Reviews of Life In Another World by Black_Rabbit_Oz - Webnovel

I initially started this webnovel because I saw it under the “Potential Starters” section and tapped on it on accident. Quick notes on rating Writing Quality: 4/5 on writing quality, the only reason i put this is because there are some awkward sentences. However this is near the first 10 chapters and it doesn’t really affect the readability of the novel. Stability of Updating: 5/5 Story Development: 5/5 Do not sleep on the potential of this novel so far. The intro is a bit slow and generic, but once MC gets isekai(ed) the story dramatically picks up. I would say the pacing of the novel is excellent. However powerscaling might seem like an issue. Idk yet, not that far in. OK.I just copy that for word count.Story looks cool so far,u blend in nicely system/rpg elements with fantays,which i love,big fan of litrpg. Most important.Where did u get that cover image,the guy with bows,so cooooool

Cool! It can be a little bit generic but the pacing is there as well as the character development. Definitely a good read if you're into isekai

I like this story and will continue to read this. Having a main character that actually acts "normal" (as normal as possible in a fantasy setting) makes him seem more human. It's definitely better compared to other novels with this setting. However, the writing style seems a little... weird? I can't really put my finger on it. I think it's the combination of some grammar mistakes, the persistant talk in third person during conversations, the cutesy talk of his little helper, and maybe some other things, that make the story seem a little forced? I guess? Well, of course this is just my perception, but at least for me this makes it harder to read. Still a good story though 👍

Have your read an isekai novel before? Yes? Then, you can pretty much see nothing new or exciting here. Some may like it, but for me it’s just another novel that doesn’t deliver on their promising beginning.

The story is actually good. Based on my observation of first few chapters, the plot is interesting and the pace is neither too slow nor too fast, it's going with a normal flow. The grammar is descent and according to me, this book has enough potential to give it a go. Keep it up author...!!

Great story telling amazing execution keep up the good word dude. Anyone reading this give it a try a great read! 11/10 I only see a few grammatical mistakes but it doesn’t take away from the story!

The starting point is captivating that got the readers hooked. The characters are well described. Entertaining ,well punctuated and interesting. Keep it up

I read this until chapter 9. I guess this story was written in the Japanese light novel style... The author's writing was good with good flow and smooth writing. It was a bit confusing whether this story was written in the first person or third person point of view, but it did not ruin the reading experience. There were not too many chapters yet, so it was hard to tell... But I thought that the world background was pretty cool and I look forward to seeing how the character will grow. Good luck, author!

This is a review swap. Review: I really did enjoy your first nine chapters so far. I can really see that you out some effort into the story. The pace isn't too fast or too slow. You're delivering your message to the reader while giving us a bit of detail into the world and how it's works. A novel with a system integrated is always my favourite and among all of them, yours is really easy to understand which is good in my opinion. With English as my second language, I can tell you that it was simple to understand your writing. You have good grammar with so little errors that it didn't destroy the flow of your writing. Also, my favourite part is the interaction between Kiro and the old chief of the village. I could feel the emotion of the chief as he told his past to kiro. I love the grandpa and grandson relationship that they have between them. The only criticism that I have personally, I don't see the reason of identifying who is speaking. I don't think you need to integrate "(Kiro)" after each dialogue because I can understand who is talking with the flow of the story.

It definitely deserves 5 stars. Now for honest opinion time. The commas and punctuations are sometimes misplaced but I don't mind that all as it doesn't decrease the reading experience. I like Kirohshi's personality and how he accepted and handled everything around him when he got transported. Even if the characters are still only secondary and background characters, I still love them. The story has great potential for an Isekai and I will definitely continue reading it until it finishes. Absolutely recommended. P.S: that sudden dark tone at chapter 4 hit really hard and heavy. It reminded me of Goblin slayer so much

Even though I just read till third chapter, but it is evident that the author is placing a lot of potential in this novel. The story development is in pace. You are doing a great job! Keep up with your hard work! All the best.

Wow... That was cool!! The synopsis gave a clear idea that it was a system based novel. This was my first time reading a boy actually got transmigrate into another world ( coz till now I read system comics which sent girls to other worlds) so this slight change piqued my interest . The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it. All in all author did a great job and looking forward to read more.

This is for the review swap, and I will be giving an honest review and not just any random one. I have read four chapters so far, (Greasy Grass) My review: There are a total of nine chapters so far, and as always, I will rate the stability of updates five stars. I don't mind if it has a slow or fast update since it really takes a long time to make a chapter that your readers will love. As for the writing quality, I have not noticed any misspelled vocabulary and typos. The author has a unique writing style. For me, the dialogues are well-thought and genuine. So far, I have no complaints in this category. For the story development, it seems smooth so far. It's not that fast nor not that slow, therefore this category will also be given five stars. Character Development is decent. I like how the author gets to the point and not describe every single thing just to boost word count. A lot of authors do that only to reach the 1500 word count. Aside from this, I have noticed that the description is vivid to the point I can portray what the author wants me to portray in my mind. The descriptions tickle my imagination. Overall: Fives stars are served!!! This is one book with a great potential!

After reading this web novel for a week. This is my honest review, for the reason why I gave it 5 star rating, because I can feel the time and effort that the authors gave on this book. from time to time , I could see the few grammatical errors has been fixed. Some of them were typos but nonetheless, the author is fixing it. Plot - Transmigration MC - Regular Senior High school student. Pace - Normal Stability - Everyday Quick Synopsis. A regular High school boy named Kirohoshi, was transported to the World of Sword and Magic. Facing the unfamiliar world without knowing what awaits from the future, Charging bravely as he overcomes the challenges in this new life. Standing upright, overcoming the hurdle from the Another world!

Pace - Normal Story - Transmigration to another world. Grammar - It wasn't that bad, the is a few mistake, but can be fixed later on. Word Vocabulary - It can be Improve, through time. Stability - Everyday Overall the story is nice, has a decent pacing. It is slice of life.

If the other is a free review, mine is a real one. Well, It is might be early for me to judge the novel as a whole with only a few chapters. Nevertheless, The Isekai trope isn’t your common trope. MC - Is a Normal Senior Highschool boy. Not an Otaku or a NEET or an Old man. The way he was transported is a common way in any Isekai WN, but at least he wasn’t a type of MC who will just accept everything like ”Oh I was transported Into another world hewlp.” He wasn’t like that. Because of his background as a normal person. His reaction is fitted for his characterization. Now for the plot. The story development, Is not fast but isn’t slow either. You can say, It is a normal pace story. The Grammar wasn’t that bad, there is no big grammatical error, I haven’t encountered one yet. Overall, Good read! Go give it a try. -Bone to the world Is here!