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Jay_y
This story is addicting. Like I was so into the book I didn't even hear my mom call me. Also I liked the way you described everything in the beginning. Keep up the good work👍
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yizreel_jez
Rating 5.0/ 5.0
First of all, I love the prose, it's so addicting that it made me enter the realm of your novel, the descriptive writing is very pleasant to read that every reader should really enjoy the masterpiece of the art and ideas of the author.
Why 5.0? well, this story is great, one of the few novels I have read with also a stunning plot.
No more comments, I'll just recommend this to whom it may concern. Magnificent work author!
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Vera_Anne_Wolf
The story of Tayna and her maid Connie thus far was very laid back. There were very few physical details, world details, etc. The plot was unclear as there was no real *******, controversy, or even a personal goal for the MC expressed. The decision of the Viscount to move Tayna from her brothers estate, that she was managing while he was away at training, to her father’s estate so that he could prevent her from secretly practicing archery was as far as the story plot went.
I left further details in the chapter comments. I think the slow pace of this story is more “slice-of-life/historic”, so far mind you. I feel like a romance or adventure could be just around the corner, but I could also be wrong. I only had four chapters to judge by.
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Eternal_Demon
Good story and I love the way author described everything in his prologue.
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NotUse
Greetings!
Writing Quality
-The descriptions are vivid and unique. (So far, there are three chapters.)
-The use of uncommon descriptive words supports the attention-grabbing factor of this novel.
-I have limited knowledge when it comes to grammar, so therefore I can't say if there are any typos or errors in the novel.
Stability of Updates
-I will give this category five stars for I assume that the author updates daily.
World Background
-Descriptions of the setting of the novel is creative. It is well described.
Character Development
-So far, there are only three chapters but based on what I've read, the characters seem fine and lovable to me.
-The characteristics belonging to each character was described vividly just like the world background.
Story Development
-I cannot say whether the story is in a fast or slow pace since there are only three chapters so far.
-Even though that there are three chapters, the author was able to keep me captivated, which means I'll be waiting for more chapters.
Overall:
This is a great novel. I highly recommend this to everyone. It deserves more attention and support but sadly I ran out of powerstones for today. Keep up the goodwork author, for I will be waiting for more chapters.
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