That's an awesome novel, author. I like the characters, their development and the way you're writing. Yeah, there are some mistakes here and there, but taht's something normal until you fin an editor for yourself. Good luck!!1
I don't know how to write review so I just gonna say I like your work and keep it up................................... ................................................... ..............
For a new author I don’t know many novels to be honest as I’m new but I feel like this author is improving drastically with every chapter and he listens and takes advices from people and strives for improvement and betterment so I recommend him.
I am new to webnovel and haven’t read many books but among the 20 or so novels that I read this is one of the best the author knows how to take advice and improve and he doesn’t shy from asking for advice's unlike some other novel’s authors that I read so if anyone is reading this can u help the author by giving him spirit stones reviews and comments so he can improve and the novel would be able to get a better ranking and attract more people and will be therefore more known
All I can say about this novel is that it's a unique take to an OP character becoming more OP. The idea is great, and I can see the enthusiasm of the author while reading the chapters. The only thing I would like the author to improve on is his writing quality.
Other than that, I'm quite interested to find out where Xue Mo will go :)
The story is unique and different from the usual cultivation novels. Even though the author has just begun, His writing style is great and the text is clear and engaging. The story has lots of potentials so support the author with your comments and suggestions.
4.4 for now.i like the beginning. The grammar is great even from the start at least better than mine. The way you tried to portray the MC in a different way is to my liking. I hope you make the story unique in your own way and not follow the regular cultivation. I will rate the book again later after the story progresses a bit further. All the best
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