Reviews of Lumia: Other World by Mel_Aniv - Webnovel

Hello! The author here! I am currently editng my work from scratch so there will be delays on my release. Remastering and revising my work with the help of my editor and proofreader. I will improve my writings and may you bear with me. That's all.

Very little world background is discussed. There is little to no background for how classes work up until I stopped reading. Man sentences are messed up from translations. Story skips time crazily by years with little detail over what happened in that time. Most of the reviews look like paid reviews, a lot of reviews and comments for book with very little read time.

When you start reading the novel you notice how good the story line is. The novel has many good details inside about the story. You should read this novel.

Reviewing this author is quite a dare, the search engine with the name or pseudonym: Mel_Aniv, lists 64 works... The Story: Lumia: Another World. Genre: Fantasy 224 Chapters 830.7K views The first chapter: Retreat... was written on 25 April 220; Mel_Aniv, has been writing for 9 consecutive months. He shows perseverance, being a professional, involved artist, a gifted reader-writer providing hundreds of avid pages full of stories to listen to, tell or just read. Translated with ***.DeepL.com/Translator (free version)

This story is very interesting and it got me hooked up instantly. The plot was unique and immediately piqued my interest. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it. The author did a great job in describing scenarios. All in all, the author did a great job, and looking forward to reading more.

The story is amazing! I am hooked with story's ups and downs. Please continue this work👌 I'm totally looking forward to the new chapters 😍 btw, I'm from the review swap

Hi and awesome job! I've only read a few chapters so far but I can't wait to go deeper into the story. I found the pace and build up refreshing for the genre. I'll add to my collection because I'm sure there's more in store for Mael's journey! Thank you for the swap and good luck as well with your work!

im going to read your book it looks really interesting but most of all i like your synopsis and also good luck in your upcoming books!!......

Very nice story! After reading the synopsis and the first few chapters, I was thinking this novel was right up my alley. It is beautifully done. I hope the author will continue to release more chapters.

The story is engaging. The quality of the writing is also very neat although there are a few errors in the use of punctuation. The story development is also very well written. I really enjoyed this story. Overall impressive! Keep it up!

Reincarnation I love the most. The plot synopsis is really great. The characters a re also good. I can see you and your team are spending much effort in serializing. I really hope the MC ends well. I really enjoyed the story. More power to you guy.

Let me take a minute to process everything..... This was nice! A whole new level kind of nice! A heart tearing kind of nice that left us, readers, feeling emotional and passionate and...man I'm so touched. This is a one in a million kind of nice. You did a good job there author! I wish you luck on your writing journey! I look forward to more of your incoming chapters. Hands raised to you! Keep up the good work!

I was already hooked after reading the synopsis, and the first chapter was really really good! Keep it up author, and keeo updating it! I'll continue to read this story because it's really very good!!!

Very good story here! Author weaves his character into a new world rather abruptly, but it soon doesnt matter because the new world itself is exciting!! Characters are interesting and have their own thoughts so far; no one takes tne MC for granted and whatnot. But I’m excited to watch our young MC grow more and more powerful as he grows up! Thanks for writing!

This is incredible and mind-blowing. I am in awe in front of your writing skills. Like, seriously. I have only read the first chapter so far and the feeling of betrayal in the very first part... god, you know how to play your audiences. I can’t promise to read this book to the end - or at least not in the time being - since the chapters are a bit long and I already have many books to read. However, for people who are interested in reading a long and well-written book, I definitely recommend this book.

Its a good kind of slow-burn story. as it goes on you'd see setups that the author has planned in advance. It's a good book to get lost in, and with time it just gets better. I highly recommend it to those who want a good read. I only hope that by the time I catch up on the chapters, the story is ready to go. cheers!

The novel is good. Lots of action scenes from the start! And its great! The characters and world background is good. It got me hooked and will continue reading it! Good work author!

whoa, the story is quite[img=recommend]... am short of words... honesty am looking for to reading the rest of the Chapters... epic work. .. keep it up

This is wonderful, I'm totally in love with this book... The plot is interesting, the style of writing is more than unique, and I'm totally hooked by the characters... The book is already on my library, and I can't stop myself from being addicted [img=update] Keep on doing the amazing job author ❤

I really love this book! The synopsis is very capturing and writing style is very good! Readers wont be disappointed by this and the hype is well deserved! Good work author!

This is probably the first time I wish a character did not isekai lol. As an assassin he's so cool ha. I wished we'd seen that plotline a bit more. But my obsession with Assassins aside, this is a quality read. I love that the author incorporates details in the storyline from his old life to details of the new world. I'm sure his previous life's experience will really shape his new life in an interesting way. Good job Author :D

The writing of the story is superb, easy to read and the descriptions are really well defined. The story itself is intriguing with elements of RPG on it. The author is well versed on his style in writing and I can tell of the experience and mastery of the language he uses. All in all, I give this novel a perfect 5 because I have seen such skill of writing the author possess. Keep up the good work author!

Great story, It kinda gives of vibes from the beginning after the end which is one of my favorite manhuas. However, it has its own uniqueness which I really like. If you like reincarnation stories this on is for you

Ok, hold up, I love wedding stories ok! Like you did good bro! Keep it up, you did amazing. I'm speechless, literally, the first few paragraphs blew me away. Keep it up dear author, and good luck with writing! I recommend checking grammar errors, they always happen, that is no big deal! Good luck!

I very much enjoyed reading this one, and it was an instant library add for me. I loved all the punchy lane-changes in the first chapter. Has all of my favorite genres rolled into one, so it grabbed my attention straight away. I also enjoyed the voice of the author, which I found to be crisp and clear with a refreshing undercurrent of comedic impact. Only feedback is being nitpicky over grammar issues that may be a distraction for some, but it didn’t detract from my enjoyment. Grab onto a native English editor and it would just help to button-up the great work you have.

I really like the character as a person and as his character develops. I am looking forward to how the book commences. I have only begun but I am enjoying it. It isn't really my genre but it is interesting enough to make me stay.

At the beginning it was a bit slow but as I kept reading it got better. The characters are well developed. It's not really what I would enjoy to read but I definitely enjoyed your novel. Keep it up

I like that despite the fast pacing of the first few chapters of Mael Growing up, you still keep it realistic. The MC is strong and talented which amazed his parents, but his genius still can't easily beat experience during the coming of age chapters when fighting his father. This is a good story, and there's a lot of chapter which I can spend a lot of time to read during my free time!!

The book engages the reader from the start with a gripping twist in the first chapter. I look forward to seeing how the ML will level up and I hope he finds a way to get revenge for what happened to him in his first life. Keep up the hard work, author!

Yo, a Filipino author. Nagugutom ako pag may sinigang di jkjk. The story's interesting though. The initial chapter has a bit of romance then the pain escalated quickly. Few tenses may mix up a bit but overall, the writing quality is good. [img=recommend]