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Cyttorak
why'd you delete it?
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msyaifulloh2111
Apakah penulis akan melanjutkan ceritanya? Saya menunggu! Terimakasih telah menulis cerita yang bagus.
Akan lebih baik jika masing-masing anggota tim dipisahkan untuk melanjutkan misi selama perang. Minato akan bersinar seperti di canon jika dia ditempatkan di front Iwa. Nawaki di Suna, dan sepertinya gelar diplomat mungkin berguna selama dia disana. Fugaku dengan EMS akan cukup kuat untuk menangani Kiri, fakta bahwa mereka mengalami konflik internal akan membantu Fugaku.
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N3wman
Half of the negative feedback I get on this work is so cringe. It is almost as if no one read the intro. It is there for a reason. Please open your eyes if you wanna be a critic lol
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Dao_Tempest
Annoying angel. Shit system (Cliche asf). Why do all naruto fan-fics have systems like OMG........................................................................FUUUUCCCCKKKKK
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jmhNordic
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Pandamonium_
Love the story so far itβs interesting and well written. Iβm able to look past the minor timeline discrepancyβs as it keeps me engaged and doesnβt mean anything major to the plot so far. Also would love longer chapters
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LLP_G10
Why isn't the story in the fanfic section?
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DaoistRIODEJANEIRO
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DarthVegito
Was really good and had a ton of potential and wouldβve ranked it 5/5 but the mc who is a reincarnated person, has a system, been training literally since birth but he loses to Fugaku in an obstacle course and loses to him in their fight lol makes no sense to me except if heβs a beta Mc so yeah I dropped it after that lol
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Alien_Space_Bat
At first i thought this was a good read.....later it becomes too much to continue so i dropped.
These some of my reasons.
1. Creepy male angel in head who acts cute and annoying.
2.Non-existent time line and such.
3.Forced friendship between Mc,minato and fugaku....wherever mc goes whatever mc does they follows. Actually fugaku is much older than minato.
4. Cheats are kinda wasted on Mc....he is not a child how can others keep up with him so easily.
5. Kinda feels like author wants introduce BLπ·
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JustBearmace
This is a great fanfic, there are some parts in this novel that is βfor plotβ which is minato getting his rasengan at the age of six, mei terumi being in minatos generation(shes 10 years younger in the anime) and sasori for the same reason but he should be a 1 year old child at this point. This is a great fanfic nonetheless as it is somewhat interesting. P.S. thereβs a little confusion going on in one of the chapters that made people think he was 10 years old when he graduates, if the author can find it and fix it that would be nice
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NewGoldie
The writing quality is not bad but the timeline is just Fuckk all over the place. Nah Iβm out. I did enjoy the first few chapters and hope is gonna be a good story; but Iβm just disappointed it did not captivates me to keep reading. And the chunin exam arc is just boring and Suck dDickk compared to Boruto version of chunin exam and Boruto is an awfully written anime.
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FluffiestEmperor
Well truthfully this is already better than most Naturo fics in this site, the writing is superb and the story is quite interesting, if you ignore a couple of timeline inconsistencies and age differences then this story is simply great.
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98zach656
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98zach656
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entity
this is an interesting and enjoyable story, with a whole new approach to naruto fanfics and really enjoyable I hope tho he gets with mei terumi instead of an original character
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shadow_sage
This is a intriguing story and it follows a clan that is not often thought about in naruto fanfics. The only thing i will say i wish was for lest dramatic time skips with no detail of what happened in that time. Other than that thia is a amazing story and i hope the author keep up the good work.
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Hpap999999999
Kawaki is not same age as minato and team..He is at least 5- 7 yrs older than them...
In the story kawaki and minato are depicted for same age....before minato enroll academy ,kawaki already died in anime
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98zach656
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kryllsama
the writing is good and well recommended by me... this is a fresh approach for the naruto isekai theme... the mc's system is so funny that keep the hero in his critical mind to anticipate the benefits of the system
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Cyttorak