Reviews of Mortal Kombat System in BNHA by Kriuswer - Webnovel

i remember reading this before it was dropped. it was a new experience as i was just coming into the mha web novels. now that i looked back at it, it still gives me that same feeling but now it is overshadowed by sadness as i know that it wont continue.

For those wondering the novel isn't really much of a Mortal Kombat novel & really is just mostly a teen who decides he wants to be a hero so he can simp over mina & other girls, it also doesn't really have any Mortal Kombat like fighting tournaments with brutal attacks & killing or knock outs by hero's while he uses the system to be more powerful & brutal while promising others rewards is they win like the game r whatnot, just goes along the plot of mha while not really using the story being a good guys who at some point has a club for training his classmates where he helps them by fighting & i think gave them items cause he game izuku gloves to help his quirk as he himself tries not to do to much so people don't realize he isn't exactly normal which leads to him having a tough time now & then since he doesn't really use the op powers either etc. But if that's fine by you go ahead & read it first to see if you like it, i just though it'd be more balanced between mortal kombat & mha with the mc being more of a anti hero as a side job for mha side of things & for his main a fighting tournament job of sorts to keep towards the mortal kombat side of things😟😒

Overall its a good story but my issues with the story is that the grammer is bad there’s no sugarcoating it and the romance feels a bit forced. So if you don’t mind the grammer the I recommend it.

its a good fanfic but there's a lot of Grammer issues like bro why do you use he instead of she and im not talking about one or two times its more like 50 times i found that issue and other issues its obvious English is not his first language and why do you need to make a full chapter about how the mc save his gf from the girls bathroom and how the hack mina could read at the age of 4 and why no one asks from where he gets his martial arts books from but all in all is kinda good

Spam text instead of 15K characters, this is a sign that the author is a degenerate and reading his book is clearly not worth it. Therefore, I write a review with a minimum score, without even reading the first chapter. And what? He can post spam, but I can't post one star without reading it? I just reciprocate the author).

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It's not bad novel, but author can you at least run it once through grammarly after using Google translator to translate this story ? Because it's so damn hard to read. Again, this is not bad story but it's kinda hard to read raw translation straight up from Google translator without even checking for mistakes

Its creepy as ****. The mc as a ***** decides to stalk a girl in his second life, doing what can be summed up as grooming behavior. The girl gets touched as a 3 year old by another 3 year old, on her non existent boobies. Mc goes on berserker screaming my woman dont touch reeeeeee . he just discovered that god exists, there was no troughts about the ramifications of that knowledge. I mean god would have heard his wishes and just say ok mother****er youre going to hell for that. Just woah

interesting concept with horrible execution ... and the grammar, oh man... just read it to experience "the grammar" or use it to train your brain endurance.

I love the development and all, you can really see the author put a lot of thought into this book but I just can't get over the grammar.

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first i didnt want to read it because of some reviews but since i have nothing to read, i started reading it i am impressed with the story it developed very good some grammer mistakes here and there but not so much that you want to bash your head against a wall . love intersest wasnt forced which is good maybe the 3y old was a bit akward but still ok . mc is badass which is good he is dominant but at some moments a bit submission (which is very light)but not to much

Мне нравится этот рассказ и жду продолжения. К сожалению я не знаю язык оригинала и приходится читать через Google translate, но всё равно получаю удовольствие от чтения. В любом случае старайся и дальше автор![img=recommend]

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I enjoy this story alot but the grammar is so bad that it gives me headaches. i was able to read all uploaded chapters. at this point though i will most likely never return to thIs story.

I'm dropping cause the author is school stuff for a school for heroes . And in my opinion the mc shouldn't get mortal kombat powers left and right easily like the mc should have to work for them instead of getting them easily. And finally the fanfic is starting to focus on the side characters more and more in the story

FIX YOUR GRAMMER THIS IS A GOOD STORY BUT YOU RUIN IT WITH YOU BAD ENGERISH SERIOUSLY THIS IS GOOD BUT USE GRAMMERLY OR SOMETHING I DON'T WANT TO DROP THIS FROM MY LIBRARY BUT IF THE GRAMMER DOESN'T GET BETTER THEN IM DONE😔

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This story is overall pretty good. The MC isn't an idiot and knows what he wants to do, and how to do it. He also isn't completely overpowered, so he still gets challenged. The only part I think could have been better is the grammar. It's, kinda below average. It's still a good novel though, and I recommend reading it.

Had a lot of potential but the grammar makes it quite difficult to read. The author also tends to repeat himself at points. But if you can ignore those factors it is an enjoyable read.

Overall I like the system and the rest but, it's unbearable to read, with too many grammatical errors hope you can improve, maybe try grammerly. I have only read to chapter 15 I apologize if its gotten better.

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If you don't look at the grammer too much, then it's really an entertaining experience to read, currently at ch 16, it's getting better and better, author, you are doing a good job