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DaoistRyPpsS
At first it was good story roger being executed and he ask about one piece it means he knows the story because roger will only say that part in his speech but what the hell he doesnt know about devil fruit 😇😂😇 what a dumb creation
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MahoV
I think this got a lot of potential and I am waiting to see what follow
Good job
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DarthVegito
MC abandons his friends because he’s a selfish pr*ck and unfortunately a beta :/
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ForgetfulAtheist
Very interesting story, with a concept rarely used for one piece fan fics, i can't wait to see what will happen in the future.
The protanist is very human and has realistic behavior in my opinion.
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Daoist954323
Sigue a si, exelente historia no descuide tu escritura espero que consiga una alta recompensa por enfrentarse a alguien fuerte.
PD: No lo vuelvas harén es un poco molesto por lo menos que tenga una persona ya que si no se arruina la trama completamente
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