I'm continuing this somewhat with some development this time!
so read the latest chapter and tell me what you think of min joo being envious of his creations.
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No empthy = simply a dead fish
Your idea certainly hits me in the right spot, but after continuously pushing myself to read until it got better, I dropped it. The novel idea is good, but has no development at all, the MC used 4 hours to turn an entire village into vampires, understandable, but there could have been more detail in it, even the interaction with that village elder lasted one second, might as well have not even shown it, and also, after that, how is everyone fine with that, being turned into a vampire against their will, there wasn't even any confusion after it happened its like everyone just accepted it. Also, you didn't even explain anything about the castle, all you said was it looked magnificent, floats, has a lots of rooms, and has windows. Then the final turning point was when he said get ready for war or something, there was literally no checking on the army, no checking what they were invading, no details about the army conditions, and a lot more stuff. I know this story is probably just the author writing the stuff they want to write, and this could have been a fun read despite everything listed above if there was actually development in the story. Your story has potential though, keep working hard.
Really like this novel so far, will you keep udating? Do you have any kind of social media or discord I can follow to know the updating time? Thanks x.
I don't want to say much but the story is boring. There is no exciting about it. I don't care if the MC is OP but his children and son are also OP to the point that everything is slice of cake for them.
Alright so I love the concept of the story but everything else could've been done better. The writing quality to me doesn't appear descriptive enough. I don't see any potential conflicts in the story. There's no story development details and world background is too loose. The situations are cringy but baseline interesting. I really like the story idea but I really wish it was better executed so I'm looking forward to that.
This was one of the first webnovels I read when I came on this site and still one of my favourites tbh. I was sad when you said that youre dropping it and was really surprised when I saw that this had more chapters. Please dont drop it again and do some polls or chapters dedicated to gathering ideas for the novel, so that you dont run out of Ideas or havent seen some critisism. Anyways please continue I really love it so far :)
It's a really good novel and it has a lot of potential. The only thing I'd say that put me off a bit was the mc's treatment towards beastkin and how he's way too op at the start. But I respect anyone who takes time to think up and write a novel.
great novel the only thing bad about is that u already made him to op from the beginer like creation and immortality i think u should tone it down a bit
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the story is good but it is going to fast and the mc is to op i don't mind the opness but that is just to op i mean he could basically just say kill all bings and they would die not the tipe i like
I love this book and How it was Written I hope I get to read more about this character, this world, and more of the author I think the story devolved was great and just needs to be polished more and I would have liked to see More rebel attitude when they were rebelling but other than that I have no complaints and I'm glad this is the first book I finished in the app.
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I enjoyed reading this novel. I like OP characters, but in this case the MP is a little too much and author gets into trap of lacking new challenges. Still if someone like OP characters he can have fun reading this novel.
it i good but mc is is to op and the fat that he is A GOD not that exiting but it is good due to the fact on ho he is op
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i like this novel but the thing is just so much i didnt understand i give good rating but lots could be changed or edited to make storie more understandable like what was happening in chapters 23 to 35 i dont understad rhe mystery behind it
I haven't even fully read all the chapters in an already so bored with the story. 1st the design of the vampires is so basic you could have put a whole new spin on them The main character doesn't seem to even know what he wants to accomplish being in this new world seems bored throughout the whole thing. it's just not great.
Writing quality is good. The update stability is pretty good. The story is developing and progressing at a reasonable pace and the character design is relatively ok except the mc goes insane on small things. The world background is great because it sucks you in and makes you feel as though you're there in the midst of all the action and world-building that takes place throughout the story. So overall its a pretty good novel as of the latest chapter.
I just love it. It is great becouse I just can't to read the adventures of an op mc that can create anithing. It also has a getting stronger feeling with the different energies. Although there are some parts where I can't follow the story.
I really love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love this novel but is there any female lead or harem for the mc
So. Im sorry to give this book such a rating, but heres why:
1. It is very rushed and quick, the mc could destroy an entire world in a few hundred words. Something like that could deserve more detail and words, it could also make the book better.
2. because of my first point, the world and character development suffers a bit, you dont get to know the enemies so well, and the mc could use some more introduction at the beginning.
3. the chapters are to short. the chaoters are always about 600-700 words. its not that big of a problem, but a bit longer wouldnt damage the book.
4. The story. I cant tell you how much i like the idea and the base of the story, but because of the points i made and some smaller mistakes, it isnt used to its full potential.
Now at the end i want to say, i havent read the book in its entiry and it may change in the chapters i have yet to read. i can also understand the βmistakesβ, writing a book isnt that easy.
Still, great work author!
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Its really amazing but i feel like you ( author ) could have done a bit more with the world background but other then that i really enjoy reading this book. π
Love this book, keep up the great work. I will support you
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