Reviews of Her Master's Vengeance. by phantom6_sensei - Webnovel

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This story is off to an amazing start;-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-)

Has potential. The beginning though is a little confusing. Other than that though it seems pretty interesting. I am interested to see where the story goes

Great book written by the author, world building is amazing. Charaters are also defined better and their interaction seems pretty realistic. Good job author, keep going.

Interesting plotline. The sypnosis and title page are very intriguing. Character design is unique as well. Though there's a few misplaced punctuations and spaces here and there, they're nothing major. The world the author built was so compelling that the reader kept wanting more. A nice work, overall. Keep it up!

Let's begin with the grammar. No mistakes so far other than the confusing dialogue phrases, sometimes they end up becoming too confusing to understand and sometimes I even mistake the speechs thinking they were thoughts. Well, for me the biggest problem of this novel is in its pacing and lack of description. The story is moving way too fast at least for me, and even now I still don't know how Hade exactly looks and even the MC doesn't escape this thing. Due to the lack of description, the only characters that actually marked me were the dragon and the swordsman, other than that I can't say much about the others. For the good points, I really liked how descriptive you were about the MC's feelings, the sensation, the process... They were superb and I could easily imagine myself onto the MC's shoes. I would just recommend you to change some things while focusing more on the world building.

Mad oh, this story is mad. I was able to conceive exactly what the author is writing Just in chapter 1 & 2.. Nice story development. Dude.. wait let me pay some homage.; Sensei this is a promising story. Keep the **** up.👍👍

The story synopsis gave a suspense vibe and the story too was great . Author had an unique writing style and I liked it. The story development was also good. All in all that was a good story. Keep up the good work author

I really like reading the book, love the characters too. The author is very creative in this one, please update frequently I would love to binge read it.

Great work author... I love the way you plot the story line... Please relay more chapters Hope your novel get millions views and massive votes ❤️❤️❤️

I honestly have a heart for this kind of stories. The first chapter was already intense, the second hits the emotion, and the story's progress is amazing. A story full of action, yes! Character depth, yes! There's a few punctuation errors, but overall, it has the potential! :)

Your writing skills are quite unique and the story development is smooth as well. Though I don't read martial arts genre books much, this novel has turned my views completely. Keep your hardwork! You are doing great!☺️

When I read the synopsis I already knew this book was going to be great and it didnt disappoint me! I have to get it off my chest and say it again but chapter 2 by far is my fav! The writing style is simple but it has that flow to it that makes the readers feel emotional which adds this amazing feel to the story. The plot is also nice and well developed but I felt like at the beginning it was a bit too fast and I wish we wouldve gotten more info. The world building is nicely done, although there arent many chapters out yet but you can still get a feel for it and it draws you in. A novel worth reading and I recommend it to everyone who enjoy a good story with emotional beats!

Good story❣️ Excited to see what happens next! I like it when the main character isn't all perfect and you've done a good job of portraying that

The plot is intriguing and suspenseful. 😁 A bit slow at start but then it catches pace later on. Some minor grammar issues but proofreading can easily fix it. Overall, I like it and recommend to all lut there to give it a try! Keep it up. 👍😊

I have to praise the author since he pulled me into a high fantasy world where the magic system is interesting. It was slow pace at start then later it picked up on the rhythm. I also like the quotes at the beginning of the chapters. There were just minor grammatical errors such as missing periods, and comma were being used instead of period. But thi can be fixed later on. Keep up the good work!

I have read three chapters so far. (Sorry, I'm quite busy today.) Here's my review: Overall, this novel has a nice plot. Its concept is well thought and unique. For the story development, it seems smooth therefore I'll be giving this category five stars. When it comes to the writing quality there are a few minor errors but it doesn't affect the story that much.. Perhaps, proofreading will do the trick. Anyways, good luck and keep up the good work👍👍👍

It is really good and has a unique plot.... Best of luck for WPC ......👍👍👍. I Will gonna recommend it to others.

Getting better everday as someone already said the update frequency is sulerb the author is still a bit green but this work surpasses that!!!!!!!!!

The MC's name is awesome in a short period of time I was able to understand his goals and origin. Really good book, love to read it at night please read

The book is very interesting. I like the suspense. It's dope. You did a good job on the book. Well done. You are very talented. I can't wait for other chapters. Good job bro 🔥👌

The update frequency is fantastic!!! The author never fails to bring hot enticing content on a daily basis. The paragraphing is good and due attention is paid to the visual structure.

The Good is very excellently written. Well done my boy. The sky is ur limit.. Shine on like the sky. The next book u wld write wld be about me when am leaving the Presidency. I promise you. Am sure you wlould win no doubt about it.

It was a really nice chapter, keep up the good work. Although before publishing, you check for any mistakes in grammar. Overall, it's a lovely book and has great potential.

A nice read, It's really smooth and has a intriguing story This work is currently in a competition so please support the author by voting for it.

Good story line. The writer continually brought nature into his writing. There is still room for improvement on continuity. The plot is good and well detailed.