First of all, I wanted to say: the cover is beautiful!
I was captivated by the story as soon as I read the first paragraph. The characters were very well written with surprising twists. The author liked to play with words.
I liked the details on world building. I can imagine vividly what is happening, the atmospheres, and places in the story. The way they were told is flowing naturally.
Overall, it is a good story that will keep the reader wanted to read the next chapter.
Good luck for the author and keep up the good work!
StarOfDawn