Cool story about a woman diving into a fantasy setting and trying to make the best out of a very strange situation while still trying to get her hands on a handsome guy.
The writing needs a little work, there are a lot of paragraphs (during the early chapters at least) that are a bit unbalanced in terms of size. The pacing is a tad slow, maybe due to the chapters feeling a little short in length.
But the premise is interesting and the cast of characters are all likable and well-defined. There is some interesting drama going on between trying to save the world and trying to get the hot guy to fall for you.
An interesting background story.
The scenes/places and characters are descriptive enough to visualize it.
Grammar is good, needs a little tiny bit of retouch and your novel will be at its best.
Best of luck, author! Good job!
The story has got everything, and the author has done a magnificent job here.
The author is extremely creative, and the story is written very well. The characters are dynamic and there is always suspense in each chapter keeping me entertained and engaged.
As soon as you read the story, you will get immense in it and have a wonderful time reading. Well done!!! there is clearly a lot of effort put into the novel the author deserves the best!
Great Work !!
I see that you tried to build something purely out of your imagination and I feel really good that I found your work.
Writing Quality: I saw almost no error which feels like you are cautious of writing quality. The author's vocab is pretty rich.
Charters are very realistic. Evelin, Alexander, Rachel, and others have depth and realism.
The pace of the story is good as well. This is indeed a great work.
The author's dedication is very commendable.
This is my first time I read a fantasy novel with a female lead.
and I am happy to chose this novel as a start. this work was so great that I read all the chapters in one sitting.
keep up the good work man. LOOKING FORWARD TO IT
Hi! This novel is great!! I hope there will be more chapters!! The story was mysterious and at the same time, arousing my interest. I seriously love the story along with the character design and world background.
The plot was unique and freshly- written. The scenes are very detailed allowing the readers to catch up with the flow of the story. The beginning of the story is quite catchy. As you read further you will be entangled in a web of intrigue!
The scenes are descriptive and the storyline is nice. However, some of the paragraphs are very long, which I suggest to break them down into multiple paragraphs, especially when the story changes scenes or dialogues.
A Very formidable story, it has an awesome plot which I loved. The characters are well-designed. The synopsis was good, in fact it hooked me up to really read it. The chapters were short for me, but it's a great reading experience! Loved the novel, probably this novel has potential. Great job author for the nice story. I Enjoyed reading it!
Read interesting. An intriguing story. The text block is well written. There are some small weaknesses in the text, but they are not critical. Since the story itself looks very promising. Everything is logically verified.
I like it. The only minus is only 5 chapters!
I added the book to my library!
Hello there fellow Filipino author! So, your book is captivating and interesting to me. The writing style is unique, it helps me imagine all the scenarios taking place. Aside from being unique, it is also attention-grabbing.
Keep up the good work!!!