a cool novel with a new outlook for cultivation thing. a totally new system.
traditional orthodox xanxia and eastern fantasy is completely overturned and have become a thing of past and the best thing is no cliche plot. this novel ranks first in my favourite novels.
Heyo Readers, Seven here.
Giving myself a shameless five star for my work.
First of all I would like to inform it to all readers that my novel is not for heavy readers who like gore, bloodbath, smut etc.....
I am making this novel for light-hearted readers who like the cultivation genre followed by comedy, action, and adventure.
If I best describe my novel it's somewhat similar to the novel Cultivation Chat Group genre-wise but with completely different plots, characters and world-building.
This is my first work, as a writer, hope everybody enjoys it.
These type of novels are my favorite but I can't find many of them. OP MC with decent comedy where he doesn't have to hide his powers because people will try to kill him out of jealousy or where random young masters try to kill him because he breathed near them. Daily life of the immortal king was another amazing one but it stopped getting updated.
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I like this new novel,it's different from all novel where mc is reincarnate and having past memory rule the worldand this type of storing going to outdated,But this story having new test,and full of comedy ilike this novel plz keep it up
It's decent and it is enjoyable I hope it have more chapters so that I can still enjoy the op mc and his growth like new enemy's and his school life or something like that
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
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I really liked the book, plot and characters are fabulous keep ut up Author and nver ever drop this book[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
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This story is awesome and doing wonders!!!!
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exaggerated reactions which makes me cringe and cant seem to get into the flow of the story since it changes from friggin serious to exaggerated stuff like mc's power and their reactions which imo is not funny, it might be funny for the author buy for me it is one hell of a cringy conversation..it is also confusing af
the story produces a new outlook on reincarnation novels with a confusion element to the mc, unfortunately the storyelement ment to make it comic relief also makes the story difficult to follow for the reader. It is missing it's structural integrity with both the worldbuilding and the paragraph building. the story is building on a difference between an old system and a new better system. The story are neither explaining nor is diving deeper into what the main story device is trying to do. Without a proper explanation it would be just as reasonable plot device to just be born, the comic relief and unanswered questions makes it a headache to start with, it stabilizes around chapter 30, but the introduction could be cut short by 28 chapters.
However it is still a interesting take on cultivation and it can be strong story, if the beginning could be strengthened by some proofreading or explanation. with a focus on nonsensical parts instead of story it will instead mock the foundation it is trying to create in a universe instead of creation the comedical story it is trying to make. just soso but good enough
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Seven Here.
It's been a while since I have started writing. I am giving myself a full 5 star for my hardwork.
Hope everyone enjoys my novel.
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