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Precheur
Stability of updates : obviously it's very good. Character design : Much development here for our MC i'm really satisfied, characters feel like living being, they're interesting and deep. Story development : That's personnal here, but i really like the flow of this story, fast or slow when it need to be. World background : Flourishing world. Writing quality : Well english is only my 2nd language, but i never had anything to say about orthography. I really like this story, it's from my point of view a high quality cultivation novel. Since the stone system was adopted i only gave my stone to 2 or 3 stories but i'm ready to give them all to this one. As a conclusion if you're tired of usual CN ****, then it's for you, 100 chapters of pleasure. Don't stop author.
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JustinD
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I highly recommend this novel! It’s funny it’s adventurous has rivalry.. really has a good pace and great ideas can’t wait for him to have a massive army . So take a chance start reading. You won’t regret it.
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hamzah672
Honestly this novel is great, I wish more people would try it because its in the same league as my vampire system.πŸ₯‡πŸ₯‡πŸ₯‡πŸ₯‡πŸ₯‡πŸ₯‡πŸ₯‡πŸ₯‡πŸ₯‡πŸ₯‡πŸ₯‡πŸ₯‡πŸ₯‡πŸ₯‡πŸ₯‡πŸ₯‡πŸ₯‡πŸ₯‡πŸ₯‡πŸ₯‡πŸ₯‡πŸ₯‡πŸ₯‡πŸ₯‡
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Wyald_dog
One of the funnyiest web novels that I've read and a good evil MC.
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a_reader
I shall wait for an eternity if needed. ........................................................................................................................
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trol_reaper
he probably dead........................................ ...........................................................................probably
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Marouane_Talaa
IS IT DROPPED ? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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lilhawk
Please release new chapters .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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doughdeeznuts
It’s so good but the author just stoped updating it iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
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doughdeeznuts
One of my favorite novels because of the mc I love how he is cold hearted _________________________ _________________________ _________________________ _________________________ _________________________
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Tony_Guercio
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Lee_Ches
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Tony_Guercio
Super good πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³
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Unspoken_Curse
Totally awesome, I was hooked on the first chapter!
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Hender
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Paranoid_Bro35
Give my position back ***** seriously Silent is above me. Also why is slow mode activated on server? Dryder is a terrible author and blah blah blah blah blah.
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Neilstone
While the character development, world, setting, and plot are awesome there are still avenues for improvement. As a note, I really enjoyed reading it, I just think reviews without input are pointless. My first complaint would be the perspective, it's written in first person but shifts around like third. There's more of a difference between written perspective than whether he does something or I do. Information dumps they would ignore or overlay with inner dialogue making it feel much more like you're in their head, for instance. Third person follows the situation and first follows the attention of"I", so it's jarring when you read stuff that "I" isn't paying attention to. You didn't go totally wrong but there's room for improvement before it actually feels like you're reading from the character's perspective. Another point of improvement would be dialogue. Regardless of who is speaking, it sounds the same as the narrator/"I"s thoughts. Two people expressing the same thought often do so in very different ways. Not every character needs to reverse the syntax of their sentences like Yoda, but giving characters distinct voices really helps the readers see them as characters in a story instead of the source of information the author chose to speak a sentence. If you think their lines in an accent it can help, but that limits you to the number of accents you can think to yourself in. Similarly, each perspective also sounds the same, the inner monologue doesn't shift in tone or word choice depending on who "I" is. This is one of the benefits of shifting perspective in third person, the tone of the narrator shouldn't change. That isn't the same in first person. Everyone's head sounds different, and that means every perspective should sound different.
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linck_linck
found the story pleasant, the development of the personality of the main character is great, the NPCs are not just to show, they have something unique in each of them. in general the story is very good.
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Hacku
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For me it's a 5 star Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you
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Silent_Void
Please help me! Dryder keeps me in his basement and im hungry.
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Conquerer007
Devil rise is a great web novel, with a devil as an mc from a noble clan at the start the mc is a brat for around 50 chapters but then his personality starts to improve. It has specific and concise explanations, so that really made the story a whole lot better. Plus i can actually feel the evilness in the characters Nice working on editing every chapter author, I'm looking forward to reading it. Great job.
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Brazzersss
I am ngl this book is so good like i am so bloody addicted it's bad for you know!!? Like I dono what to tell you its just plain amazing. God bless the auther lmao
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scs070896
The character development is the best I've ever seen in a novel. Has inspiration from other novels but still keeps it's own individuality. Almost wish I discovered this story at a later date so there would be more to read.
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Original_Virtue
140 word count is killing me dammit this is the best novel I’ve read in a long time it’s very well written the story is great but the best part of all is the author he’s constantly improving at first the fight scenes were utter trash but by the end of what’s currently released it’s flawless beautiful perfect you can tell with every new chapter the author is getting better at writing and constantly trying to improve his work though I will say that the description is a little bit misleading in the beginning he’s not the arrogant young master I expecting it’s a bit more comedic and not as serious as I would’ve thought however it is definitely enjoyable and a beautifully written story I recommend reading it to everybody who enjoys character development and isn’t someone who enjoys trash garbage clichΓ© novels also I wrote this entire thing in voice type so there’s no punctuation sorry and probably some spelling errors because I’m using a phone don’t have time to type all of this but I will be waiting for the next chapters with bated breath thank you author for this masterpiece much love also I only gave the world building four stars because it feels like somethings are not properly explained and sometimes there’s an occasional info dump however even the info dump so well written with a little bit of personality like it’s an actual book instead of just stats For example in the later chapters alchemy is just too explained in my opinion there’s like an entire chapter devoted how it works it’s not unbearable and that’s just about the only thing that bothered me but other than that everything’s great that was only one chapter if not for that I would give this a five out of five stars hands-down
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Yellow_sand24
Great novel and plot. The characters are really thought out and the story is well planned and written. I highly recommend giving it a try as it is one of my favorite novels on this app.
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Johnurfriend
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