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Pavan1234
Until now this novel is a good Biochip/magus novel but heavily inspired from 'the wizard's world' and 'warlock of the magus world'. Still this is good spin on Biochip/magus genre (as the 'biochip in magic world' theme didn't lose it's novelty, atleast for me) . Mc's characterization is very good. Plot premise and plot progression are good. Plot Pacing is moderately paced. Character interactions are above average. Release rate is average. Hope author doesn't drop this novel. Most of the original biochip novel till now are dropped.
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Ethan132
Amazing, would recommend to anyone. I’m a bit of a sucker for magic and a non idiot protagonist so I’m completely enjoying this book. Ty author :)
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Eggcellent
I am starting this story again after a long break Hopefully, you will enjoy it as much as before! For those who have not read this story yet, it depicts the story of a young acolyte walking the path of body refinement in a world where magic, magical beasts and knights exist.
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kinshi
It is a shame that the author decided to not continue to write this novel. He decided to do this even in his other LN
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Soulqin
Buena novela, me gusta el desarrollo del los personajes, además creo que el mundo esta bien construido. Excelente uso del sistema y el uso del intelecto para poner en favor las batallas. Personalmente me gusta que los poderes de más rango no sean conocidos sino que se desvelen al pasar los capitulo y el desarrollo del personaje, espero sigas así. 😁
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Knessed
It's a very interesting story. The world looks plausible and logical. The atmosphere is very similar to "Warlock in the Magus World", and I think this webnovel is no worse than Warlock. I hope we will see more chapters in the future. Author, please keep writing, you're doing a great job.
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Amanda_Rd
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It_just_works
Honestly nothing wrong with the work par from the first chapter Abit difficult to figure out who the main character is straight away but from the second chapter forward amazing the background of the charter past life the way it seems the mc is learning about new things and the new life that mc starts in is amazing the way he's half elf and honestly the system is a bit to op but really it isn't at the same time. I love the power rating you gave about the mages and knights and the power rating system and that is one of the reasons I think this novel is a 5/5
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ThreeMilks875
If I were reviewing just based off of the quality of the novel, it would be an easy 5 stars. The grammar is very good and the novel is easy to read. The system is essentially the same as Warlock of the Magus world, but the author makes it his own with small changes and more emphasis on knight cultivation/body refining. MC is not a self righteous hero nor a evil and cunning villain, he is just a person trying to survive and become stronger. Interaction between characters is not amazing, but is decent enough in quality to not impede the novel. Overall, a very strong novel with few weaknesses. One defining factor that keeps me from giving it 5 stars? UPDATE TIMES. Book looks inactive and abandoned at first glance, but author updates at a speed of around 1 every two weeks or so. 5 stars on everything except update stability, which I gave two stars (Not one becuase at least the author updates it sometimes)
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leaferickson
As a fan of WmW, i am drawn to this novel like a moth to a flame, couple that with the fact that the MC is going for a body refinement route, take all my power stones already.
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Venerabe_Yun
Novel yang bagus, bagi anda yang menyukai warlock of the magus world pasti akan menyukai novel ini. semoga novel ini tidak di jatuhkan dan lebih sering update, terimaksih penulis.
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Soula_na
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Dio99
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Dio99

wow, this book is really good and the writing is on a professional level. The plot is amazing. I'm surprised its not getting more attention. The only bad thing is the update rate. I want more chapters😭😭😭😭
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cshupian333
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Ashu_Ra
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Ashu_Ra

Although the release rate is a little bit slow . This story is fantastic mainly because of it's solid plot , good characters . Give it a try you will not be disappointed
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Jlairu
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Jlairu

I gave this a five stars so I'm sure you can guess what I think of this story. I'm hopeful too see what may happen if the main character were to ever go to his mother's elven tribe. [img=recommend]
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NoobsGoToHeaven
I am sure that as long as you are a fan of Warlock of the Magus World or A Wizard's Secret you will be able to enjoy reading this novel. The only difference between the main characters of others book is the fact that here our main character is trying to become both a warrior and a wizard simulantly.
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amaturewriter
Fking love it..the lore, the story everything some requests? -put an aux chp explaining the magic/fight/skill/power levels -also the mother,,,she seems somewhat useless, like she wasnt there when MC or the dad was almost killed, IDK make it seem like she cares for em..[ her sending elven soldier was fine but dosnt seem that special...the potion was fine but my point is show moments of her doing **** that shows she love em...get what I mean?] -if..IF u do romance, dont do it like warlock of magus..its was shallow and had useless chicks and a cold MC....or separation..dont do it..make lovers useful and u know be loyal and help MC and ****..though no romance is also fine I guess anyway GL..love this **** **: always, if romance.. no moms or wives
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Shnoobs
Great story so far (review at chapter 19). MC is intelligent and learns from his mistakes. World and overall story starting to take form and looks very promising.
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MariseteS
Very good novel, thanks for the chapters. I remembered things from Game of Thrones and Warlock of the Magus World. Waiting for more chapters!
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Shanmukh_Boda
This is good try it More V v
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Ashu_Ra
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Ashu_Ra

Interesting Beginning , let's where your story can lead us , readers
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