Reviews of Fate's Reversal: The Divines Return by Syphiinz - Webnovel

Alright, so I guess this is the obligatory norm in this situation? But this is the 10th review. So I shall, ahem...shamelessly give myself 5 stars. As well as offer my own personal critique of my novel. I will avoid spoilers and only give what I think needs to be said. **Take this with a grain of salt as I am a completely new author striving to hone my skills. For starters, as this is made there are slightly over 60 chapters to the serialization. Much of the world has yet to be explored on both front; however, this wasn't the purpose of Volume 1. The background of the game world has been given but the complete state of both the real and game world hasn't. This will serve the purpose of generating flow in the next volume. I will try to intricately formulate scenarios that express the world's state without providing humongous lore dumps. As for character molds, I tried to veer away from the scripted and make their reactions fleshly and oftentimes comical depending on the situations. Characters with backstories, however, will have more distinct personality scenes as showed a few chapters already. Some might think the pacing for the level up and character gains are too swift, BUT, I try to this to the idea of low levels usually passing by quickly as with a real game. However, the novel will be incorporating many different paces to add diversity. So sit tight on that. Moreover, the common tropes found in these novels—I try to develop mine further. For example, the random reincarnation is not so random and instead facilitated by a being. Secondly, the random teacher making the MC OP ties into a deeper purpose; the power creep isn't easily gained. All in all, I've put a fair amount of effort that continuously accumulates into this novel. As a result, I hope you enjoy this novel as much as possible if you do give it a read. Thank you~

The character and game development is good. There is some spelling errors and better word choices that could be made. But over all the novel is great. Just that there hasn't been an update in so long.

Still have plans to rewrite this? I'm dying to re/ continue reading this. Please let me know so I know to keep my eye on it. Love the book either way.

A sweet novel that deserves to waste my time, but oh animal, it is necessary to stop it and re-adjust it from the beginning and the new. I currently consider it a fall, my stupid brother😓😓😓😓

The story at the beginning was great however, i felt that the pace was too fast. His story.and school was not told at the first few chapters content wise, its good.

Really lIke this, Too bad its Incomplete and no new chapters seem tO be coming. But wIll keep waiting and see if we get anything soon.

Great novel I enjoyed it very much and big thanks for the author for making this amazing story you are amazing so keep going on and hoping for more

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This is a great novel, one of my favourites for sure. Sadly I can't give more stars on the updating stability xD, the author updates so much that you will need a LOT of fast passes to keep up with the updates

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One of the best virtual reality game novel i read so far.💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯

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Best novel about VRMMO games but it's even better that novel will continue as fantasy world. I give 5stars and I'm waiting for next chapters.

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thanks for hard work author

Adoro a história e como ela começou, só não entendo por que adicionar cultivo e esses "VitaShakes" à uma história na qual é baseada em jogo, em vez de enfatizar a habilidade do MC. É igual outra história que li aonde o foco praticamente deixou de ser o jogo para ser quem tinha se "cultivado" ou tomado mais "VitaShakes". A história é sua e respeito, mas sinceramente perdi em 90% a vontade de continuar lendo. Estou no Cap.81 é quando aparece o chefe dos Titãs e percebi que vai ser uma merda, posso está enganado, mas desanimei.

great writing quality with good sense of humour perfect start of story with great continuation characters is interesting (a lot of changes in emotions) stabile updating with great new content in each chapter great world background in VRMMO game as well as real world as story is in game and real life continue hard (hopefully pleasant) work

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Action - Op two swords wielding SAO style but a hundred times better with time magic/law Romance - although it is a little too easy to get into the harem in my opinion the romance is after Comedy - Modern comedy we all love and enjoy R-18 - some of the best I've seen! Mature - meh Sword and magic - a desent rpg classic type Cultivation - although it is confusing at times to be honest they all are! Harem - currently : Moon goodess /empress (not now but its currently the path shown) Wolf girl (npc but as the plot moves you realise...😉) Angel healer (class seraph but an elf) Sword spirit (hehe) Crafter ( demon lawyer in real life) Kingdom building - Goal: Celestial kingdom Current(ch 140):...Uh..W-..Well...Um.. Reincarnation - There's a solid reason why he came back (ch 110 ish reason reveled )

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It gives me the vibes of "Reincarnation of the strongest sword god". Perhaps it was inspired by it, but I hope it will not turn into the loop of ever-stronger guilds to fight... So far it gives me a lot of hope for a good long successful novel that would be one of the best of the mmorpg genre novels. Slight critique is that the world building feels slightly rushed, but if that means the novel will not be too slow paced and kills the interest of impatient readers like myself, so be it. **: first review ever, love the novel so far and best of luck.