author please update 😥😥😥 I've been waiting 3 months for a new chapter 😭😭😭 great story and rly fun. I like reading sport novels but this one is honestly amazing. The idea behind this novel, the world and everything is so good 👍👍👍
Good writing but bad social interaction, I mean like no lasting side characters it is just training, and then games. I mean the MC is hardworking great mentality etc. but character growth? Not really anywhere to be found, personally I think this a great world build with an original sport that was made but, its dull. It is so factual that for me, it feels like emotions are lacking, I mean there have been training mania characters I like, but they also feel real not like this MC who you hardly see make real relationships with, on the brightside not a lot of cliches, just feels like nothing is happening for me. Lastly, the novel is definitley a fresh air, but I don’t see it as something you could read too long without getting tired of
This story is boring. No fights only running here and there solving puzzles on a pole and sometimes update on the status. And will keep on getting 'boring' because there is absolutely no solid content.
One of the best novels I've read. Really engaging and a page turner. The story in itself is unique and far from cliché. I was already hooked from the beginning. Not only are the characters life like in terms of their thoughts and the ways they were written, the plot is also not predictable. The chapters are also long enough that I immediately get immersed in every chapter. If this was published as a hard copy book, I would honestly buy it on the spot. The only thing I didn't like is that it's not completed yet and I wasn't ready for the sudden "New chapter is coming soon" as I assumed it was already completed before I started reading it. Keep it up! It's such a great read! Seriously can't wait for the next update! [img=update][img=recommend]
This is without a doubt one of the best stories here.
The writing is excellent, with rarely any grammatical errors.
The story is well paced. Fast during matches, to capture the action. Slow during training and everyday life.
Because the slower everyday sections there is time to sprinkle in a lot of characters that each have their own personality and don't feel like robots or cannon fodder. It also helps to prepare the bigger stage that will no doubt come.
The only downside I have with this story is the very slow and inconsistent updates. If we are lucky, we get 1 chapter per week. If not we get 3 weeks of chapters that only say "This is not an update.".
I really hope the author can get his stuff together, because I really want to read more of this. 4.5*/5* highly recommended.
This story is a gem, everything is good except for some parts that are not clear like, the whole story is inside the space station it does not describe much about the world outside. Some things which are not important are overly detailed (felt like slice-of-life).
I thank the author for delivering such a wonderful book, but please try to increase chapter release rate.
Overall it has a nice and unique setting wherein the development of characters has a straightforward approach, it follows the common background where the mc goes back in time to make up for his regret
The updates are few and the character progression is slow.
- A match isnt a match without a hundrend peoples comments.
- Use every moment to show how smart the mc is by way of commenting.
- All the characters are given a shallow understanding.
- The game doesnt sound much fun at all. how the puzzles complexity level ensured to be the same each random time.
Overall Review: Highly Recommend this book. The Main Character (MC) is a hardworking individual who has been given a chance to live his dream life and is determined to by almost any means. The sport that the MC is determine to go pro in Battle Arena is fast paced well thought out game with interesting strategies and combat. Currently the aurthor is taking a page from shows/manga lime Hunter X Hunter and My Hero Academia were the MC is not over powered compared to other people, there are no OP powers its all how the person develops it and how they work as a team to over come the challenges they face. While MC does make a difference he has to continue to work hard to achieve his goals. The only reason I didn’t score this novel higher is I don’t know how stable the release rate actually is as I accidentally read all 77 chapters that are currently out in just over a night; which to me demonstrates just how well the author drew me in. Below is more of a break down of what Webnovel asked and what I thought of, in each category. In the end I would highly encourage other readers to check out this book.
Writing quality: Overall very high quality writing. Minor grammer mistakes here and there, enough to notice but not enough to detract from the story.
Updating Stability: It says Two Chapters a week but I just pick this up so I am not sure how the author updates yet score may go up or down depending on this. Just for clarity I am looking at the author says two chapters a week then the two chapters come out every week on the same days. More doesn’t mean better for me I would rather one chapter a week if it came out consistently enough that I can look forward to the book at the same time every week. (If that makes sense)
Story Development/Character Design: Author takes an average guy and gives him the opportunity to become extraordinary, it feels believable keeps your attention through out the read. As you follow the MC the people he meet and the way he interacts with them feel genuine and human. He doesn’t down play his strengths gives full effort and is a nice person. The people around him aren’t stupid either, they recognize that he is strong and work with him to achieve their goals. It is refreshing to read. I think this is the strongest part of this novel, the characters have clear strengths and weakness and work/dont work hard like normal people. There are no weird moments like everyone falling in love with the MC or the MC becoming a totally different person once he achieves a little success. I also appreciate that he is actively trying to change the future without worring that his knowledge from the future will no longer be applicable.
World Development: MC is in college and other than how the arena and some minor background the overall world is a bit underdeveloped. While this is not a bad thing as the main focus is on the MC and his growth. I am very curious about why they are in space stations, are we exploring the universe, did we destroy the Earth, etc. I realize that these details aren’t actually necessary to the development of the book though. But the amount of stuff the author can do with it would be amazing, is there a competion between space stations? Can they visit Earth?
This is my first review. I hope it helps some people decide to read the book and encourages the author to keep writing it. I did my best to be objective without spoiling anything, and maybe give the author some ideas. Thank you for taking the time to read this and if you decide to read it, I hope you enjoy it as much as I have so far.
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nice story with a combo of MOBA and si-fi settings but I sincerely feel like it lacks the versatility of a MOBA .....jus imagine you are playing MOBA with which 5-6 characters or you can imagine it another way like you have many characters but all of them save same abilities..then how would you feel......I am pretty much sure you will drop it playing after few matches ..or maybe not play even once .....author could have added more gene abilities or some mysterious hidden abilities ...not only to mc but to some side characters......and this novel lacks cliff hangers...dude cliffs are the main essence to keep readers tied towards to your work...you are literary running your own work.....dude make it spicier (plot-wise not in romantic terms)....your writing quality is good I appreciate for that... I have greater hopes from you...+ can't you make his sister cuter and cheerful....it always feels like talking to a robot or a sh*thead brutal and stiff girl from CN novels...u made her a girl who is probably is in **** but you are not giving her character and emotions of a ****....if you have plots for her in which she needs stiff Pokerface character....you can simply alternate b/w normal and stiff. like cheerful in front of brother but stiff in the outside world...and if you think its too late to give emotions ....just make it a plot material for character development
.......(sorry for such long review and bad english)
A refreshing read if you got bored of the same type of plot again and again. Few grammar mistakes like "was-were" and "has-have" that don t really affect the story and are corrected overtime. The world background left me asking myself if the action of the entire novel will be based in the Olympus Space Station with no interactions with the rest of the world or if later the actions moves from it:D. A good read if you want something new!
Really good story you have here. I mean the qualityy was so good I thought the writer was professional and kept searching in Google for untranslated chapters. Finally realized this is an excellent piece of original work. Kudos to you, not only the story is original in proper sense but also great job coming with the game format, and combining with the magic system. Also nice to see our mc struggle to become better, makes it more interesting than all those dumb lucky OP MC's out there.
Do hope you will do some nice work on romance side too, even with that being only a side element in the story. The characters are teenagers after all, at least with body. And with the modern setting probably in some urban romance fashion like it was done in "martial arts master". Medea does some like a good female lead candidate though. And while at this topic, please don't go harem route, though I really doubt you would, but just in case. Good romance in my opinion enhances the action stuff by providing both contrast and relief to the action scenes. Most authors unfortunately on this do a bad job of it though, so keeping fingers crossed, at least I feel I can see some potential here.
Anyway loved your story, professional level stuff. Would be eagerly waiting for more chapters.
Really great story definitely in the top 3 sports webnovels very original and its amazing how the authour developed an entirely new sport that is unique and fun. Writing quality is good for a webnovel though there is still room to improve. Wish there was more updates. I'm very excited to see where the story goes.
If you are looking for a good sports novel and read this comment, then congratulations! You just stumbled on a treasure chest. Good Character Building, Good Story building, Good Plot, Good Progression, and Good Translation and grammar. That 5 Goods there will keep you wanting for more if you looking for sports type story. The concept of the sport is well thought out and it's rules and detail in its mechanics is rich. I will give it 5 stars if it continues on. Which is my way of encouraging the author to keep going. I will be unhappy if it ended mid stride.
This is definitely within my top 2 original novels that I love to read on webnovel. The story is very entertaining and the writing is great! So many original stories on webnovel will have entertaining plots, but the quality of the writing is so poor that I end up dropping it. Thankfully, this novel has both. I am especially impressed that this is a sports novel about a fictional sport. The author did a great job introducing this sport to the readers and I’m a big fan of it already! I also like that the author has stayed away from cliches (so far) such as the beautiful cold prodigious FL immediately falling for MC after he beats her along with all other women appearing to fall all over the MC. Thankfully, there doesn’t appear to be any of that in the story. If romance is introduced later in the story, hopefully it would be a slower, more realistic progression. Overall, I highly recommend this story and hope that the author continues it. This novel is definitely going to continue climbing up the rankings!
I like the story a lot. I wish there were more sports related novels. Hope you keep it up and dont drop this halfway through. I like that his sister is involved, too often family is regarded as a glorified cheerleading squad when they can in fact be important support for the players.
This is probably the best sports story I have ever read! I wish that game was a sport already. I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope the author would consider doing a prequel sometime to talk about the beginning of the sport before enhanced people.
This is a novel I would like to follow for a long time. Good fresh ideas, likeable characters and I love the world building.
Combine that with the author's better than normal grasp of the english language and you have a recipe for success imho. Please keep going!
This story is amazing! I love how the author shows a very realistic game in a sci Fi environment. I almost wouldn't mind if this was a real life game. I almost hope it will be one day. Without all of the extras
I design to write a small review after finish the first book.
This is a real sport story about a fictional sport called 'battle arena'
It could be compare to manga called 'Major' which is about baseball but we follow the MC from his last year of high-school instead of elementary school with the MC has some knowledge and tricks from his first timeline which make it a bit more interesting. The development of story is smooth. I like the MC because he has a very balance personality.
The only downside is this so call sport's rule feel a bit weird to me but that is not much of a problem anyway since it is a fictional sport and I focus more on story
Lastly, I would like to shamelessly declare this story as the best sport story on this site. (at least IMO)