Once I read the chapter one I did not hesitate to add this one on my library. It is very well written. I love how you compose your sentence. Im envy you haha. I dream I could write the way you do.
the name was what first thing that caught my eyes, then the synopsis, after reading it I was hooked by the descriptive writing and the pace of the book, the fl is quite interesting with each turn of the page.
I'm looking forward to more of it with excitement.
also a reverse harem, hehehe those type of books that snags a reader's interest are quite rare
first the concept of this is story the overall plot is very nice and interesting n the writing quality is indeed very good...I short good work by author
I really love this kind of stories since they are fit for manga and wrbtoons. you showed the characters in a different way . i loved it. also i loved how you described eli and her surroundings. she is great. i am happy that you are writing s story eith female lead . continue please!
Hey I am fan when I see female is strong enough to fight back...I am instantly hooked...I love it when the fragile and beautiful or not beautiful turn out to be world savior...Yes I am all yes for it...Your story writting is really good author...πππ Keep up the good work...I just wish people must check out actual good work...Never mind..You keep writting...All the best for futureπππ
This.Is.My.Jam! This is the type of story I've been looking for!
Good characters, good setting and good writing, Im not to much into reverse harem (Im more of a regular harem fan) but I don't care! Because Im having way to much fun with this.
I haven't read it all, but I will be coming back for more that's for sure, keep it going Author!
Come to think of it , what would u expect from a villainess ??? Oozing hatred? Torture? Bloodthirstiness? But have u ever tried getting to know her reasons , every character has a story to tell , same applies to a villainess ... This book would trigger our thoughts aswell offering to uh an in-depth understanding of situations , though in an entertaining way
I am just going to keep it short.. The title and the synopsis made me amaze about the way or your writing dear author.. I only read 10chaps so far.. Please keep giving us more..
WOW just WOW!!
The Autor is just a great writer. This story has got everything from a beautiful plot, to dynamic well-rounded character and amazing well-paced storytelling.
The author does a wonderful use of contrasting personalities and foreshadowing.
I enjoyed the well written, immersive experience.
The author absolutely knows the story very well and makes it very enjoyable to the readers.
Well done for an exceptional work!! Deserves more than a 5/5!!
Hey, I really am not a fan of female leads novel. But after reading this, I got instantly hook. This novel has something unique to it that you cant explain.
Another Author's review here! To all those writing/reading this review section, I would really appreciate if you can leave a comment as well. I'm planning to publish an edited version of this book on another website and I think your suggestions will help a lot. Thankiee!
Firstly, I like the story concept with a twist to the regular reincarnation/transmigration troupes.
The writing quality is pretty good and I didnt find any errors of any sort. But if i had to nitpick, sometimes the narration slips back and forth between past and present tenses. But that not something one round of editing cant fix.
Secondly. I love the character design, especially the contrast between Venus and Eli's personality makes for a fun and interesting read. And the other four major characters all have distinct personalities.
The pacing of the story is really good and the setting seems to be the modern world same as ours.
Anyway, Im excited to follow Venus and Eli in their journey.
Eli sounds like the perfect anti social pessimist! Her books are her solace and compared to the people around, she finds books a better company.
I also love how she fights with the beauty in the mirror. That definitely is my fav part so far!
Good work Author! Create more chapters for us.
Itβs refreshing.... it reminds me of good old Wholesome anime.... (the first few chapters annoyed/βmade me cringeβ with the mcβs awkwardness, but I think that was on purpose)..... the chapters donβt feel drawn out or repetitive and the characters donβt feel all βflatβ and βorbitingβ the Mc.... oh and the grammar and the like seem good....itβs hard to βget into itβ when you suddenly have stop and think βwhat was that meant to beβ or βWhat does that word/statement even meanβ....(if there are some mistakes I just Didnβt notice them and/or my brain just autocorrected it for me)
The synopsis is super sweet and simple. It is the one which made me go in and try reading it. I am waiting for more chapter's. The one's who are thinking or hesitating, just start reading it.
Reading the first chapter, I thought the length of the chapters were bound to be small. But, guess what? The chapters are pretty long (approx 1800 words judging by my reading speed) starting from chapter 2.
The author has a good grasp fo the English language and weaves words that enrich your reading experience. I personally find myself drawn to the descriptions the author used in chapter. They painted a vivid picture at the end of which a thought struck me, "This is gonna be dope."
Patience is indeed one of the keys to a great reading experience. I've read all of the chapters up until the most recent one. It's been a fantastic roller coaster. There's a fascinating world-building work here. The story develops smoothly, giving enough time to put each main character into the spotlight. It's not just all about the heroine or the male lead. The author has done a good job in portraying each role and personality. A wonderful read!
β€οΈπ₯°β€οΈπβ€οΈπ This is such a hidden gem. Love the concept, idea, the twists, the character design, and the plot itself. Chapters aren't too long or too short. They're just the right amount. Keep up the great work! π₯°β€οΈππ₯°β€οΈπ
Interesting start............ The first chapter got me hooked...... The way the author writes is unique and impressive.......... I like the fact that the chapters are long.....but not boring at all. It's super interesting.
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