I am going to give you an honest review.
A month ago I made a review about myself in it I said: “Shameless Author here I will make this review so people can learn that I might not always upload because I am new to being an author so I might have some bad ideas that I need to extensively review before making a chapter and I might get a writers block and I rated myself how I honestly am so u can check it and see if u want to continue if u want to I will try my hardest to think of ideas and become more consistent in writing in the future so thx for reading.” Was what I said at the time and gave my self 3.5 stars as that is what I deserved at the time and I know it, but I somehow managed to persevere and write 1 chapter everyday and nowadays I am writing 2.
And for me who a month ago was a total newb who knows nothing about writing was somehow able to improve so far which is in itself a great feat to accomplish....
Anyway the conclusion I want to arrive at is that I am becoming better and I will keep trying to improve and become even better.
As for the first 10 chapters if I haven’t already edited them I will surely edit them and improve them when I have the time so bear with me and let’s continue the journey to find what Darkness truly is.
Enjoying the read.
I am not that good at writing reviews so I won't do it, this is more of a support to the author and the novel that I enjoy.
I give my support with it and wish for the author to get experience and improve the overall quality of his writing.
Only by improving and overseeing ourselves can we progress.
Bruh can anyone give me the ebic discord server invite ??
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At first it seemed a bit cliched, but it got interesting as I read further. Character development is smooth, world building was nice, and updates are pretty consistent too. Writing quality can be better, but it's good for now. Good luck!
I really like this story. Nice setting, good background, no harem, and even the classic usage of rebirth, but it has my pet peeves in it unfortunately which makes met unable to read it. You repeat so much information. You constantly use a word that has already been confirmed to describe him and I really can't get into that.
So I apologise, but I can't read any further until that is fixed. Keep up with the good work on everything else though, it was nice.
Because ur story has high emotional rollercoaster rides. There are very positive characters and they are self efficient and motivated. We can read these chapters with smile on your face and positively in your heart.
The concept is good and intriguing that have a lot of potential.
And Apex being trying to look for way to become stronger. What's more, when he found that 'way' he 'accidentally' created something interesting, that made you curious at what will happen in the future.
Now I'm starting to get exited at what will happen next.
And the writing quality is also better than mine. Keep it up Bro.. XD
This is a eastern fantasy story from a beginner author. That's the short review.
And now for the slightly longer one:
The story has an interesting premise. It's basically about a male and a female cultivator couple. Both are loners, have an op background and try to reach the apex. Most stories like this choose a only one primary weapon or cultivation path for their protagonist. From my current understanding this won't be the case here, especially considering the race he has chosen.
As a new author there are obviously problems that can occur in both writing quality and storytelling. But ChaoticLuck is a person who likes to discuss, is willing to learn and improves after he thought things through. Within the first 20 chapters the improvement were huge. You won't be able to see it anymore since the old chapters got reworked.
I'm looking forward to where our journey will lead us.
Very unique start. Cultivator goes to a universe of magic. The concept of fight between origin and existence is very interesting. Although some parts feel cliche, it is mostly very unique. The protagonist is reasonable and doesn't simply look for trouble and make enemies. Finally a FL who isn't gonna be one of the 108 jade beauties, who is forgotten in a few chapters. The FL has her own story and similar goals to MC. Story has a lot of potential, hopefully it goes well. The author is learning and improving so it will probably only get better. The starting few chapters need editing and can be a chore to read, but I assure you to continue, it is definitely worth it.
Meh its quite a good trash novel even though I never read it but will read it later and then I will realize thats its good but will not remove my review such a trash novel and Chaotic if u gonna read this my friend know that I hate you with all my heart even though you helped me creating my novel should I plug my novel in mayv=be its called Requiem Of Pandoras Devil and now I will take my leave. but before the I must stae my affiliations which is.
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Let's see, there are interesting aspects in this story that will intrigue you. I can't help but praise the creative world building of the author. As this is quite a fairly new book, it's great to see enthusiasm and energy poured out into this :D A diamond in the rough, a few polishing will make this quite into a shiny gem!
I think Lu Yao is a cute thing, a cold-hearted woman that pairs with Xue Mo quite well.
I have to say, the ideas behind this story and the potential it has are great! Also, I really like the personality of Xue Mo so far. I'm eager to see where this all is going. I have nothing to criticize in regards to the characters, the overall story or the worldbuilding.
But of course, I won't only heave on praise without pointing out a few things that could still be improved: Although it has gotten better over time, there are quite a few grammatical mistakes and sometimes, the wrong words are being used when they sound alike (for example "loaner" instead of "loner" - or "less" instead of "lest"). Also, the punctuation still needs a lot of work.
Keep in mind, though, all of these are just minor gripes. With experience and getting more familiar with the English language, they'll become less frequent. We all make mistakes like that.
There is just one thing I would recommend: Don't let readers influence your story too much. If you think they had a great idea and it'd perfectly fit in with what you had in mind, feel free to use it. But if you let readers decide the direction of your story and give them too much control, it won't be YOUR story anymore. So in a way, be like Xue Mo: Absorb the best and discard the rest, before making it yours and changing it so it fits in with your vision. (Just precautionary advice, in case you ever feel tempted to listen too much to your readers. You're not doing so right now from what I've seen. I just wanted to say this in advance so you can keep it in mind xD)
That's an awesome novel, author. I like the characters, their development and the way you're writing. Yeah, there are some mistakes here and there, but taht's something normal until you fin an editor for yourself. Good luck!!1