I saw the title of this book and I died.
I read the first few chapters in hell/heaven and I resurrected, because this should be read with a bucket of popcorn by the side and sets of Pepsi can, already opened for subconscious pick up to top the popcorn, and those weren't available in hell/heaven.
With that said, the book is going in a good pace and was compelling. Synopsis imbued with book title and pace would get you going and curious to know what will happened next.
Nice work!
Jack is becoming a better man because of Eva. He feels accepted, loved and emotionally free to express himself after a very long time. His growing up years wasn't filled with love, either from family or acquaintances. This led to him being distant, emotionless and a lone wolf and thinking he doesn't deserve love. But knowing Eva for less than a week, a has gotten more than he ever expected and more, knowing people care about him genieuly .
Love and light! Happiness and positivity!
Not your ordinary novel. Every chapter is like a ray of sun shines that will make your heart warm. Characters (Jack & Eva) that like a rainbows full of colors thay compliment each others. They might face some problems but I hope that they will stick together and protect each other. Coz in this life it is always better together! π«
Great Book but the next story has to come as soon as possible thanks for this storyline , everything has been so so nice from the beginning to the end and we hope for the more to come it will stand out then the current one
This is a great story! I can't wait to find out what happens next! There's romance, revenge, fantasy, and many r18 chapters.
CW
Readers should be aware that there are some intense r*pe scenes.
This is a very interesting and funny story ππππππ I like it so much!!!! It makes me laugh!!!! I recommend to y'all to give it a shot too!
Interesting book! I like it!!!! The title is very unique and eye catching hahaha!!!! πππ but I'm sad that author is not updating. I am afraid that they will stop the book half way.
Hey author hope you are doing good and recovering good. Missed your writing and decided to give a shout out to you. Great novel on building positive friendships and watching out for one another. People go through a lot without being able to voice it out because of helplessness, threats and not enough evidence, but with love and the right attitude to believe in yourself, then things can get better someday.
It is awesome story i can't stop to reading πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
hey author,just wanted to tell you I ve been a continuous reader of this novel,such a nice,harmorous ,sweet story,but plz it's a request to update chapters regularly
well as per name looks this sounds funny, bt this novels has all emotions n twists n turns ,innocence ,luv, purity, conspiracy Inshort a Gud one to enjoy n try. .thumps up for this novel
it is an amazing funny yet romantic story......π π π π β₯οΈπ. its character designing, updating, story plot, everything is amazing........ππππ
can't stop giving reviews. Dear author, you sure know how to give the best plot twist and turns. Eva and Jack where childhood friends, she being the first real friend he had that brought out the best in him, and selflessly stood for him. Eva ends up being the first real ***** friend he got, who understands him and is willing to do all she can to ensure he lives a good life, expressed himself and enjoy life in the true sense.
Read until chapter 57 (all free chapters).
Let's start with the rated items:
The writing is above WN average, there is a nice alternating between description and action which helps both immersing into the world but also feel something is going on.
Grammar is OK, a few issues are here and there but author seems to fix those quickly (less than a day).
Some vocabulary choices are strange (shifting house instead of moving house) but probably due to author not being a native English speaker.
Updating: can't rate since I never waited but I don't see how 21 chapters/week warrant less than 5 stars. That said chapters are short.
Story development: The pacing and alternating of point of view is good, people may complain about the story being very slow but I like when authors take time to build the world (I certainly don't like having only descriptions, the world building does have action it just doesn't advance the main plot, like an appetizer). Unfortunately free chapters end just as the two meet.
Character design: Both characters will evoke strong sentiments to readers which is good. They are a bit exaggerated though.
World background: Modern world, author does need to do more research on luxury items though. For example a $5000 dress is actually entry-price for luxury items. In awards ceremonies like the Oscars nominees have dresses that cost 10 times more. For example in 2016 the average was $72,000 with the highest in $125,000. I expect FMC to wear similar high-end tailored dresses.
Now on the non-rated part and critic. Author actively reads and engage with readers however they are also quick to judge comments and assume the worst (happened twice). For example I asked if they were lots of aristocrats in Alaska and author assumed that I was criticizing their setting while I was genuinely asking. Similar thing happened when I commented about the dress prices. I know that we can have bad days, I would have totally understood if the initial aggressive reply was deleted and replaced with a more adequate one but author instead deleted everything.
In summary, the story shows promises but I feel unwelcomed in the community so I'll stop at the free chapters.
@FellowReader, happy reading
@Alaheeza, I wish you luck in your writing career
I must admit that this book is so interesting.It makes you want to read more of its chapters but unfortunately author youbare a bit slow in realising new chapters.your work is commendable author thanks alot.
Hi author, i hope you remember me. I am your old reader and even now a huge fan. (This is my new account). I simply love this book and is soooooo funny. It is rare to find a book which actually makes you see the entire comedy scene and you end up laughing so hard that you get a stomach ache.πππππππ
I love all your books actually and this book jas become my recent one. Thank you author.β£β£β£β£β£πππππ
What a title!!! Hahahaha... it's start tickling me, and make me hook on this book more and more.. nice entertaining story πππππππππππππππππππ
I love this! Really funny, interesting and uplifting. The title intrigued me, didn't think I'd like it at first, but I'm obsessed. Definitely recommend.
This is really good I really recommend you read this book cause it's so good. I recommend you read this on your own time cause it's so addicting. I love the story plot and the characters as well.
This novel is hilarious,i mean if anyone wants to lift up their mood can go for it... The story is nice Nt that typical typs it's good to read such typs of romcom thumps up to the author
Eva the pampered princess who is soft, beautiful and also comes with brains to back up her personality. Jack the rich kid with the worst childhood and parents, who was betrayed by his parents and best friend and taught the worst lifestyles, but broke away from them to start alone with his scars and no real love. Will the loving, beautiful and strong Eva be able to heal his scars, brighten his dark world and bring out the real soft and good Jack? Two souls good at what they do, she is bright and bubbly, he is dark and rude. Can she break through his barrier and colour his world?
ππ i have fallen in love with this story
But the author has to develop his english he made a lot if errors, and he should preview his work before posting.
Please post a new chapter your mentally hurting me
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Swoooshhhh! Another book by alaheeza. You blink your eyes and see another new book launched by her. How do end up with such creative titles and stories author sama?
I have started reading this book and just 20 chapters were enough to hook me..ππππ
May1st