I absolutely love the beginning. I loved how you made me feel as if I was there. I recommend checking grammar like with all writers. We could never be too careful. Beautiful story, I love the direction it's heading from the first chapter! Recommend to those who absolutely want a good story.
I loved the concept of this story.
The plot is good. The characters are good. Build-up is good.
Selene is beautifully described as well as the mystical world full of magic around her.
Your grammar and writing style is also nice and easy to understand, I am really in love with this story so far. Keep updating Good Work. :)
The story is well written, but the main draws of this story are the characters, their interactions and the dialogue that does a great job providing them more than adequate characterisation.
A hooking synopsis and interesting character design. The world that the author built here is truly fascinating. Character interaction is also well-written and the very concept of this story is intriguing. Good luck, author! Keep up the hard work!
Hey, Author is really into the story world, and takes us readers travel with her too, the chapters hook me, really liked selene(nice name) and dorothy's friendship, writing quality and world building is awesome, really makes one eager to know her identity and the worlds he travel.... it's tagged that u r participating in spirity awards good luck there [img=recommend] [img=update]
Beautiful start β€οΈ Carry on please π I'm already in loooove β€οΈβ€οΈ. You have my attention and time now. Honestly π€§ I just want to read more π
I loved this book! Intriguing characters and a page-turning plot makes this a book you canβt put down. Strong leading ladies make it even more enjoyable.
Good work. The story, characters and world background are interesting and well-detailed. The story is also well written. Hoping to read more chapters in the following days.
Rich in detail and beautifully written. Wonderful sense of place and characters that came alive for me.
Great read that kept me glued from start to finish. Looking forward to the next one.
Every scenario is very interesting and also the quality of this novel are unique. The characters of this story is quite odd but interesting.
I will be looking forward to More chapter.
The quality of writing is very good and the updates are on time. Story development and characters are interesting. The world background is astonishing.
The plot is interesting and the quality of writing is good. The world building is also intriguing. I'm interested to learn more about the characters.
I will be looking forward to more chapters.
Keep up the good work!
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