Reviews of Becoming Legend by Neorealist - Webnovel

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Good writing. Minor grammar mistakes, unnoticeable. The flow of the story is smooth. Solid world building so far. Slow yet not too slow. Promising story, and the author is proactive. Try it, maybe this is your cup of tea.

Because ur story has high emotional rollercoaster rides. There are very positive characters and they are self efficient and motivated. We can read these chapters with smile on your face and positively in your heart.

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mc tem centenas de anos de experiência de combate e muitas habilidades, uma máquina fria e assassina. mas como sempre acontece, ele age igual um babuíno e não usa nem 10% do tem e sempre se mete em problemas. recomendo humildemente que não leia isso

It seems interesting I've not read it yet tho just read the first and last part(I justwantspoiler) chapters and I'm hook and confused anyway I've got to read this next to my list cuz my hands are full I added you on my library (Add more Chapters tho Please) idk😍

thumbs up. good reading. will read again, need more edits story so good so far. good job author. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Story is extremely fragmented, repeated perspective changes that don't really develop the story, repeated memory skips to different times without warning or reason. Trying to read this is like trying to pay attention after taking a heroic dose of mushrooms and you're at the peak.

So i have really enjoyed this story. There are some issues with typos . most of the ones i have notice are where two words get crammed together i.e missing the space between them. Some time is will take me a second to figure out the word i am reading is not really a word but two. That being said, the story is well written. At points have found myself so engaged and not wanting to stop reading that i have lost half a day. The only negative i have found, is the same for all the stories on WN that are not completed yet, and that is having to wait for the next chapter to be released. I look forward to the stories continuation.

Author I have a question if you can answer it I will be happy! Is there a romance in this novel? TKeep it up and thank you nevertheless. ♥♥♥

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First of all it seems interesting I've not read it yet tho just skimming the first few chapters I think the grammar,spelling,or whatnot need to be edited idk english is not my first language but I can tell if it's comfortable to read or not Lastly, author what's the MC alignment? good, neutral, evil?

Only at chapter 39 atm but so far its a refreshing story with decent character building and for now a nice little world. . .

Wow! your book is amazing! Adventures is my favorite genre. I hope got to learn more about magics. Kinda excited to read more of this chapter. Keep it up the good work author!

So the story goes like this...... ch:1 . . . . . . . . so on .... . ch:300 hope u got that one 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 so the story here is a bit peculiar and i dunno but i find that much intersting than some of i've read b4(wont give an e.g. though!) the story till the 3rd century is well proped, quality designed but after sometime the protagonist seems somewhat underpowerd considering his situations but that ain't so, his powers are just not that matured to the point of the current word. Also the background, fight scenes and the pov are top notch. so if the readers that r abt to strt it by asuming they'll get a broken op character from the start u will be disappointed. Give this novel a read for some chs b4 judging and i think this will b filling for everyone's plate.🙂

a young man, whose name is unknown, awakens from a dream of the death of his master. He leaves his house and ventures into the forest to find his master and is shocked to find him dead. He reads a note on the body of his master, which speaks of dark, evil monsters known as the Corruptors. He is then attacked by one of them and is knocked unconscious. He awakens some time later, where the elder of his village sends him off on a journey to find a magical sword called the Mageblade, the only thing with the ability to destroy the Corruptors. Along the way, he finds the ghost of his master, who points him in the right direction. Eventually, the young hero finds the dungeon where the Mageblade is usually kept. But waiting for him is the same Corruptor who killed his master and knocked him out, who reveals that they destroyed the Mageblade. After killing them, the hero acquires the first piece of the shattered Mageblade. He then continues his journey, discovering more magical spells, and is guided by his deceased master. Eventually, after having assembled the Mageblade, his master confronts him one last time and sends him to another dimension called the Worlds End Keep. He battles a doppelgänger of himself, The Master of Chaos, the lord of the Corruptors. After vanquishing his foe, the game ends, but scrolling text tells the story of how he became the guard of the King of Florennumn(A city featured in the game), but eventually went back to his quiet life in his home village. . . . . . . . . . . . . You can even see his armor and the mageblade. . . . .. . . . .. hahahaha just kidding.

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theme, story line were very good. but the description was very bad. eg: if the MC has a scene to open a cap on bottle. it is enough to say " MC opened the cap of bottle". But the writers describes as " MC touched the cap. then holder the cap on to parallel sides with thumb and forefinger. He then applied torque to rotate the cap......blah....blah...blah........" making the whole story boring.

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just how many clones are there of 179 or Ned and when will there real use of magic start?. He has pure magic then anyone in the world but can't use it. that kinda suck.

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This novel is very good. amazing fighting. magic and technology combining very well and characters are also written very well. world background is amazing too. But the story has a little flaw and I'm not gonna spoil you. Read it yourself 😂😂 Ohhh and also put your seat belt on. It's gonna be a bumpy ride. Sometimes it might jump into hyperspace 😂😂😂 Good luck fellow reader

Started reading this, haven't gotten that far, about 20 chapters in now, but have given up due to the grammar. There were just too many cases of wrong pronouns, mixed tenses and then weird cases of stating something with the name of the item used, e.g. The masters sword, with the author then right afterwards asking what it was, even though the MC has been using swords his whole life.

Gah...this was a miss for me. I tried to stick it out but, I just couldn't. Too many ups and downs got me twisted. I just couldn't get into the rhythm of the story.

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The book is good no doubt about it Good job The problem is the mc he's not getting strong at all he's getting weaker every chapter 2ndly his reasonings is so flawed it's borderline stupid like he forgets that he used to b an old soul 00179 3rdly the pure mana requiment hollow thing makes no sense at all his body was made by the best of the best in the world but took him 12year to absorb miniscule mana am like wtf. Without all this inconsistencies this book would b great I still recommend it.

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One of the best novel i read on this platforn and its still developin in quiet a good way. i hope its a long story 😁. keep up the good work neo from matrix 😇🤣 lol me