Hi, First of all i want to say that the new vantage point you give to the readers, feels like an extremely fresh picture, i enjoy a lot reading it. I had read like 15 Fan Fictions (transmigration, reincarnation, World traveling etc...) that had Excelent Reviews and a lot of views, but the one that I had enjoyed the most is this.
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I only got to chapter 6 and had to call it quits on the fact it's less of a story and more of a brief description of what's happening. The pokemon fights aren't even explained it's just 'the gym was focused on rock so with my plant and water it was an easy win' not going into detail to explain the fights. All in all it reads like I'm reading the MC's daily diary.
Really good chapters.
And story.
I really like this story.Really good chapters.
And story.
I really like this story.Really good chapters.
And story.
I really like this story.
Great to see the update.
Cant wait to read more chapters.
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Another good chapter.
Really good chapter.
Cant wait to read more.Another good chapter.
Really good chapter.
Cant wait to read more.Another good chapter.
Really good chapter.
Cant wait to read more.
I cant wait to read more. Really nice author.I cant wait to read more. Really nice author.I cant wait to read more. Really nice author.I cant wait to read more. Really nice author.I cant wait to read more. Really nice author.
Really good chapter.
I am liking the story.
I can't wait to read more.Really good chapter.
I am liking the story.
I can't wait to read more.Really good chapter.
I am liking the story.
I can't wait to read more.
Looks good.
Story has potential.
Cant wait to read more.Looks good.
Story has potential.
Cant wait to read more.Looks good.
Story has potential.
Cant wait to read more.
Benihime06