Reviews of Only For Her by taxi_pineapple - Webnovel

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Hello, sorry I’m getting to this so late for our review swap. I’ll explain each category and why I rated the way I did. Please note that I rated at like ch 6, so my rating might not be accurate to later parts of the story. Writing quality: I gave a 2/5 here. It was understandable most of the time with only a few comma mistakes, tense changes, and some strange phrasing. Let’s say that I took a point off for minor issues and phrases. Things like “I snapped out.” Rather than “I snapped out of it.” Another point was lost for dialogue punctuation and having multiple speakers in one paragraph! Ahh! That is a headache by itself. The last point was lost for vague descriptions where I didn’t know what was going on at all. Things like “He put is hand.” Where did he put his hand? Who is he? Ahh! What’s happening! Stability of updating: 5/5. Write as often as you want. Story Development: I said 3/5. There were aspects I really liked, like the development of the present plot along side details about the MCs past that are slowly revealed. You go to a place that has significance in her past and learn about that part of her past along with the present story line. Unfortunately, other things were not as well done. There was a short interaction with a man in the rain. They said maybe two lines each, and she seemed to be wildly in love with the guy. Also, after seeing him at the hospital, she suddenly thought he may be a murder. That story line was confusing, along with the necklace part. She sees a girl (who was attacked) with the same necklace as her. She also thinks this girl might be a murder. We don’t even know anything about her necklace! That type of stuff was -1 point to me. Character Design: I gave 2/5, but that might change later. Basically, none of the characters were very memorable. There was a big info dump with facts about each character in chapter 2 or 3, but it wasn’t very relevant to what was going on. The narrator was also interrupted, even though the story was being told in the past tense. Very strange. That’s a side note though. The issue is that I didn’t remember all of the characters and their strange fact or two. It was all mentioned so fast that it’s hard to keep all of it straight and remember it. The characters also didn’t create an impression on me (other than the MC). They haven’t really appeared much, so I’m even more likely to forget about them. Might as well not introduce them until they are going to do something. Last, there was a lack of descriptions and personality. I didn’t feel like I connected with any characters. I’m not saying we need an info dump about them and their appearances, but small things. Maybe the MC talks quietly because she is nervous about people noticing who she is. Maybe she had dark hair but dyed it blonde to avoid her past. Things like that make characters more relatable. World Background: It’s the real world, which helps you, but there was a lack of detail. Again, just small things. What does she have on her desk? Is the street brightly lit or dark? Give some details to set the scene when we go somewhere. Not much is needed, and you did give the city and such, so I went with an average 3/5. It’s an interesting concept! You should keep going with it. I like the romance-mystery theme!