Sometimes it feels a little rushed, and there's no real stability of updates. Other than that, this is a pretty good story. I hope MC stays in the mass effect world longer, not just 2:3 chapters more as the author mentioned. And let those Salarians die in the reaper invasion. Perhaps make it a Harem.? Anyway, that's what I hope for in this story, and I recommend everyone to read it. It's pretty amazing.
La historia esta buena pero tiene 2 cosas muy molestas
1. Las charlas no están marcadas y aveces no sabes quien dijo que
2. Aveces entre relatar algo como un suceso pasa directamente a como si estuviera diciendo el futuro no hay forma de identificar cuando de un monólogo de pensamiento salta a una descripción de salto de tiempo
Estas dos cosas hicieron que la lectura fuera difícil aveces estaba leyendo y resultó muy errático, sería bueno tener en cuenta
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Oh boy, well the story is ok, the writing style is a bit more in the way of tell not show at least in the first few arks. some arcs are realy short others like the Avatar ark are extremely drawn out. The quality gets better the longer you read but I'm gonna be honest most of the travels don't realy feel that fun except for the pokemon one and that one was very short, it's more like The mc thoes a Job or something that he does not realy enjoy. So why even travel? why not go back when you are not realy having fun?
The GOT Arc was a work ark
The Academia ark was a Punishment ark
Avatar was again more or less just work from start to finish, shure he gets stronger and all but he still feels weak and he lacks purpose for gaining this power.
like I said the MC doesn't seem to have fun at all, and I don't have fun reading about this then, it's like someone tells you about his workday, it's at best interesting but not realy entertainment.
So yeah is the writing quality good? Yes it is. But did I enjoy the story as a whole? sadly not really, the MC lacks fun and motivation to do what he does, like it is now it seams pointless to me.
It was an amazing story and I was a loyal follower of the story but when you got to the Avatar bit it started going iffy at the ending you Completely lost me as a reader when you had the two girls follow the Mc but other than that it is a great story I would recommend it to anyone.
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It has a bit of a rough start and the Pokémon arc was written strangely, it got interesting to me when he went to the game of thrones world, which was right after the Pokémon arc, the Mha arc was really good, and the avatar arc was good too, I just wished he learnt more types of bending, overall I really like this novel, it has a great rate of updates and I quite enjoyed it, hoping here he goes to the Naruto verse, it would really mesh well with story, and maybe even he could go to marvel or Dc eventually. Good job author-sama 👍😁👌
although there are a few typos and grammatical errors that make me a little irritated/lost the story itself is good and the author is improving at his storytelling rapidly compared to the start. the ATLA arc is my favorite so far! Keep up the good work Author-Sama!~
The story is extremely fast and the battles when it comes to Pokemon do not have any feelings and emotions at all. The descriptions are not that vivid in the battles so it was hard to comprehend. It more of a "tell" rather than "show" with many "I did this..." and "I did that..." kind of stuff. Though my review may be harsh, I encourage the author not to drop but to continue writing this since you have a lot of readers. Just improve your writing style and I wish you the very best! Add more emotion to it and rather than saying I went, I do, try to show it instead like the "show not tell" mechanism. This is a constructive review and of course it has positives too. Though there are many grammar mistakes, it stands out from the other Pokemon fanfics that I have read which has more grammar mistakes than this so that's one star up for writing quality. If you are having a hard time for grammar then I suggest you use grammarly.
Really am enjoying this Fan Fiction. The First Pokemon act is pretty slow but it picks up in the Game of Thrones and MHA acts. The Avatar act is so far amazing as well. The only problem is there aren’t enough chapters to read.
I'm kinda stuck here, I want to rate it lower because most of it is not that great, but the avatar arc just seems really good. If I was a reasonable person, I would wait for more to rate it, but I'm not that patient. Hopefully the quality keeps up. One thing that's great (maybe perfect, I skipped a lot), is the grammar and spelling. Too many stories just hurt to read with authors that have a grossly insufficient knowledge and/or experience of English. No one should have any problems trying to understand what the author is trying to convey, which I appreciate.
Cthulhu approved, jokes aside is an amazing story love the story telling a little like a dairy and kinda of boring in the beginning buuuuut trust me it gets way but just tough it out for a few chapters.
summon Cthulhu "Ph'nglui mglw'nafh Cthulhu R'lyeh wgah'nagl fhtagn!"
somnia aeternae vocare possit aeternam tenebrarum obscurum.
ut omnes moriuntur magnificentiam aeternae adorare.
I was gonna rate it 3.5 stars, but the quality DRASTICALLY improves from the MHA arc and it becomes very good! The first arcs are a bit written like a diary, which is weird, but at the MHA arc, the writing style completely changes!
Hi, First of all i want to say that the new vantage point you give to the readers, feels like an extremely fresh picture, i enjoy a lot reading it. I had read like 15 Fan Fictions (transmigration, reincarnation, World traveling etc...) that had Excelent Reviews and a lot of views, but the one that I had enjoyed the most is this.
Just keep your way to see the things; because you're amazing
I only got to chapter 6 and had to call it quits on the fact it's less of a story and more of a brief description of what's happening. The pokemon fights aren't even explained it's just 'the gym was focused on rock so with my plant and water it was an easy win' not going into detail to explain the fights. All in all it reads like I'm reading the MC's daily diary.