Stability of updates : obviously it's very good.
Character design : Much development here for our MC i'm really satisfied, characters feel like living being, they're interesting and deep.
Story development : That's personnal here, but i really like the flow of this story, fast or slow when it need to be.
World background : Flourishing world.
Writing quality : Well english is only my 2nd language, but i never had anything to say about orthography.
I really like this story, it's from my point of view a high quality cultivation novel. Since the stone system was adopted i only gave my stone to 2 or 3 stories but i'm ready to give them all to this one.
As a conclusion if you're tired of usual CN ****, then it's for you, 100 chapters of pleasure. Don't stop author.
I highly recommend this novel! Itβs funny itβs adventurous has rivalry.. really has a good pace and great ideas canβt wait for him to have a massive army . So take a chance start reading. You wonβt regret it.
Honestly this novel is great, I wish more people would try it because its in the same league as my vampire system.π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯
I shall wait for an eternity if needed.
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Give my position back ***** seriously Silent is above me. Also why is slow mode activated on server? Dryder is a terrible author and blah blah blah blah blah.
While the character development, world, setting, and plot are awesome there are still avenues for improvement. As a note, I really enjoyed reading it, I just think reviews without input are pointless.
My first complaint would be the perspective, it's written in first person but shifts around like third. There's more of a difference between written perspective than whether he does something or I do. Information dumps they would ignore or overlay with inner dialogue making it feel much more like you're in their head, for instance. Third person follows the situation and first follows the attention of"I", so it's jarring when you read stuff that "I" isn't paying attention to. You didn't go totally wrong but there's room for improvement before it actually feels like you're reading from the character's perspective.
Another point of improvement would be dialogue. Regardless of who is speaking, it sounds the same as the narrator/"I"s thoughts. Two people expressing the same thought often do so in very different ways. Not every character needs to reverse the syntax of their sentences like Yoda, but giving characters distinct voices really helps the readers see them as characters in a story instead of the source of information the author chose to speak a sentence. If you think their lines in an accent it can help, but that limits you to the number of accents you can think to yourself in.
Similarly, each perspective also sounds the same, the inner monologue doesn't shift in tone or word choice depending on who "I" is. This is one of the benefits of shifting perspective in third person, the tone of the narrator shouldn't change. That isn't the same in first person. Everyone's head sounds different, and that means every perspective should sound different.
found the story pleasant, the development of the personality of the main character is great, the NPCs are not just to show, they have something unique in each of them. in general the story is very good.
For me it's a 5 star
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Devil rise is a great web novel, with a devil as an mc from a noble clan at the start the mc is a brat for around 50 chapters but then his personality starts to improve. It has specific and concise explanations, so that really made the story a whole lot better. Plus i can actually feel the evilness in the characters Nice working on editing every chapter author, I'm looking forward to reading it. Great job.
I am ngl this book is so good like i am so bloody addicted it's bad for you know!!? Like I dono what to tell you its just plain amazing. God bless the auther lmao
The character development is the best I've ever seen in a novel. Has inspiration from other novels but still keeps it's own individuality. Almost wish I discovered this story at a later date so there would be more to read.
Great novel and plot. The characters are really thought out and the story is well planned and written. I highly recommend giving it a try as it is one of my favorite novels on this app.
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