Reviews of Tale of Discovery by Exalted_Felix - Webnovel

Was bored, so I decided to review my own book. What is this book about? Discovery of character and worlds. It's basically exploration but on a dimensional scale. The book targets a very specific kind of audience. To deal with that early on, I've written a "What to Expect". For people who wouldn't want to bother with it > This fanfic can be dark. You've been warned. Thrice. Synopsis, this review and the "what to expect". The pacing of the storyline honestly depends on the arc. There could be a lot of fluff or smut in one arc and a grand war without a single moment of peace in another. The MC in this book is pretty OP so that's that. I do need to mention the fact the novel begins in Yosuga no Sora. I don't think I need to elaborate any further on that. No NTR. Lots of blood. Plot twists. Meme and other references.

I've been reading this one for a while and noticed that it doesn't have the appreciation that it deserves, I guess everything is Marketing at the end of the Day, this fanfic reminds me of 'God succession System' in regards that they're not placed in the ranking they should, I don't dare say they're top 5 but definitely top 15. Writing Quality: Little to none grammar mistakes and great use of synonymous. Story Development: Also great, not loyal to the original stories contained in it, which makes it way better, also the new layout made by the author is not some crazy thing, it is a story that somehow makes sense, even tho everything hasn't been revealed yet. Character Design: Very well done, definitely each character has their own personality, you will find every dere in existence in this fanfic I think and they're in the harem too because yes, this is a Harem novel. World Background: I guess this is where this novel highlights the most, great Nanuverse-type system the author made here, I shall explain better further down. Now my personal opinion *Spoiler Alert* I don't like two things about this novel, everything else is perfect: 1.- It is a little too confusing at the beginning, don't know if I'm the only one but usually unless the story got me hooked up too much I don't read every single word of the paragraph but jump between sentences and I use my logic to comprehend them, thus reading faster, in this one I began and read every single one of the first two chapters and still didn't understood fk all xD dropped it in the list for a few months until I was bored with nothing to do and gave it a chance, after understanding the 'system' the author did, I like it now. 2.- The author is a fking lolicon... As if... Diehard lolicon... Been tempted to call FBI a couple of times already to get his ass jailed. As of now, there's only 2 'official' Harem members: Tiamat and Gabriel. Other milfs have been introduced but it hasn't gone further than a few kisses, he even gives them 'time' to settle their feelings before going all the way with them. But when it comes to lolis, fk it all, take them straight away. So far he has only gone all the way with Tiamat. Come on bro, I'm not saying leave the lolis but what is this Bias? I'll now make a simple guide of the terms I somehow understand: - Rift: It is the main world MC belongs to, a mix between DxD and Yosuga no Sora (maybe some others too). - Mete: I don't know WTF this is (it's like a place between the rift and the platforms where the transportation between worlds takes place? Not very sure) - Codes: Characters with special abilities that allow them to travel between platforms (worlds), they have a power ranking - Unknowns: Characters or entities that come from outside a specific world. - Platform: Is the different worlds there are, rather than call them (anime worlds) author prefered to call them [platforms] to make it more realist and not look like MC is some otaku travelling through the multiverse. Now the things that I like: 1.- Except for DxD, the worlds chosen aren't cliche: Owari no Seraph and Zero no Tsukaima as of now. 2.- MC doesn't know anything about the worlds he goes to, that makes the story more interesting and tense, rather than have an MC that knows everything that's going to fking happen, I prefer when he doesn't know anything. 3.- Relationships are developed with time and there's no Japanese blush-blush-evade bullshit if you know what I mean things are rather straight, MC and girl interact and they fall for each other making slow process every so often. 4.- I like the original way the author made his novel work, even tho there are still things I don't understand and that's because they haven't been revealed yet, everything becomes very entertaining once you understand the concepts that he introduces. 5.- MC is very OP but he delegates work, he has partners and an entourage and they help him if needed. Last but not least, sometimes the fights are confusing because there isn't a proper grasp of the enemies and MC strength, he's said to be OP enough to destroy cities in seconds but then you see him struggling to kill some ants sometimes, so you don't really know if either he's weak or the ant is not an ant, either way, it is not good to boast so much of his strength and title, if he's gonna be beaten the crap out of him just to come out on top at last. Greetings.

Now before anything, i wanna make this clear: It's been a while since I've started reading this and i noticed that very few people seem to express their appreciation, really unfortunate, especially when some 'authors' like ghostyz and akikan who write stuff out of their buttholes still get that much popularity and interaction, it is concerning... Anyway, The story is one of the few fanfictions on this platform that I really enjoyed reading and actually liked the main character who the story revolves around. Now, if you're still in the early chapters, you'll probably think that I'm smoking something to write such a review, but no, it really does improve and everything is properly explained, don't be like me who let this hidden gem rot in his collection because of judging too fast... While the story might start confusing and be a bit annoying sometimes at first because of the main character being too carefree for his own good and how he ignored a few obvious hints, it's explained why such thing would even happen and it's also solved after the end of Charlotte's arc. You'll be given the information required to deduce the reasoning, so you only need a brain to figure it out and then you'll really like the main character starting from that point because everything takes a different turn from the 2nd arc, which is High School DxD with Crossovers, and there's a plot! It's not that Exalf(Author) just put everything in a mixer then said "nah, **** it, imma make a wish fulfillment novel" and produced some kind of trashy shit as a result, but there's an actual plot, a goal, and the novel seems to have so much thought and mental power invested in it, yet you still won't find a "Huge Pa treon Deal" suddenly popping up like a boogie-man and targeting your ass-hole. Now, all of that aside: -Writing Quality: There's almost no grammatical errors and you can actually read it without getting your brain fried trying to figure out what the **** everything means...so you'll be using that spare mental energy for figuring out the plot and trying to predict the upcoming events using the hints dropped in each chapter... -Story Development: It really has great development, like, you'll finally find that it has a plot of its own and isn't just following the original canon, yeah not exactly what happened in the early chapters ofbCharlotte because the changes and improvements were in the latter stages of the arc, but the following arcs are really great, [Btw, Minor Spoiler Incoming...] especially DxD with the crossovers or more accurately, 'The Rift'. There was a plan followed, and it was really great, not just rereading the canon all over again like how most 'authors' of DxD fanfictions do... -Character Design: I think I've praised the main character previously, so let me explain why, well, the main character's alignment is chaotic neutral, if you're not familiar with the alignment system, then in simpler terms, chaotic neutral means "i do what i want, but i have a bottom line", the bottom line isn't the laws but his personal morals, sanity and needs. So you should expect a bold main character who knows what he wants, not a xianxia retard who'll commit a genocide because someone made eye contact with him nor a japanese little boi who'll blush left and right every single second, be 'clueless' about the girls' affection or act like a 'beta-bitch' as they call it here... Speaking of the harem, now...take a deep breath...the author is....a certified lolicon...just like mys—now hold on and let me explain, it's all legal work... But seriously, the harem mostly consists of legal and ancient 'lolis' such as Koneko and Ophis, however that doesn't mean that there are no other types, as along the story, the harem gets to include at least one or more of each type and the balance starts to appears, so not only lolis, there are milfs, yanderes, sane-tsunderes, kuuderes, danderea, and there's even around five sisters/step-sisters till now...though unfortunately, it's not literally Wincest in 'essence' but i won't explain why because that would be considered as spoilers and i won't spoil for obvious reasons... So as I was saying, you'll definitely be satisfied and might even get sweetness-diabetes from the cuteness of the lolis—now put that phone down and don't call the fbi, there's only legal/ancient lolis here... -Updating Stability: Consistently one chapter a day to keep your boredom away, though only till you finish it and the 'hunger for more' phenomenon occurs... And finally, -World-Background: Like i said many times, there's a plot, there's a plan, there's gold, everything is nice and cool. The complementary world building is great and there's world-travel not world-jumping, hope you know the difference... So anyway, go and read it, survive the early chapters, and then everything will prove its greatness and worth to you. The novel may not be from the greatest three of all-time, but it certainly is the top ten in my humble opinion. Also, don't forget to leave a review and some comments here and there to make the author feel that it's worth the effort because he doesn't really get any materialistic win out of this, such thing is very very rare these days...Now Go!

Just cause it has yosuga no Sora I'm back after years and I forgot where I left🙂.. which chapter I'll read again it's one of the best multiversal fanfiction Hope you don't drop author

i am just giving this cuz it have a few of my fav worlds and not the nes like dxd and hod. and beatless fics is literally this only one

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I've been reading this one for a while and its great so far and wait for next chapter.

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

Bu roman nasıl 4.8 puan aldı hiç anlamış değilim. MC insanlara onun başka dünyadan geldiğini söyleyen moronun teki Nao yla arasında hiç bişey yokken birden öpüşmeye başlayıp sevgili oldular bune aq

First time writing a review! And i will say it was a good read even though the mc is just going with the flow at the first volume it got better after it. The interaction with the love interests is so cute❤and funny too sometimes HAHA i hope the author-san will continue this already, Goodluck and thank you for writing this author-san!

i will say my honest opinion, this MC is too passive and just going with the flow, even when he takes action with his OP ability to catch someone, it will still fail to do so, unless he has some new abilities AGAIN coming out so he manages to do some kills in the previous chapter, basically, the MC feels like letting the events around him happen and letting all problems be solved by Nao(from Charlotte), and he just becomes a mutt who gets angry easily when someone talks rudely to his master (Nao), but here we all know, that it wasn't others who didn't want to speak impolitely to Nao, but that it was Nao own behavior that irritated others and retaliated.

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I like this novel. I hope this novel will update faster and I'm waiting for the continuation of the story.. I'm also looking forward to the development of the story, and hopefully it will be more interesting, hehe I'm looking forward to it

What's with trashing the former MC? I mean I don't mind the other MC but bullying Ainz is just ahhhhhh cmon u really do that? steal his memories and Isekai him into a good life he didn't get like Mushoku Tensei or something

I've read this fanfic until chapter 160 and I'm so bored. I thought there would be a lot of action, but i got many ​chapters of a slice of life. also the interactions between mc and the girls are also uninteresting, little development of their relationship and too many girls are neglected and have no screen time

i think the author should remove smart mc tag, because mc is not smart but he's not stupid, he is naif. so for you newcomer, don't get fooled by the tag

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

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me encanto la novela hace poco me la comencé a ver y me gusto mucho. el único problema que tiene es que dejo de emitir capítulos como hace 3 meses y no se cuando volverán a salir. seria bueno que salieran mas pronto

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at chapter 41 I can say I had build up stress reading it.... their are so many random element that it's confusing although they may get clear in further chapters but right now it's too irritating writing quality is good character is should I beginner noob type doesn't really have sense of surrounding should I say....or you can say is careless since everything is new to him.... aside from that I can't understand him .... update should be good as their are 200-300 chaps currently available world background isnt explained complete...and whatever is explained is done in complex manner so be prepared to give full concentration if want to understand properly.....

Bien bien bien bien....... Voy por el capitulo 60 y me sigue gustando la novela..... aun no eh llegado a esos momentos en los que me canso y dejo de leer por que se vuelva aburrido a lento (menos mal que no ah pasado.... *sigh*) Bueno seguire leyendo para ver que tal sigue esta novela xD.

Bueno eh estado leyendo, aunque un poco despacio ya que solo voy por el capitulo 20 de la novela y puedo decir que me gusta lo que estoy leyendo así como su MC... muy agradable el tipo siii.... solo que esta un poco lenta la historia pero igual sigue siendo entretenida hasta donde voy PD: bueno aquí termina mi rewiew del día de hoy (exp :v) mañana seguiré dando mi opinión acerca de esta novela no se lo pierdas y yo no me lo perderé (mi exp:v)

Bueno estoy empezando a leer esta novela así que aun no puedo dar una opinión sobre tal así que solo dejare la prueba de que estoy empezando y luego diré mi opinión al respecto

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Tzu and I are going to the cinema tomorrow evening for a couple drinks with the kids on the way back from work and a good friend and a good friend and a good friend and a good friend and a good good friend and a good friend and a good friend and a good friend and

hmm... a historia é boa (Leitura feita até o ch 40) não é algo que no meu caso realmente me prendeu. mas, gostei bastante, até e parece que o autor vai focar em mundos diferentes dos que já existem novels que li. também acho isso bem bacana. só senti falta de poderes dos animes EX: algo como sharingan susanoo ou armadura dos cavaleiros do zodiaco (minha opinião já que nunca vi algo focado em poderes de cdz) espero que a historia fique muito melhor após isso..

Interesting and interesting and interesting to me and I would be grateful if you could let me know if you have any further questions or if you need any further information or help in the future to help me with the application form and

Muito bom, espero que os capítulos voltem a ser lançados regularmente ............................................................ ............................................................ ............................................................ ............................................................

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Muito bom, umas das melhores fanfics que li esse ano, espero que o autor não desmotive e continue com essa obra ..................................................................

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