice funny moments.
Keep writing, you'll definitely get better!
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RiriHeart
This type of story is new to me yet I found it interesting. The game and the place was describe and explained well so it was easy for me to understand the story. I also liked the personality of the ML, he was really determined to learn about his acquired skill and even the place. On top of that, he could be funny in his own ways. He really entertained me throughout the chapters. I strongly recommend this book. Respect to the author.
P.S. Author please get a girlfriend for ML, you know he's a hopeless romantic in his previous world. Kekeke
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Snowin
After reading a few chapters, I honestly don't have much to critique in a negative way.
The descriptions are good (Not too long and not too short)
The dialogue flows smoothly, and the thoughts are well mentioned with the ' '
The story doesn't start out with too much information and moves at a pretty steady pace. I can tell that the author has thoroughly edited his work, as there are practically no grammatical errors.
All in all, very well written!
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MokouFriedChicken
Well thought out, this one.
Grammar has minimal errors, making for comfortable reading. Dialogue also feels natural. Descriptive writing is also well realized, painting the scene with good precision. Prose however, felt a tad stiff for my liking. While very descriptive, it read like you were telling a story, not showing one. It's a vague concept, I know, but a 'show don't tell' approach is an idea I wholly subscribe to, using more flowery prose or the character's cadence and reactions to paint the background for me.
Keep on writing, I for one appreciate planned out stories. ๐
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DuskArcanist
Hey guys, author here. I've decided to write this little review here as there don't seem to be many around at the moment, feel free to review this novel to death people, any criticism is wanted and will just help me to write a more appealing story. Have I not done enough world building? Is the character development too shallow? Just write any of this stuff down. For now thanks for reading everybody. Love Arcanist :) <3
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EatEat
Love the story. It's a regular reincarnation novel with a MC who isn't stupid and also has a game system cheat, yet he isn't OP because of it. Hopefully the story develops well, there's only like 10 chapters out rn. Can't believe my bro is a writer goddamn
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Daoist922237
Not bad, live the story so far and canโt wait for more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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MagicMan15
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LightSanUwU
Keep working hard! Stay consistent with updates, nice so far. Loving the theme of the story so far. Hoping to see lots of improvements in your writing in the future.
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