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4.96

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YIANUWANGXIAO
I had so much fun reading the story it reminds me if so many things that I forgot when I was at the age of 5-10 and it got back all the feelings that Ive never felt for so long this brings me back to my childhood memories, funs, and stories I loved it so muchπŸ₯°πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’œπŸ˜
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Kukreti
The plot story is amazing, It's single chapter is long enough to let you stay and fall in love with the story. Loving the work so far, can't help myself to read more. Great work πŸ‘πŸ»
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cecemagic_sempai
If you enjoy medieval theme story this is definitely a must-read, it is fantasy but deep and I even sense a bit of darkness. Besides the great developed environment, the writing quality is on point, no doubt you will submerged into the story. If you are considering reading it, go ahead, this is your sign cause you won't regret it.
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Supremist0204
The story is great and everyone should read this! Characters and world building are interesting. Grammar is not an issue and the plot twist is amazing! Keep it up, author! A well deserve 5 rating for this!
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Person_man
A slow burn into a very interesting story. The writing behind the character is well done and the writing is also well done. An interesting twist occurs later on which leaves you wanting for more. I recommend giving this story a read!
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The_Procrastinator
The story is great and the author has a way of hooking you further into the world he's created. very nice and will await for more updates. Thank you, dear author! Keep up the good work! ^_^
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White_Falcon21
Let's write an honest review then............ Writing Quality: SSR I found no faults here, except jumbled sentences, misused words and hard-to-understand words. Remember the rule number 1 of "Fantasy" genre is "understanding the readers" and there are many of readers outside you who still haven't understood the English language very well. This is a key to become a success fantasy author. For example, you wrote "Clandestinely" that means "Stealthy" or "Undercover". For people like me, whose mother language isn't English, is really hard to understand. But I found no problems here, because it's force us to "find" the meaning through dictionary or our old friend, Google Translate For misused words issue, few sentences have this issue, like "acquire log to build house and firewood." If I try to read again, it would be "the user often acquire (gather) logs (big round wood) to build house (this is correct) and firewood (???). Well, being careful it's a best idea for you. Then, please separate narration and dialogue. It's okay if you want to write single dialogue with single word, but I found this issue on chapter 2 until 5. It's to prevent misunderstanding. Since I don't care about grammar, I found your writing is interesting to read. I like the stories when the MC forgets about his former world and transported into unknown world without cliche settings. Stability of Updates: SSR One chapter everyday...well, why not? Story Development: SSR Slow phase stories are good civilization. You have understood how to hook the readers. But I think if it's too slow, the readers will be boring though... Character Design: SSR I found no faults here...but it's a bit confusing how should I imagine the characters. Twig-kun is a boy, then what kind of boy? Red-haired? What about my beloved Asatsuyu-kun? Cute? Sweet? Lovely? Scaredy Cat? Remember, you don't have "Mystery" genre on your novel. World Background: SSR I grasped the world background really well. I understand the Serf System, Barony Territory, Rules, Class Differences... But I think...it seems you are lacking on...Magic? But whatever, every authors have his/her own explanation for "Magic". So, I expect you will explain it really well since I have got the impression from your novel. That's all from me, but not all from us.
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Tammanysammy
Book is good has great synopsis, I haven’t read it yet but from other reviews I can tell it’s amazing, so I will read right away, the title also caught my eye.
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JTProductions7
Good job, author! It is very interesting and entertaining! The grammar is spectacular and the English is also very good. I would like to see more chapters, please!
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Bojuwoye_Ayoola
Firstly I like the fact that the author lets the ML do the narration,it makes it easy for the reader to relate with. Also the word length of each chapter is amazing,kudos to the author for the hardwork. The world background,the storyline and the characters makes the book more interesting. Overall I like the book and think everyone should read this,the whole demeanor is bound to keep you hooked. I even added to collection πŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒ Author pls update more chapters.
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BRPever
First, the writing is really good, the chapters are long but the writing makes things interesting the whole way. The updates look stable too, there are 7 chapters in the first week. The story develops well, I am on the third chapter now and I really like the progress of the story until now. The characters are interesting, I like the namings and description... 'Morning due' ;) World background is good too but some part is a bit complex but I think the upcoming chapters will describe them well. Overall, it's a unique and interesting world with a unique fantasy setup... Really, you guys should see the attention to the details here and the setup for everything... Amazing!
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vinayraj
Good intro Well designed characters. Although the theme is same, it's good. Waiting for more chapters. Keep up the good work πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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someone_anonymous
This is really good! It's a very promising story with a lot of potential. The quality of writing is good because it's understandable. The story is really good so far, keep it up author! You're doing a good job.Thumbs up to you!
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Chainslock
A good story. Nothing much I could really say. Grammar is obviously not an issue, and the chapter content are very much detailed and descriptive. Writing style is exceptional as well. Definitely one of the gems here in WN. Keep on writing.
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LloveSsick
AWESOME!! This work is really awesome... everyone should try it... First of all.. Author..πŸ‘πŸ‘ (clapping).. it's the author's first work so writing 3k words per chapter... that needs a lot of time and effort.. I can't tell about anyone but for me it's an impossible task to do it in a day. So keep this hard work author. Now.. the content even if it's a long one but believe me you'll enjoy reading it and I don't think you'll get bored. As for the error and everything else... I don't find one so I couldn't say it has any. So please read it... you'll surely enjoy this work. As for the author... if you can please shorten the chapters a little bit. Overall it's a good work....πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘.... so a well deserved 5 for it. And I wish you keep updating.. I would love to read it after some more chapters released. But I think that day I wouldn't be releasing any chapter. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
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