Reviews of Evelina and the Ruby Castle

29 Reviews

4.7

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Breno_Ranyere
Cool story about a woman diving into a fantasy setting and trying to make the best out of a very strange situation while still trying to get her hands on a handsome guy. The writing needs a little work, there are a lot of paragraphs (during the early chapters at least) that are a bit unbalanced in terms of size. The pacing is a tad slow, maybe due to the chapters feeling a little short in length. But the premise is interesting and the cast of characters are all likable and well-defined. There is some interesting drama going on between trying to save the world and trying to get the hot guy to fall for you. Fun stuff.
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red_grapes
An interesting background story. The scenes/places and characters are descriptive enough to visualize it. Grammar is good, needs a little tiny bit of retouch and your novel will be at its best. Best of luck, author! Good job!
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Chinnu_002
Hi guys...the way the plot unfolds in this story is indeed remarkable and the writing style is really cool...I really love the character Evelyn..I hope the author updates more chapters soon.
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GloriouslyFamous
The story has got everything, and the author has done a magnificent job here. The author is extremely creative, and the story is written very well. The characters are dynamic and there is always suspense in each chapter keeping me entertained and engaged. As soon as you read the story, you will get immense in it and have a wonderful time reading. Well done!!! there is clearly a lot of effort put into the novel the author deserves the best! Recommended!!!
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Neil_Ads
Nays nays nays πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯
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Blackcrust
Great Work !! I see that you tried to build something purely out of your imagination and I feel really good that I found your work. Writing Quality: I saw almost no error which feels like you are cautious of writing quality. The author's vocab is pretty rich. Charters are very realistic. Evelin, Alexander, Rachel, and others have depth and realism. The pace of the story is good as well. This is indeed a great work. The author's dedication is very commendable.
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SHEPHARDBOT
This is my first time I read a fantasy novel with a female lead. and I am happy to chose this novel as a start. this work was so great that I read all the chapters in one sitting. keep up the good work man. LOOKING FORWARD TO IT
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Hermione_love
Hi! This novel is great!! I hope there will be more chapters!! The story was mysterious and at the same time, arousing my interest. I seriously love the story along with the character design and world background.
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JohnCarloRaagas
I haven't finished reading it so far but the quality of writing is suprisingly amazing. With great sense and use of vocabularies is define also a novel.
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ruffatorres
The plot was unique and freshly- written. The scenes are very detailed allowing the readers to catch up with the flow of the story. The beginning of the story is quite catchy. As you read further you will be entangled in a web of intrigue!
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Ooukination
The scenes are descriptive and the storyline is nice. However, some of the paragraphs are very long, which I suggest to break them down into multiple paragraphs, especially when the story changes scenes or dialogues.
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_Neeraj_
The Story Background is something I like. The Author Is Great at Explaining as I think. I just hope that you won't give up and continue writing. I do recommend this novel to everyone
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AnnaMark
Great work author... I love the you carry the story line... I am looking for more chapters... Hope you are getting millions views and massive votes ❀️❀️❀️
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Imaan00
I'm curious to see what happens next β™‘ The plot seems fantastic We definitely need more chapters The description of everything is really good too πŸ‘πŸ½
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yizreel_jez
A Very formidable story, it has an awesome plot which I loved. The characters are well-designed. The synopsis was good, in fact it hooked me up to really read it. The chapters were short for me, but it's a great reading experience! Loved the novel, probably this novel has potential. Great job author for the nice story. I Enjoyed reading it!
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whoknowwhat
Really loving the story. The plot is different from usual novels and the perspective is unique as well. Just this fact alone can make my interest last longer.
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Eternal_Demon
I like the plot of the story, which looks quite fascinating, the way the author writes and displayed her work is good as well. Nice work, keep it up.
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Vishalreddy
Nice story. Liked the plot and rye synopsis catches the interest of a reader. Unique descriptive style and captivating. Has potential.Will be eagerly waiting for the next chapter. πŸ‘
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Gourmet_DAO
Read interesting. An intriguing story. The text block is well written. There are some small weaknesses in the text, but they are not critical. Since the story itself looks very promising. Everything is logically verified. I like it. The only minus is only 5 chapters! I added the book to my library!
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CMO
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CMO

The story development is good,world background is nice,character design is also well development.The story has a great potential thumbs up author keep up with the good work
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CMO
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CMO

Good start ,hope the girl will be able to cope in her new environment.Wish you the best author keep up the good work.The story had great potential thumbs up
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Koeda_Shiroi
Love the storyline and Excellent Grammar, Keep up the Good Work!!!πŸ‘Œ
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pelzy
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pelzy

The book is definitely a must read. We've have cases of them going to a new world but it's mostly revenge. I like the character as a whole and I wish you goodluck in the book.
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sir_impeccable
I can only ask for more. The start is great and has the chance to shine. We just need more chapters to understand what really is going on. All in all, it’s a good potential rich read. Cheers author
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Gg_g
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Gg_g

I am hoping for more chapters!! I really love this story it's story background is interesting and is motivating me to read more of the story!! I support you Author-sama ❀❀
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Lazy_leon
Unique storyline excellent grammar. Though need more chapters to understand what's happening to the protagonist! Keep up the good works! Good luck
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Sauce8
I love mythology, and this story is starting off very well. I can’t wait to see how this develops. I appreciate your review on my story. Authors supporting authors. πŸ’» Great writing!!! πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ€“πŸ€“πŸ€“
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NotUse
Hello there fellow Filipino author! So, your book is captivating and interesting to me. The writing style is unique, it helps me imagine all the scenarios taking place. Aside from being unique, it is also attention-grabbing. Keep up the good work!!!
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Ging_Ging_5943
This novel has the chance to shine! I want everyone to read this novel! It's amazing and I want to read more. I am hoping for this novel I am telling you😊😊😊😍😍
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