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"Boss, Take Responsibility!"
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I like the concept but this whole fight kinda tanked my enjoyment by a lot. It feels super forced and unnatural. He is also capable of leaving fist imprints in trees, his punches should be crippling/killing. Plus the usage of qi makes no sense... Why use supernatural powers on bullies right after you got them and still don't really understand what's going on. I get fighting back but like just feels as if it could have been handled so much better. Going to keep reading but feeling a little ehhhhh about it all now.
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