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well not too bad fanfic
but i have already read many with almost same story development so it kinda me pissed off same mc with cheat quirk , no sufferings , long time-skips and many more lets not talk about girls .......( saved a girl from robber and girls turned out to be momo ..lol and next ch momo is in his bed )
man just don't write mha fanfics if u bringing story directly to UA.
well thx i mean.
The mc gets girls with only one hug and there is too much of illogical events and effects without talking about the fact that the mc has no friends others than those who he sucks from the original story
Like the story, good character building and like how he values family and like the girls, but since he reincarnated he should know how things go and shouldn't be angry when things go wrong..... But all in all it was fun while it lasted.
My evaluation is, This story is your typical story written by a new fanfiction fan or a person aged 15 or below.
The Story is filled with cringe, and your typical genre, where the MC is strong but the Plot decides all his moves, there is no originality on it.
This really is a perfect example of a normal Boring Fanfiction.
I want more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more nyaa !!!
This fanfic is straight-up normal as ****‚ I write fanfic before but I don't just rush a relationship. And mc is never killed before then why did you just straight up kill 3 guys without mc feeling anything.
But I will read your fanfic because I don't have anything to do
If you like a OP protagonist and like harem, this could be for you. The author updates a lot and the grammar isn’t bad at all, the story is a bit fast paced but overall it’s not bad. It’s a good quick read, and I enjoyed it a lot.(my opinion)
Basic harem story. Not worth reading, there no excitement, nothing. When there is harem, there is free content... 90% of the chapters are about dates, sex, meeting new girls, problems with the girls, solving the girl's problem and so on. There's no actual story if you asked me, just something for young virgins that start breathing hard at the thought of harem when they can't talk to a girl if it's not family.
Honestly didn't like it, typical cringe harem stuff, main character not really memorable, will probably forget about this story in 2 days. Really boring to read, a mc to whom everything will always go right and he's also going to be op. Girls fall in love during the 1st meeting. Doesn't bring any freshness to fanfics. Probably just my taste, but I think stories like these are bland.
I really like this story. Cant wait for more in the future, I like how you didnt make deku a wimp like how it was in the anime and made him have a backbone.
I know, I'm rating my own stuff but please read and comment to help me find mistakes. It would help a lot in trying to make better chapters and content for my readers.
RazedF1re