Really love the story pacing it gave a good background of the main character and gives him a good reason to hate the current fire nation.
I also hope he hates azula for a small time maybe due to her not being on his side even when he warned her what her father would do.
It’s a great fanfic that brings in dual bending in a good way not just oh i have dual bending for no reason he actually was given water bending by a spirit the only downside i would say is the updates are erratic
Nice dude need more pls hardly any atla fics here. Thanx :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
Noice love atla. More pls11111111111111111111111111111114444444444444444444444000000000000000
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really good so far i'm enjoying it a lot please continue to make more thank you!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Best ATLA fanfic i’ve read just on the first chapter alone i got hyped for this i just hope the author doesn’t drop the fanfic like a lot of good authors i’ve encountered
I don’t want him to have duel bending at this point unless he gets a special blessing like from either the moon spirt or loin turtle but other then my little rant there I love your book and don’t drop
Looks good, not many atlab ff's even though its a great series, also love azula pairing hope theres a lot more coming thanks author :) 11111111111111111114444444444444444444444444000000000000000
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