Chapter comments on the chapter I am...Batman’s Little Brother!? of the book Reborn as Batman's Little Brother

I think I'm not going to continue this as it is a classic example of a man slaved to a system.

why oh why did you have to add a system... I was really getting into the story then boom. Disappointment.

why not train instead of complain about the system or read books to get more knowledge he’s wasting his time and his advantage of a reincarnated person. fucking annoying man could of been studying and training to at least be ready for what’s to come but no he follows bruce around when he knows some of the events and what’s to come. how is he supposed to do anything if he’s retarded and doesn’t even train. this is a perfect example of a waste of time

I’m sorry, he’s excited to be in Gotham? I know a lot of DC dans would be too if it were fake but the real deal is scary as ****. The MCs view is really biased, the only threats he registered were thugs and bullies, the least threatening things. The real Gotham has murder, r*pe, corruption, violence, and everything in between. It sounded like he was fanboying over the villains instead of being worried about his own life (not that they exist yet, but still).

Yea i dont think i eill continue the nivel though i gice it one more chapter a try if the system is giving missions that he cant be refusing then there is no reason to me reading a novel about slave mc that doesn't have free will next thing we know mc gets forced to marry some crazy girl because the system said soo

so....its seems character development or logic isnt a focus here?

I hate it when the MC has to do everything the system tells them.

oh god, that last sentence....fcking hell. If you don't go to school you loose your super power. Who the fck writes this and thinks....hmmmm yea... this makes lots of sense and will be a good read.

Nigga did NOTHING IN 10 YEARS AS A REINCARNATED BITCH! He literally could have been a better batman already considering they have the same resources, atleast studied or trained hard in preparation for whats to come. But boy oh boy did this trash MC wait for things to fall out of the sky

Dude i don't mind women being old but just make them virgin or widow who only have been with their husbands not some whores who have slept with thousands of guys

I hate system with A.I.....

It is bad to judge without having read it, but the system took away a lot of potential that the story had

he’s wasting his time and his advantage of a reincarnated person. fucking annoying man could of been studying and training to at least be ready for what’s to come

Oh please not with the system giving you a quest that either do the ****en Quest or die I know most people going to do the quest anyway but still to have a the only two options do it or die all lose all the power

System done right is okay, IF. Im of mind that average human from earth going to another world with different way of life will not thrive without a very distinct advantage. System is one, super genius (competent) is another.

Hahah the reference to Pokémon is great! Good story so far! Maybe he can go for Lana Lang. The actress was beautiful!

a system it is good and all but a System that controlled the MC and transforms him into a BETA MC is a SH*T

has anyone seen the whole "Alfred I choose you" "use tackle"

I hope this was a joke since he can’t fail this mission until he dies

Dang it, my name is so close and yet so far.